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(2 replies, posted in Songwriting)

VERSE 1:

She's Got problems
She's Just trying to make it through
I wish that i could comfort her
i wish that she could see that i knew
what she's going through, i understand
she shouldn't have to meet this harsh demand
She deserves better...

CHORUS:

She says that no one cares
that no one understands
i only wish that i could let her know
i care so much and
shes so beautiful, so beautiful
but she thinks otherwise
She's so beautiful, so beautiful
Yet she listens to the lies
God, someone save her
She doesnt desrve to die
on the inside, it just doesnt seem right
Shes so beautiful, so beautiful
but she thinks otherwise
She's so beautiful so beautiful
I cant let her listen to the lies

VERSE 2:

Shes got friends but
she wonders if they care
i wish that i could comfort her
i wish she could know that i
will be there for her,
ill be there till the end
She shouldt have to think
that i don't understand
I'll give her better...

CHORUS:

She says that no one cares,
that no one understands
i only wish that i could let her know
i care so much and
shes so beautiful so beautiful
but she thinks otherwise
shes so beautiful so beautiful
yet she listens to those lies
God, someone save her
she doesn't deserve to die
on the inside
it just doesn't seem right
she's so beautiful, so beautiful
but she still thinks otherwise
shes so beautiful so beautiful
I'll take away the lies

Bridge:

She says that no one ever cared, or gave a shit at all
Why cant she understand that, I'll help her break the fall

[PIANO] She's so beautiful, so beautiful
she deserves a better end
She's so beautiful, so beautiful
her broken heart i'll mend [PIANO END]

CHORUS:

She says that no one cares
that no one understands
i only wish that i could let her know
i care so much and
she's so beautiful so beautiful
but she thinks otherwise
shes so beautiful so beautiful
why does she listen to the lies?
God, someone save her
she doesnt deserve this death
on the inside, i know you'll say it isnt right
shes so beautiful so beautiful
but she thinks otherwise
shes so beautiful so beautiful
i wont let her listen to the lies

[PIANO UNTIL END]

She is so beautiful, much to beautiful to lie
Shes more than beautiful, this i wont deny
i won't let her keep beating herself up
ill help her get back upon her feet
ill die for her, be there till the end
because she is my beautiful, my beautiful...

end. So ya tell me what you think, if youve got any advise to make it better thatd be great.