Hey James - I just played this for my wife just now and she looked into my eyes and said with the utmost sincerity that she really loved your song but that it didn't remind her of our marriage at all...not one bit...and she said this straight faced....riiiiiiiiiiiight. I on the other hand know this is exactly like what we have. This song’s a hoot, dude. I know you had a great time writing it.
2,127 2007-06-15 03:36:57
Topic: Song Writing idea - From Alice and the Cheshire Cat (1 replies, posted in Songwriting)
I was looking through a Systems Engineering College Text book at work yesterday and I saw a quote in the front of the book from Alice In Wonderland by Lewis Carroll that would make a great idea for a song. To paraphrase so I don't get into any troubles with the moderator:
Alice is having a concersation with the Cheshire Cat:
She asks the Cat where she should walk to
The Cat says it depends on where she wants to go.
Alice says she doesn't care where she goes
So the Cat replies then it doesn't matter which direction she walks
Alice further explains so long as she eventually gets some where
And the Cat replies that she's bound to get some where so long as she walks long enough
Not the exact words but that's pretty much the idea
So after reading that I began to ponder how that relates to life, destinations, journeys... and really it's true. Life will take you somewhere no matter which direction you head into.
Anyway that's my idea for anyone who wants to give a go at it. I will but not tonight...maybe this weekend.
Cheers,
Jets/jeff
2,128 2007-06-15 03:19:00
Re: user names (46 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
Mines from an incident in the Air Force...no, not involving a fast plane. I got a new room mate who didn't understand my North Carolina dialect so when I said my name was jeff he heard jets...it stuck for a few years and its the only name other than jeff that I've ever been called. The signature I use is the NY Jets (American Football team or NFL in the USA) cheer I've heard (and liked) where the they spell out jets then say jets 3 times in a row afterwards. And I never was a jets fan until I got the nickname.
2,129 2007-06-14 04:49:42
Re: hats off to you (5 replies, posted in Songwriting)
I actually try to mix it up. Sometimes I'll just sit and try and think of basic ideas until I start to run dry. Other times I'll sit and finger pick some chords until I get a few that sound good together.
Lately, I'm been coming up with ideas on my commute to and from work so I have to turn the radio off to keep from losing it. When I get home I'll sing what I remember into my tuner to get the basic chords I'm looking for and then I'll try the chords, adjust as needed since chords don't sound exactly the same in your head as they do coming out of a guitar. Then I write the words as best as I remember, usually pretty quick after I get home to keep the idea fresh. I dont have a tuner at work so if I think of a song going to work I'll usually just write down the lyrics in the parking lot at work or just when I sit down to my desk and hope I can remember the music that went with them at the end of the day when I get home
What really gets a good song out of me though is when some sort of event brings on a strong emotional reaction of some sort from me. Love songs, songs about loss, songs about happiness, songs about songs...what ever really brings the deep feelings out of you usually turns out to be a great song.
2,130 2007-06-14 04:40:11
Re: 'The Truth': A Fable in Blues (13 replies, posted in Songwriting)
A great story weaved together with some funky blues chords, how sweet it is. Shoot James, this one you need to turn into a video I think. Another job well done!
2,131 2007-06-14 00:12:23
Re: Hey Referee! (7 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Thanks Badeye and yeah, this song helped a lot.
James, the other team - lordy, don't get me started on them. 18 panel and 32 panel are the types of balls used in the game. The 18 panel balls are more like volleyballs we use in the US while the 32 panel balls are the ones like the black and white poke-a-dot balls that are what most people, or at least most US people that is, think of as soccer balls.
Old Doll, you have my permission to lay it on him. Just so you know though, start with "Hey Referee" like you're trying to yell it through the back of his head and take out some of his brain matter! At least that's how I shout...err...sing it.
2,132 2007-06-13 03:40:51
Topic: Hey Referee! (7 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Many of you chordie regulars know I'm a supporter of what we call soccer in America. Well, I had an interesting game this weekend with my team who plays in an over 30s league although we are more like over 40s. The other team showed up with 5 players around 20, the youngest being 14. We asked what's up and they said that they view the league as a father and son league. Hey, I do too, so long as the father and son are both over 30 but (sigh and deep breath) we agreed to play and it got a little "chippy" as the game went on. Bottom line is we got beat bad 5-1 was the final I think but it could have been worse...I lost count at the end. I commited some nasty fouls early on in the game that kind of attracted the attention of the ref during the second half and I could do nothing without having his eyes upon me the rest of the game. So I got a little frustrated and I was thinking how to express my frustration in a song. Well here is the result and I hope you like it. The song ends on a better note than the game ended on because it's my song and I can!
Hey Referee By Jeff Gilpin
2,133 2007-06-11 03:04:02
Re: Rainy Friday (8 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Rainy Friday is now posted on my Myspace page if you want a listen:
http://www.myspace.com/stilljeffgilpin
Would love to hear what you all think, good bad or otherwise.
Jeff/jets60
2,134 2007-06-11 03:02:15
Re: The Sleepy Time Song (15 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Well keep at it - I just love to hear other people playing my songs.
Jeff/Jets
Also - Rainy Friday is posted on my Myspace page if you want a listen:
http://www.myspace.com/stilljeffgilpin
2,135 2007-06-11 01:04:36
Re: The Sleepy Time Song (15 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Hey Rhiannon, thanks- I think the trick is no to let the clunkers get you down and lord knows I've had my fair share. I think this one's pretty good too though.
2,136 2007-06-10 22:55:16
Re: The Sleepy Time Song (15 replies, posted in Songwriting)
You know: HONEY would you DO me a favor... It's slang american for weekend work your wife makes you do.
2,137 2007-06-10 20:14:30
Re: The Sleepy Time Song (15 replies, posted in Songwriting)
You guys rock! Thanks - I was stumbling along trying to find it and finally gave up because I had to go do some honey dos.
Thanks,
Jeff/jets
2,138 2007-06-10 13:19:28
Re: The Sleepy Time Song (15 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Thanks Old Doll. This is one of the hidden benefits of learning to play the guitar for me. Playing until my wife falls asleep is pretty cool for me and she seems to likes it too. My favorite comment from her when I do that is, "What song is that?" Usually it's when it is a totally made up tune. I'm going to see if I can catch a peek of "The Dreamer" somewhere on the net. Thanks again - Jets
2,139 2007-06-09 17:52:21
Re: Keep It Real (3 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Thanks Guys,
That was my intent but I'm still only at about 100 BMP so it's not way too fast although I can see it played faster. Chordie and my Chordie friends was my inspiration for the lyrics as well. The style is a bit different but I like the way it sounded and the trailing chords came from somewhere I heard them but can't remember where.
2,140 2007-06-09 05:24:11
Re: "Weep For Me" (5 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Very nice James - Pretty song for such a happy guy...It almost sounded like a political song? Was it?
2,141 2007-06-09 05:18:41
Re: My Good Friend (5 replies, posted in Songwriting)
That song is just as sweet as it can be and how fitting to someone who has been a great help to me and to all the chodie forum dwellers. Well done Rhiannon!
2,142 2007-06-09 05:06:14
Topic: The Sleepy Time Song (15 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Many nights I get to play my wife to sleep and tonight was one of those nights. The song I played was something like what's below but I lost some of it somewhere between the bedroom and the computer room. What's below is close though and not bad if I do say so myself. When I sing for her in the sleepy time song I don't usually bother with rhyming so for the verses I stayed true to that. I hope you like it.
The Sleepy Time Song By Jeff Gilpin
2,143 2007-06-08 20:36:10
Re: It Could Take a Night (12 replies, posted in Songwriting)
I'm on it James! Do you know the Indgo Girls' song Pendulum Swinger? I'm looking at doing something like that or a similiar style. Oh yeah, the song from the chorus is called Keep It Real and I posted it earlier today.
Cheers,
Jets
2,144 2007-06-08 16:31:48
Topic: Keep It Real (3 replies, posted in Songwriting)
I got the music for this first. I had an idea of coming up with good chorus chords and I think I did for this one. After that I came up with the lyrics from thinking about E-Friends and how they are still real friends.That was the basis for the idea which I became to the lyrics below. I hope you like it.
Keep It Real By Jeff Gilpin
2,145 2007-06-08 16:03:10
Re: It Could Take a Night (12 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Thanks MG - I'm posting another one is a second.
2,146 2007-06-07 11:15:31
Re: "Date My Daughter Dissection Blues" (12 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Well stated James - I don't have to tell you I feel the same about my daughter. It should be a manditory part of every daughter's first date.
Great job!
2,147 2007-06-07 04:49:22
Re: It Could Take a Night (12 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Hey James - You crack me up. I'm not writing to night but I got some ideas in the cooker I'll share:
I was thinking about how really good songs have the a catchy chorus so I was going to sit down when I have the time and come up with just the music for the chorus and then wrap the rest of the music for the song around it. Then I would write the lyrics which is usually backwords of how I work now.
Another idea was to come up with a harmony verse for Mournful Cry. I got the idea listening to some of the Indigo Girls new work that reminded me of some of the gospel harmony I grew up with (all that was on tv on Sunday morning when I grew up).
My last idea I havent started anything with yet was about a Comeback story song....nothing else with that but who doesn't love a comeback?
Anyway I'm off to bed for the night (up late again).
2,148 2007-06-07 00:32:39
Re: It Could Take a Night (12 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Thanks guys - yep - and I'll keep at it.
2,149 2007-06-06 22:30:34
Re: It Could Take a Night (12 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Hey Saba - Thank you very much - It was kind of fun to write but not so fun waking up this morning
Jeff
2,150 2007-06-06 03:41:38
Topic: It Could Take a Night (12 replies, posted in Songwriting)
This song tells its own story so I'll let it. Hope you like it....By the way, it only took me until a quarter till 12 so it was not as bad as the song makes it sound.