Hi Ken aka UYK. Hopefully these words can help you finish off your song.
When i was young
everything was lots of fun
but since the passing of the years
there is nothing to allay our fears
our kids are safe or so we think
but that is only if we can watch them
from the safety of the kitchen sink.
times have changed all around
sometimes it is safer
to keep them around in our own suburban ground
201 2008-12-24 15:14:46
Re: Cotton wool children. Written by Ken Godwin (2 replies, posted in Poems)
202 2008-12-23 09:28:22
Topic: Africa Crying (1 replies, posted in Poems)
I am battling with this one as well. Could the musos on the site turn this into something other than a ballad which is what I have landed up doing again using the same few chords once more? Many thanx.
AFRICA CRYING
SEE AFRICA CRYING
DESPOTIC RULERS OF THE SOUTH
SEE BABIES DYING
THE RULERS DON’T KNOW PAIN
SEE AFRICA DYING
ALL FOR POLITICAL GAIN
PEOPLE FLEEING BY THE MILLIONS
NEVER TO RETURN AGAIN
POSSESSIONS NEVER SALVAGED
ALL FOR GREED AND GAIN
SEE BABIES DYING
AFRICA BURNS WHILE CRYING
BIG BLACK CARS AND FACES
DRIVING OVER DEAD AND DYING RACES
SIMPLE MEN AND WOMEN
FEEBLE BABIES CRYING TOO
ALL OF MY POSESSIONS-NOW BELONG TO YOU
AFRICA DYING AFRICA CRYING
MY PROUD NATION HAS JOINED THE DEAD AND DYING.
203 2008-12-23 08:58:36
Topic: Marching off to War (2 replies, posted in Poems)
See the fine young men
marching off to war
brainwashed killers
to the very core
trained to fight, trained to kill
drained of their blood
never to refill
sailing ships, flying planes
devastation reigns
over all terrains
seas and deserts are not spared
broken souls and bodies
cannot be repaired
old men far behind the trenches
are the ones who the war declared
safely behind teak benches
pens ready for another fight
glorious war
in you we delight
old men lament
peace has been declared
the war is over
our profit is being prepared
amongst our politicians
to be shared.
I have been working on my ''scribbeling'' and putting chords to them but I seem to be on a one dimensional track. Everything lands up as a ballad and the same few chords are used over and over - hopefully this ''poem'' can be turned into something with a bit more flair than I seem able to create.
204 2008-12-22 13:07:46
Topic: Broken Arrow (1 replies, posted in Songwriting)
BROKEN ARROWUndefined
205 2008-12-22 11:56:11
Re: Happy 50th Anniversary! (5 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
Far out man - really groovy. I think i'll get my copy of that outasight movie WOODSTOCK on the dvd player and relive the good ole' days. I still have a tie-dye t-shirt in my drawer - it's for special - REAL special occasions. eg 60 plus birthdays. lol
206 2008-12-18 18:29:55
Re: BASS (25 replies, posted in Recording)
Hi Russell - when you are ready to get cookin' on ''The Poets Rebellion'' let me know - the ''lyrics'' are already written on my notepad and waiting to be released.
207 2008-12-13 07:56:33
Re: Global Kerlabborashun Band (27 replies, posted in Recording)
Hi to all respondents - thanks for the comments. My suggestion is that no existing Chordian work is used - then no toes can be stepped on - legally or otherwise. The lyricists can be asked to submit work on preselected subjects eg. anti drugs, anti war ballads, once submitted the musos - that's you guys - can select which ones you like and then kick them around until you have something useable, that way ALL works on the CD will be voluntary/donated. This will all be on computers so it is then irrefutebly a donated work. The bulk of all the work will fall on the shoulders of you guys, but you are all very experienced so I think that this project is a definite possibility.
208 2008-12-12 18:38:16
Topic: Global Kerlabborashun Band (27 replies, posted in Recording)
Now that the ''Global Kerlabborashun Band'' seems up and runnin' when do you think the first CD will hit the streets - the world awaits.
209 2008-12-07 12:13:30
Re: Poetry (12 replies, posted in Music theory)
Surely this is what the site should be about - musical collaberation between MUSICIANS who know what they are doing and are working together to achieve an end result. I don't have any where near the expertise of the writers but I am fascinated by the discussion and am looking forward to the end result. ps I personally think a ballady/dirgy vibe would work - but that may be because my writing tends to be on the mournfull side.
210 2008-12-07 10:46:25
Re: Music's Effect on Emotions (15 replies, posted in Music theory)
I would say music emanates from the soul, which is your spiritual being or core. eg Leonard Cohen I would imagine is a very mournful person - hence his style of singing and playing . If i'm feeling down some LOUD Hendrix works for me - but music definitely sets the mood of and for most people. The scientists and shrinks could and would have a field day with this.
211 2008-12-06 16:47:01
Topic: Compilation discs of Chordian work (4 replies, posted in About Chordie)
Do the admin people of Chordie ever put together compilation discs of Chordian work for public release or is there too much legal wrangling involved. There seems to be a vast file of really brilliant work available - when one considers how much rubbish is given airplay everyday I would say the world is ready for some Quality Music. It would be nice if this could happen.
212 2008-12-06 09:13:36
Re: CHALLANGE 11 (11 replies, posted in Recording)
Hi again Russell this is the second time I am posting my ''Rumpty'' efforts. The first was in the wrong place - so ''wots'' changed. These are not the most esoteric words ever written but what the hell ''it's only rock and roll, and we like it''. So here goes.
Get movin'
midnites callin'
sunshine, lousy mornin'
driving driving all day
get out of the way
clear the streets
dirty feet
i see you
dirty feet
get movin'
nobody's groovin
sly rat shootin'
at the stars
throwin' stones
shooting stars
rumpty humpty
killing cars
rumpty humpty
empty the jars
rumpty feel free
rumpty oh yeaaah
killing cars
empty jars
rumpty oh yeaaah
killing cars
With luck and a few beers maybe you'll be able to make something of this.
213 2008-12-05 07:16:56
Re: LYRICS (26 replies, posted in Recording)
Seeing as how i'm the new born in this happy family i am glad to be of service [if a little nervous]. My pens are full of ink and rarin' to go.
214 2008-11-30 17:20:48
Topic: Guitar Happiness (0 replies, posted in Songwriting)
For those about to blister your fingers - I salute you.
Six shiny strings
slinking over exotic wood
moulded for fun
crafted for pleasure
in the hands of the giver
immeasurable pleasure
in the hands of the gifted
the sounds of angels
the wonderous delight
of Gods given talent, shiny and bright
screaming on stage
weeping in sorrow
let us not forget
to practise tomorrow
travelling the world
hidden in a dark case
to burst into light
with nary a thought
about stage fright
always wonderous
always in tune
I gladly declare
I'm from Kalamazoo.
215 2008-11-30 16:12:10
Re: Political Slime & Soul Companion (8 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Hey daddycool thankx for the kind comments. Bel ieve it or not i have no tune of any kind in my head when i write. The words flow faster than i can write them so i just put them down. I also cannot sing a note remotely in tune so i tend not to ever fiddle with a guitar and my ''compositions''. I realise that this must make my efforts seem half-hearted but my writings tend to flow on poetic lines so i am happy to let superior musicians make them sound like something musical.
216 2008-11-30 15:32:15
Topic: Ode To The Elements. (2 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Old Dolly many thankx for the kind words.Your weather is lousy so maybe our sunny sunday will cheer you up. The following quattrain could be hummed/sung to a Doris Day sort of vibe.How much is that doggy in the window - ring any bells.
Blue sky, shining sun
giving warmth and hope
to everyone
shining star hidden by blue
to sing the words
for all of you
fleeting clouds
grey and blue
slithering along the cirrus highway
turning your mood
from sullen and grey
to shiny and bright
on a God given day
no clouds no rain
when the day is good
the human mood
shall set its soul
to feel and do only good
newborn babes
animals in the wood
feel alive
and howl and scream
their earthly delight
at being with one
with the planets delight
at Gods' marvellous ways
of giving pleasure
in no small measure
to all who endeavour
to love forever
the mysterious ways
of blue shiny days.
once more - no chords etc etc.
217 2008-11-30 14:54:45
Topic: The Lost Nation (4 replies, posted in Songwriting)
These words came to mind after hearing on the radio that 90% of the indiginous Red Indians were wiped out by European introduced diseases. I might be stepping on many toes here but the following also applies to Africa, Australia, New Zealand, Hawaii and any other place that was colonised i.e. invaded.
THE LOST NATION
Feathered head
Painted face
Dark red man
You had better know your place
Once you owned all of this land
Now its mine
To churn and behold
To mine and ruin
At the behest of your soul
Golden eagle
Spirit of the red man
Mighty buffalo
Furry food, spititual friend
No more to be seen
On the great open plains
Coyote and wolf
Brothers in arms
Friend of the red man
enemy of none
Spiritual companion
Friend until death
Farewell my brother
Your coat is no more
It adorns the walls and floors
Of a great big man
Who has no brains
Only a gun, bullets and might
Of how his actions
Removed you from sight.
As you see there are no chords so you all have carte blanche. I would do it in a bluesy Little Red Rooster vibe. Whoever comes up with the best rendition will get the Far Out Award.
218 2008-11-30 10:03:13
Re: "The Cracker and the Ring" (15 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Hey Roger Lord Of The Rings by Magna Carta was a very unique piece of music. It was in a class of it's own for the time.
219 2008-11-30 09:37:17
Topic: Political Slime & Soul Companion (8 replies, posted in Songwriting)
The following words came to mind one stormy winters day so i put them on paper - there are no chords - so to all the Hank Marvins out there feel free.
POLITICAL SLIME
Political scumbag, swimming in the gutter
Giving to all with a smiling stutter
with your false white gleaming smile
promising the earth to deliver nothing
lying to the old, smiling to the young
delivering nothing to every single one
slithering thru the promises of lies
governments how we despise
all your false and shallow lies
to the old weak and weary
this sad facade is old and dreary
the sun shines on hopes of gold
to prevent the fear of growing old
to stay young and be forever in the sight
of that slimy political blight
on the world of tomorrow
that will never come
for the old, tired and weak of sight
that false political smile
will force you to your knees
to bend before the mighty breeze
of that false political ease
how we hope to cherish
all of the policies that will perish
along with the political slime
that shall surely have its time
when the forces of good and just
say it is time to stop mistrust
and end the evil ways
of dangerous political days
after seeing how many happily married people there are on Chordie i thought that i would share something that i wrote for my wife - ps - i was dead sober at the time.
SOUL COMPANION
To be the woman
to see the man
how can we feel
all that is good
the mind is free the soul is kind
to the woman of my mind
who is the kind
of my soul, easy and free
the woman of mine
the spirit of style
the soul of kindred spirits
who is forever mine
the body is fine
the mind is free
the spirit is good
kind, easy and free ,,
how much my woman
I love thee.
there you have it. once more no chords .after this bit of inspiration i wrote another 18 songs poems quattrains mind rambles whatever you would like to call them.
220 2008-11-26 20:12:50
Re: "The Cracker and the Ring" (15 replies, posted in Songwriting)
A great song Roger - well done. You didn't give song lessons to Magna Carta a few decades back did you.
221 2008-11-26 19:35:14
Re: Afghanistan Deployment" (11 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
Brilliant piece of music a seriously mood setting, stirring tune. You didn't happen to write the music for the film Assault on Precint 13 did you - the original not the remake. Congrats - you hit the nail squarely on the head.
222 2008-09-18 17:25:31
Re: Tis The rain getting to us all. (22 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
Hey Old Doll blame it all on global warming. Ireland sounds remarkably like South Africa except that our banks lock everything away including most of the staffs' brains during what they call working hours .As for the rain we have had the wettest and coldest winter ever - we are supposed to be in spring and today it stormed with rain and freezing weather -. the high for the day was 15degrees. That might not be cold to some of you but for us it is COLD.Flood floods and more on the way on the upside everything is beautifully green. Roll on summer.
223 2008-09-18 09:11:25
Re: MY DOG (21 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Hey Phil a life without animals is no life at all in my book - especially dogs we have 8 on our farm. One border collie /alsatian cross and 7 malamute/timber wolf pooches. All 8 sleep in our bedroom on especially bought beds - so sometimes it really is a dogs life.
224 2008-09-18 08:38:19
Re: GOODBYE DEAR FRIEND (12 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Great song Phil and Roger i can't beleive that you are STILL messing around with things that heat up, mind you, i suppose that you can't cook with an aerosol can, or can you.
225 2008-09-18 08:22:38
Re: Cast Off by the City Lights (19 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Hey Old Doll skullhauled i have never heard that word before is it uniquely Irish or have i been asleep for the last 61 years.