Sorry I didn't get to recording yesterday, my young lady's sis came to visit, and is still here. Nothing got done, maybe tonight.
jerome is right about the copyright, and I like posting new stuff on forums, not only is it in print, byt we are all witnesses to the date. Internet is really good for that. Used to be you had to prove it's date, and no one else knew. 
1 2007-09-03 22:06:06
Re: The hell you put me through- lyrycs that need chords (17 replies, posted in Songwriting)
2 2007-09-02 11:00:46
Re: The hell you put me through- lyrycs that need chords (17 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Here is my rough version, I kinda like to play "song doctor" It needed to be shorter, so I boiled it down. I hope you like what I've done, the tenses didn't all match in your version, and it ran way too long. The music to it is down, backing tracks, plus bass & drums. It's after 5:00am, I need to sleep. I will try to record the guitars and vocals tomorrow, time allowing. If you think of "Good Hearted Woman" while you read it, it is similar. The bridge is a bit different. I'll send the music as soon as I can. I hope I didn't screw it up too much 
We may have a collaboration if you like what I've done.
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This Hell You're Puttin' Me Through
by: last_rebel & prsings
VERSE 1
Well I sho' don't deserve this hell you've been puttin' me through
I 'm losin' my mind trying to figger what I oughta do
I'm tired of your talkin' and I'm tired of walking back to a devil like you
While you're throwin' more fuel on this hell you're puttin' me through
VERSE 2:
One minute you love me the next you're cursing my name
How can I win when your rules are never the same?
And the way you keep fannin' the flames is turnin' my soul and black and blue
now I'm through pretendin' so baby I'm endin' this hell you're puttin' me through
BRIDGE
I'll bet you you think the smoke you keep blowin is puttin' these tears in my eyes
But this ain't no joke the way you've been cheatin' and coverin' up with your lies
So far you've been dealin' but I've got a feelin' the deck's about to get changed
Now you've had your fun, keep all you've won but deal me outa your game
VERSE 3
When you're doing the choosin' I always end up somewhere way down the line
But you just started losin' cuz I'm the one choosin' this time
Yeah and I'm choosin' freedom, the good times I've been needin' and that might not set well with you
But I'm tired of slow cookin' in this hell you're puttin' me through
Yeah I'm tired of slow cookin' in this hell you're puttin' me through
3 2007-09-02 05:47:35
Re: The hell you put me through- lyrycs that need chords (17 replies, posted in Songwriting)
I got a Waylon feel right away, played in E. Waylon is never really very far from the blues anyhow. I like what I've got so far, but I've only figured out the one verse. I'll try to work it up and send it to you in a few days.
I'll "doctor" the lyrics too if you don't mind, I see some places where it really doesn't fall off my tongue like it should, but very good all-in-all. You can always throw it out if you don't like what I do.