Great song....
Well written, performed and recorded..
I liked it..
ark
176 2014-10-04 19:10:43
Re: My song (11 replies, posted in Songwriting)
177 2014-09-29 17:45:01
Re: `Respect The Musician`bucks (3 replies, posted in Songwriting)
I`ll have a coffee thanks
Yeah i know it costs five bucks
I`ll have a beer thanks
Yeah i know it costs ten bucks
I really like the music here
But i expect that for freeTime to respect the musician
Put some money in his hatHe`s done his time
You only too happy
to pay for other things
beer food and wineTime to respect the musician
He can`t live on love
Put some money in his hatI`m sure some of u can relate to this, how about some chords eh?
Please if you have a potential song ie just lyrics without chords can you post them in the poem section as this is Chordie guidelines read stick at the top of the forum.
The songwriting forum is for completed songs and questions about songwriting in general.
Thanks
Ark.
178 2014-09-16 20:22:32
Re: The Climb (10 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Very well done Ark!
Thanks for the listen and comment Dino.
179 2014-09-14 13:09:17
Re: The Climb (10 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Great job! I enjoyed your work and was impressed by the sound.
Thanks for listening and for comment Artie it's appreciated.
ark
180 2014-09-14 08:32:03
Re: Prog Rock Wednesdays (580 replies, posted in Bands and artists)
This was supposed to be a weekly thing, but I just couldn't wait! (LOL)
May I direct you to the 1:52:00 mark for one of the most iconic songs in all of Prog Rock history ... SUPPER'S READY:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j8JkNq_Ilq8
Opinions abound about the performances of the various players, in comparison to the originals. But IMHO this group have done an extraordinary job of capturing the essence of the work, even if they don't sound like a recorded lip-synch. You'll notice that the bassist plays his guitars left-handed, but that they are strung for a right-handed person! I can't imagine having to learn everything upside down! And I also think vocalist Nad Sylvan has done a first-rate job of capturing Peter Gabriel's intensity and inflection, even if he's not identical.
Hope you enjoy this ... I certainly have!
I saw Genesis back in 1972 in a small venue with the mostly the original line up and wow I was blown away at the time. Peter Gabriel had his hair shaved at the front a very menacing look and during the set donned his now famous head gear.
A long haired Phil Collins played the drums with gusto...
Suppers Ready was and still is one of my favourite Genesis pieces I still know all the words.
The musical talent was was so oblivious collectively and individually as history proved it to be.
I enjoyed the revisit thanks. The lead singer certainly has a Peter Gabriel like voice and the musical arrangements were were very similar to original.
Great Thread Thanks.
I guess you've got ELP lined up some where...
ark
181 2014-09-13 08:16:52
Re: The Climb (10 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Thanks for the listen and comment Graham.
The piece had about 8 or 9 tracks so it was a bit tricky to fit together Jeff thanks for the listen and the comment.
(Mike Oldfield) Thats not to shabby..
Phill glad you like it. It's really only a simple melody the mixing was the hardest thing.
It's best not to stand in the way of a man and his curry...
Thanks for the listen and comment.
and thanks to all those that listened or triggered the counter over 25 they didn't comment.. and will remain nameless.....
ark
182 2014-09-11 18:29:36
Re: dont care (16 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Hi Phill
I enjoyed that. Though the content was a little depressing I thought the tone was quite upbeat and buskersque...:) The accordion sounded just right for the song.
I guess the lyrics strikes a chord (no pun intended) with the busking fraternity.
good job
Tony
183 2014-09-07 09:09:00
Topic: The Climb (10 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Hi
I recorded this a few months back and have it on ourstage. It's doing reasonably well.... well for me
Pure ambient no guitars no lyrics just a slow build of multi tracks along a theme..
best listened to with earphones or a decent sound sound system.
Just thought I share..
Thanks ark.
http://www.ourstage.com/media_items/IBS … -the-climb
184 2014-09-07 08:55:17
Re: Mother Nature's Favorite Recipe (7 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Hi jeff
The lyrics are really good thought provoking.. your quite a poet.
well done
ark
185 2014-09-07 08:49:04
Re: Evolution (5 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Sort of a throw back to the 60's kind of song...
But the lyrics I guess are timeless.
ark
186 2014-09-07 08:43:20
Re: Nuns song (14 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Hi Phill
Nice underlying melody and I liked the varying textures of guitar and keyboard echoing the main theme of the melody.
Standing alone as an easy listening piece it's good not sure where lyrics would fit in without a rewrite.
Still it's be done before.
tony
187 2014-08-24 17:45:15
Re: Booty In Your Snooty (26 replies, posted in Songwriting)
It made me smile Russ..
Nice one ahh don't you just love the internet
ark
188 2014-08-22 18:19:15
Re: My Brother's visit (15 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
Sounds a bit like my brother Russ. He was 11years older then me and I always thought he talked down to me. I really don't think he meant to but I guess it was an older brother thing and we didn't have much in common.
He passed away a couple years ago and I still don't know what I felt about him.
ark
189 2014-08-22 18:11:12
Re: song titles? (22 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
I can see your point Phill and I guess it could frustrating but I don't think a songs name has ever held the song back if it's a great one.
Bohemian Rhapsody springs to mind I don't think it's even got a hook.
Anyway just whip out your iPhone and Shazam it instant recognition mind you have to fast. LOL..
ark
190 2014-08-21 18:05:44
Re: song titles? (22 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
Juliet:
"What's in a name? That which we call a rose
By any other name would smell as sweet."
Romeo and Juliet (II, ii, 1-2)
We'll maybe that's true for songs are names really so important. I guess the contents are what's matters. Songs like people become their name even if perhaps the title is meaningless.
Ark
191 2014-08-20 19:18:40
Re: song titles? (22 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
I usually have no trouble naming songs with lyrics I just call it what says on the tin simple but true for me.
Naming instrumentals songs to me are a lot harder mostly I have no clear idea what song is about though occasionally I start with a name. Some songs I've never named they just have a date. Mostly I just listen to finished song and see what pictures it paints in my mind and take from there...it doesn't always work.
ark
192 2014-08-13 18:56:12
Re: Daddycool (23 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
Congratulations daddy and all the family You all look great.
Ark
193 2014-08-13 18:50:31
Re: RIP Robin Williams (13 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
I enjoyed all Robin Williams films he was a great actor and comic genius.
I remembered laughing till I cried listening to his comic stand up routine.
So sad that such a talent was blighted with depression.
RIP Robin and thanks for the laughs.
194 2014-08-11 18:50:03
Re: Long time since my last visit... (3 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Hi snowden
Welcome back..
As to your chopro query a capital E and a lower case m enclosed in the brackets you have in your post will be ok to show minor chords.
ark
195 2014-08-03 08:56:08
Re: titles (16 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
Hi keepit
it's not set in stone but think the term Chordians is the one most used to describe Chordie members.
Welcome to Chordie.
Ark
196 2014-08-02 08:52:24
Re: The Thoughtful Commuter (17 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Another nice one Jeff.
We'll done.
Ark
197 2014-08-02 08:47:29
Re: The Big Sea (19 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Nice song Graham.
As we get older serious illness effect all our lives one way or another.
Deserves to be No.1
Well done
Ark
198 2014-05-26 09:23:20
Re: Error: "view/print songbook" (7 replies, posted in About Chordie)
What the hell is going on with this website. It is one second then down the next EXTREMELY FRUSTRATING I am sure for ALL the devoted people that use it. Who ever is in charge/OWNS this website should be kicking someones ass and get this operational WHAT A JOKE
It maybe "EXTREMELY FRUSTRATING" for you but there is no call to be rude and abusive in your post.
This site has been set up by one person who maintains it in his free time and is very mindful of how well the site runs. It's free and enjoyed by thousands of users and mostly runs problem free.
As for "Kicking someone" I know where the boot should land..
ark
199 2014-05-17 09:02:58
Re: DAGGER (36 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Hey Russ
Nearly missed this one a bit different from simmer
Another good job... rock on
ark
200 2014-05-17 08:41:37
Re: 2 new songs (3 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Hi Phill
Couple of nice tracks there very professional.
My daughter's partner has just done the speed awareness course to. I hope it works for he does drive way to fast in my opinion.
Tony