hi russell ,saba,helena thanks for your comments...stay cool
1,977 2008-04-06 13:25:02
Topic: t:title:little bits{/song} (4 replies, posted in Songwriting)
[C]little bits and pieces,
of[G]memories in my mind,
[F]little bits of hea-ven,
thats[C] what i see in you.
[C]bits,[F]little [C]bits,[G]bits,[C]little[G]bits.
[C]little bits of loving,
while[G]walking hand in hand,
[F]kisses sweet as honey,
those[C]little bits i like.
[Cbits,[F]little[C]bits,[G]bits,[C]little[G]bits.
[C]little bits so precious, while[G]holding you so close,
[F]means that i am smit-ten,
you've[C]captured my hea-rt.
[C]bits,[F]little[C]bits,[G]bits,[C]little[G]bits.
[C]little bits of heart-ache,
thats[G]why i love you so,
[F]little bits joined to-gether, it[C]makes the whole of you.
[C]bits,[F]little[C]bits,[G]bits,[C]little[G]bits,
[F]little bits of[C]you.
{/song}
1,978 2008-04-06 12:56:04
Re: Lips Of An Angel (6 replies, posted in Songwriting)
hi rooster is'nt love great ,sounds like you've got your chick,well done...stay cool
1,979 2008-04-06 12:49:02
Re: "Shopping Cart Cowboys" (18 replies, posted in Songwriting)
hi james nice to see you back in the posts ,i've found a local website and put some songs on ,not brilliant ,need polishing up but its a start....stay cool
1,980 2008-04-06 12:42:36
Re: Without You ( by Jerry Short ) (7 replies, posted in Songwriting)
hi gse cool song i don't get chance to try any posts,too hectic here ....stay cool
1,981 2008-04-06 12:36:48
Re: Life in the Key of D (3 replies, posted in Songwriting)
hi zurf my waistlines extended into a overhang ,only time i see my feet is if i hold my breath,a good start ,now for the ending drink a lot of coffee....stay cool
1,982 2008-04-06 12:25:41
Re: My first ever song from scratch - Advice and criticism requested (9 replies, posted in Songwriting)
hi zurf a really good contrast of lyrics can't wait to hear it,well done...stay cool
1,983 2008-04-06 12:18:04
Re: "If I Had" (5 replies, posted in Songwriting)
hi jets a cool little number ,a suggestion,{i'd spend it all" with "you}instead of on you ?...stay cool
1,984 2008-04-06 12:07:33
Re: Gnomefry. No chords yet (10 replies, posted in Songwriting)
hi gnomefry a lovely little song ,well done....stay cool
1,985 2008-04-06 12:03:05
Re: THE CHURCH ACROSS THE WAY (10 replies, posted in Songwriting)
hi russell a lovely song,sounded great too,well done...stay cool
1,986 2008-04-02 16:40:08
Re: "Love in Mind" {fiction} (5 replies, posted in Songwriting)
hi helena its knowing that you'll never make x factor but you want your recordings to be pleasant enough to be listened to, ah well we all can't be born with a golden tongue ,so we have to adapt with what we have....stay cool
1,987 2008-04-01 22:05:39
Re: "Love in Mind" {fiction} (5 replies, posted in Songwriting)
hi roger just wrote this tonight and i managed to give it a bash before i posted it ,thanks....stay cool
1,988 2008-04-01 18:52:03
Topic: "Love in Mind" {fiction} (5 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Love in Mindby Daddycool
1,989 2008-04-01 18:22:30
Re: "Hey Lisa" (8 replies, posted in Songwriting)
hi jets lovely song again,i've got two brothers and two sisters we are always helping each other ...stay cool
1,990 2008-04-01 18:11:58
Re: t:tite "Ghost train" {fiction} (9 replies, posted in Songwriting)
hi ark i was on my own during recorging onto tape but i played the tape into the computor microphone while the family was talking ,i shall have to clean them up....stay cool
1,991 2008-04-01 15:00:09
Re: t:tite "Ghost train" {fiction} (9 replies, posted in Songwriting)
thanks phill ,don't forget your ear plugs ha ha...stay cool
1,992 2008-04-01 14:58:24
Re: REFLECTIONS: the big mistake ABOUT SONGWRITING, like THE DEAD CHEATER (2 replies, posted in Songwriting)
hi doc i sometimes write the lyrics humming or singing to myself,put suitable chords in ,i mostly post before i've played it,not many mistakes but i only use basic chords so its easier to chord my songs....stay cool
1,993 2008-04-01 14:47:17
Re: new website in my area (9 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
hi evsynator look in the google bar at top of page when your on ooizit and you'll see the web address with your log on name...stay cool
1,994 2008-03-31 22:18:01
Re: t:tite "Ghost train" {fiction} (9 replies, posted in Songwriting)
hi guys and dolls it feels great to be able to transform words into music,its a first for me and enjoying the experience....stay cool
1,995 2008-03-31 22:14:14
Re: new website in my area (9 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
hi alvee33 yes i changed my web address after i had registered on ooizit . com ,i'll still post on chordie ,i don't abandon friends just to try something new ,....stay cool
1,996 2008-03-31 17:45:39
Re: in 6 minutes. (3 replies, posted in Songwriting)
hi phill thats the fastest song yet so i reackon it should be played fast....stay cool
1,997 2008-03-31 17:39:55
Topic: t:tite "Ghost train" {fiction} (9 replies, posted in Songwriting)
1.[C] Many years ago, in[G] old mexico,
The[F] train was rollin' down the[C] track,
in the still of night, as[G] it came through the pass ,
[F] they couldn't see,[G] that the bridge was[C] out.
Chorus
[F]ghost tra--in, [C]roll-ing through the pass,
[F]ghost tra--in, [G]keeps on coming back ,
at[C] this time of year, the[G] ghost train appears,
to[F] re-member the [G],of the fatal [C]crash..
2.[C] everyone on board ended[G] up in the gorge,
[F]not one walked away from the[C] wreck,
[C]but as the train goes by, there's[G] laughter inside,
'cause[F] they don't know,[G] it is their final[C] day.
chorus
[F]ghost tra--in,[C] roll-ing through the pass,
[F]ghost tra--in,[G] keeps on coming back,
at[C] this time of the year, the[G] ghost train appears,
to [F]re-member the [G]day, of the fatal[C] crash.
3/[C]each ani-vers-ary of[G] that fatal day,
you[F] will hear a rumble on the[C] track,
the ghost train appears,[G] as it's done before,
you [F]can still see it[G] to this[C] day.
chorus
[F]ghost tr--ain,[C]rolling through the pass,
[F]ghost tr--ain,[G]keeps on coming back,
at[C] this time of year,the [G]ghost train appears,
to[F] re-member the [G]day, of the fatal[C] crash.
[/song] the end.
1,998 2008-03-31 13:26:52
Topic: new website in my area (9 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
hi chordies i've just registered on this new site in derbyshire for local artists,so i've loaded some songs on there,PS.DONT FORGET YOUR EAR PLUGS,HA HA ...STAY COOL
1,999 2008-03-31 13:22:16
Re: "take a chance" (10 replies, posted in Songwriting)
hi will thanks for your comments ,i've just registered on a new local website {ooizit.com}its run for artists here so don't forget your ear plugs ha ha ...stay cool
2,000 2008-03-30 12:15:58
Re: "Viry's Song" by Liam Cleary (17 replies, posted in Songwriting)
hi liam it has a nice flow and the lyrics are well written well done...stay cool