thank you guys. I'm glad it made you smile. If you think about it lots of thngs in life are controversial, if we were all the same the world would be boring i spose.
A toff is a snob who thinks he's a cut above the rest of us because he has money,usually born into money kind a thing.i live in the country where in the village there are a few millionairs,they walk around with their nose up in the air as tho they're sniffing something out,then look down on those who they think are lower class than they are,they also wont allow a fish and chip shop to trade in the area as it brings the area down.can you get that-a chip shop surely the rich want a traditional english chippy dinner from time to time?. Any way not sure what you call this in america.
By the way i've just realised that on the 3rd line in the last verse it should have been snob,what can i say - my computer didn't sense the 's', never mind shall i leave it as it is or change it as thats quite harsh.

take care dx

thank you for your comment on my song,i write my music both ways,but it is harder finding chords to a pattern you have already worked out in your head so most of the time i now pick some chords and play them together then pick the vocal to suit the chord.but then my playing is not brilliant i just do it for background sound.

power to the foxes. d x

ta for your messages,

of course i wouldn't want to see people killed. the song is a joke and yes the lyrics are angry but they need to be as no one listen's. I'm just saying this as it's been banned but they still feel they have the right to do whatever.when i sing this song it's not hate running through me it's laughter,laughter at the sheer audasity that i had the nerve to actually write it and so would just love to see the faces of these people if i sang it in front of them,then i would just say thank you for your time and smile. (And to eclipse917 - for goodness sake i dont want to see people killed but then again i dont want to see animals killed either. what makes the human species so special-intelligence in some ways but if we were that intelligent we wouldn't be killing for fun surely.also i wrote a song about a child dying to war after watching hotel rwanda,so i'm as much for humans as i am animals.why cant we let the poeple and animals be and let the planet evolve naturally.if you play the song in the chords iv'e done you can clearly hear that it's for fun as it's such a cheesy tune.go on try it make sure to sing the second line of the chorus in a posh english accent.oh and as i said i wouldn't have a gun.)

here's my little protest banner:
HEY STOP THE KILLING! dont step on that snail.(save planet earth.)they should have used this song as part of their appeal for the documentary. what do you think?

ok maybe not.

take care all. luv d.l.c x

cheers for the message, i'm not a preacher and i dont hate the rich,jealous maybe i just think that some of them could do somethig better with their time.i'm not so much angry i just feel very sorry for those poor animals and even more so for the toffs,i wrote the song as a bit of a joke really as i was watching a documentary,i just thought it would be a great song to sing in an english country pub full of these people. hey nothing wrong with fishing,id love to go fishing-deep sea, but as i said if you intend on eating it it's a bit different, but i would probably be inclined to put it back too,as i dont mind eating it but i dont want to kill it and prepare it myself as i'm sqeemish. god if i had money i would buy me and my hubby a big boat.but no gun.

donna

thank you again james. it was tongue and cheek,i'm not politcal nor am i into protesting or anything, but i do think people should only hunt if they intend to eat what they catch. it's not for fun,playing real sport like football,tennis,netball,baseball is both healthy and fun. this is why a lot of our creatures are disapearing because of ignorance. but thats just my opinion as i said i'm not a protester.  thanks again.

dx

hi emm, me again. see every one is being positive, so you need to be too. as you said you;re only 12, but the fact that you've started is good. i got very embarrassed when i wrote as a teenager,so much so that i threw them away, so please dont do that will you.now i'm a mum and i've grown up i dont get so embarrassed. if you're that shy about it just put it to one side in a private folder and then when you're ready in a few months/years bring it back out to share. any way if your myspace is private and nobody can see what you look like on here why be so woried hun? go for it and if someone does bag you dont take it too personally just ask that clever cloggs to show you their work, then write a song about them dissing you.

anyway take care and keep going. donna x

no i think its good so far would like to see more, have more confidence. d x

i really like the words,mine always seem so simple. maybe get someone to do the chords for you then post it with them id love to hear how it sounds. dlc x

hi there,
            each person finds their lyrics in their own way,sometimes i just sit and go through some chords until i like how they sound together,then pick a topic ie love/death/seasons/kids/money and just try to put the words to the chords.sometimes i find the tune first then keep that tune till i find lyrics later.but i started by writing lyrics and singing them in a tune i wanted to myself untili found chords to them , i rarely do it this way now as i only did it before because i could'nt play guitar.i still dont play too greatbut enough to get by. Some people like to make their words rhyme like me,some dont i spose it's preference,i just find it hard making my songs sound good without a rhyme- perhaps i should try that for my next song.some say that my songs tend to be quite long but thats just because i dont want to get off the mic at open mic night-at least i'm honest.i listen to other peolpes songs and somtimes it inspires me to write.My hubby recenly said your songs are all love songs why dont you think of somink else but it shows how much attention he pays as they're not.you have to write what your'e feeling ie passion/sadness it does not have to be about you,just somink you are thinking about ie (i wrote one about losing a child to war after watching hotel rowanda.) i just wrie and hope peolpe like them. dx