right!!
firstly
how does james know scrimpy is alex? ( yes iam drunk and maybe missed scrimmpy signing this but i have looked 3 times and still cant see the name alex!!) lmao
pmsl
ok, alex/skimp,
You say you think we might think it is crap!!! not at all, anfd to tel lyou the truth right now, right here, I never read all of the song, but what is good is you have music to it, words and lyrixcs and made the effort to write it down, and obviousl yyou have a tune in your head for it, so whether anyone here thinks it is good or not is not an issue.
You have wrote a song, and hopefully you have wrote a song that you like and that is the biggest part of song writing,
( i have said this before, and will probably say it several time again)
As david Bowie says, if you write a song ans you like it then someone in the wolr dwill like it too. You will not be the only person in the world that likes your sonprobklem now is trying to find a few hundred thousand people to buy it to make money from it,.lol
I write a lot of songs, more than i post in hrere and that I post in youtube, some I like but I tihnk others wont like it so I dont bother posting anywhere ( yes!! I should listen to my own advice)
I will go back and read your full song now.
and someone ( james or roger) said it was a bit morbid????? wtf???? nothing wrong with morbid songs, I am an extremely big gfan of pink flod and they have quite a few very successfull morbid songs ,lol
so if morbid songs is all you can write then carry on writitng exceleent morbid songsd.
lol
ffs, i could go on for another hour or so on this but i am wanting to go play pool online
so
bye
Kenb