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(6 replies, posted in Poems)

Peatle, Happy New Year to you as well.  Good bit of writing on both of these.  One thought provoking and the other light hearted.  I liked them both.     

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(3 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Quiet and simple, think we all like times like that sometimes.  Some good lines in there Peatle, "I don’t want to be in a mental frenzy where everybody is loud" and "chewing the breeze".  Nice one.     

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(6 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Very nice Jim, a thumbs up from me on this one.     

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(7 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

She`s a natural, just wow!     

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(6 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

Hiya, yep still on holiday presently so its a bit hard to be online much at the moment.     

Wow Peatle, in my opinion, that is your best yet!  Loved the lyrics, loved the style you played it in and it totally suited your voice.  That was awesome and I applaud you on this one.  Hey is that your art work as well?  It is great with the song and color's changing.   Sorry for taking so long to have a listen.   Bit hard to be on presently as on holiday.     

Any more suggestions ?     

My words suggestions are ...
Flowers
Summer
ukulele     

Looking for WORD SUGGESTIONS for FEBRUARY 2024.

WORDS that are to do with a SEASON, WORDS to do with PLANTS, or finally WORDS to do with MUSIC.

Put your thinking caps on and see what WORDS you can think of to SUGGEST. 

JANUARY 2024 FSOTM is here already! 

This month we are looking for SONGSwith any of the following WORDS.

NEW
FRESH
REBORN
GRANDAD
GUITAR
PHONE
HOME

You know the drill by now, COVERor WRITE an ORIGINAL SONG using one or as many of the WORDS you want from the list given above.

READY, SET, GO!!! 

Thanks neophytte and Peatle for the suggestions and sorry for the late start to this months FSOTM, I am away on holiday and a bit hard to be online at the moment.     

Excellent bit of song writing there Phill ,well done.   Look forward to hearing this one.     

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(10 replies, posted in Poems)

Peatle, good message in your poem "always shine your light".  Some other good lyrics in there too such as "you can not edit an empty page". 

Phill, that's another good piece of writing by you.     

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(5 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Jim, a nice one that bounced along, great lyrics.  I  hope I get time to have a go at this one.     

TIGLJK, another great song by you.   It definitely will suit being performed like "This Train".

easybeat, nicely performed and clever bit of writing with "Delivery Man" lol

neophytte, I look forward to hearing this one when its finished.     

neophytte, that really suited your voice, I enjoyed it.

Grah1,  that made me laugh, good impresson of the drunk singing big_smile     

TIGLJK,  I really like this song you wrote, very appropriate for the season.

Phill Williams wrote:

good question Brian, I've heard it said many times in films. Maybe it's the only holiday they get in the USA? I know they get lots less than us lucky Brits.

Jan mentioned I should include Hey Santa on FSOTM as it's a christmas song, I thought it was a boozers ode like Fairy Tale Of New York?     

https://soundcloud.com/iphillfine/hey-s … al_sharing

Hey Phill, when I clicked on the link, the song isn't there.     

Peatle Jville wrote:

It is great to see all the good songs on here this month. Here is my attempt at a Christmas song. Sorry about my terrible voice as usual but I hope it entertains a little bit. 
Merry Christmas everyone and Love and Peace to you all.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=S5duPgwuk18

A lovely message in your song Peatle, a message I agree with.  Nicely done, nicely performed.     

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(6 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

Amazing guitarists to watch.     

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(4 replies, posted in My local band and me)

Nicely done Phill, easy listening and fun. Loved the ending where you spoke smile  As neophytte said, how about entering it FSOTM as well.     

Great to see you entering a song again Brian for FSOTM.  I liked the message in it, "family together having a good time".     

Well done, you are putting yourself out there and following up on your talents.  Good for you smile     

Aww nicely done together Richard.  Great to see you both performing together and enjoyed the laughter at the beginning.   Eunice has a lovely voice smile     

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(9 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

Wow, glad your safe neophytte from the fires.