1,926

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Hey Ray and Dan - Yeah this you really need to hear and I will record it. Just getting over a cold I go traveling but  I will get to it.

Dan - I'll check out My Mind is on You. It's tough having your kids go off to the military and to war. I sure hope all this is resolved before your daughters have to go over.

Ray - I just had a wonderful trip with him visiting the wife's side of the family. I missed that side of the action as well but would have traded it in a minute to keep him from having to go.

1,927

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Just a song relating to my visit to see all my family on my wife’s side that has taken actually a little longer than ten years since I last visited them. It is somewhat of a shock to see all that happens in that amount of time and takes quite a bit of catching up. I will try and make sure I keep my visits less infrequent. I hope you like the song.

Ten Years of Changing By Jeff Gilpin


October 28th, 2007




Intro


[A] [G] [D]




Verse 1


[D]Ten years of changing while I was away


A [A]sight for my [G]sore eyes to [D]see


[D]Ten years of changing while I try to catch up


With [A]all that [G]has come to [D]be [D7]




Chorus


[G]Ten years of growing-up while [D]I’ve grown old


[A]Ten years in the world learning [D]right from wrong [D7]


[G]Ten years of changing in [D]this crazy old world


I’d say [A]ten years was [G]ten years too [D]long




Verse 2


[D]Ten years of changing meant moves here and there


In [A]ten years things [G]changed quite a [D]bit


You've [D]moving from the country into the city


While for [A]ten years I’ve [G]not had a vis[D]it [D7]




Chorus


[G]Ten years of growing-up while [D]I’ve grown old


[A]Ten years in the world learning [D]right from wrong [D7]


[G]Ten years of changing in [D]this crazy old world


I’d say [A]ten years was [G]ten years too [D]long




Verse 3


[D]Now I meet new children I’d not known before


That are [A]no longer [G]babies at [D]all


Who I [D]remember as children are now all grown up



In [A]ten years they’ve [G]grown up quite [D]tall [D7]




Chorus


[G]Ten years of growing-up while [D]I’ve grown old


[A]Ten years in the world learning [D]right from wrong [D7]


[G]Ten years of changing in [D]this crazy old world


I’d say [A]ten years was [G]ten years too [D]long




Verse 4


[D]Now if ten years from now it happens again


That I [A]stay away from [G]family too [D]long


[D]I’ll have no one else to blame but myself


For [A]getting this [G]life lesson [D]wrong




Chorus


[G]Ten years of growing-up while [D]I’ve grown old


[A]Ten years in the world learning [D]right from wrong [D7]


[G]Ten years of changing in [D]this crazy old world


I’d say [A]ten years was [G]ten years too [D]long




Verse 5


I can’t [D]get the years back but I can make up the time


By [A]trying to keep [G]better in [D]touch


As my [D]next years go by I’ll try and repair


These [A]ten years I’ve [G]missed ya’ll so [D]much




Chorus


[G]Ten years of growing-up while [D]I’ve grown old


[A]Ten years in the world learning [D]right from wrong [D7]


[G]Ten years of changing in [D]this crazy old world


I’d say [A]ten years was [G]ten years too [A]long [G] [D]



1,928

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On my vacation we stayed with my wife’s sister, Yumiko in Ayase. Ayase is one of the many cities that make up suburban Tokyo. I had the pleasure of meeting my nieces, Honika and Hisako and my nephew Yoshinori for the first time on this visit. Yoshinori is the youngest and he is like a little energizer bunny that never stops so he’s a chore to put to bed at night so I promised Yumiko to write a song that might help so here it is. If you want to learn more about Ayase here is a link and I’m sure there are more:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ayase,_Kanagawa

Ayase Lullaby By Jeff Gilpin


October 27th, 2007




Intro


[G] [D] [C] [G]


[G] [D] [G]




Verse 1


[G]It’s night[D]time in [C]old A[G]yase


[G]It’s nighttime all [C]over Tok[D]yo


[G]It’s night[D]time in [C]old Aya[G]se


And the [G]kids all know [D]where they have to [G]go


They’ve [C]all got busy days to[G]morrow


And they’re [C]futons are all laid [D]out


It’s [G]off to [D]sleep in [C]old A[G]yase


[G]Off you go [D]now but don’t [G]pout




Verse 2


But [G]Yoshi [D]wants to [C]play a little [G]longer



He’s [G]not a bit tired and [C]wants to stay a[D]wake


He [G]wants to [D]show his [C]sisters who’s [G]stronger


And [G]what difference will a [D]few minutes [G]make


But he [C]knows that he can’t [G]fight it


He [C]knows that it won’t [D]keep


[G]So it’s [D]off to [C]bed for little [G]Yoshi


Where [G]he’ll keep [D]playing in his [G]sleep




Verse 3


Now [G]all the little [D]boys and [C]girls are [G]sleeping


[G]Dreaming of whatever their [C]minds are thinking [D]of


Their [G]friends, their [D]family or [C]things that they [G]fancy


[G]Everything [D]that they dearly [G]love


[C]As quite descend on their [G]households


The [C]train rumbles through the [D]town


And [G]sleep des[D]cends on [C]old A[G]yase


As their [G]children are [D]sleeping safe and [C]sound[G]



1,929

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I just returned from vacation in Japan and was intrigued by all the music I heard over there. This song is mostly about the music and the lyrics come from me observing my wife a bit while I was over there. Anyway I hope you all like it and if anyone has a title suggestion I'm open.

Untitled By Jeff Gilpin


October 26th, 2007




Intro


[G] [Dm] [Am]


Verse 1


[Am]I saw you once a long time ago


[Dm]Lost in thought about [Am]some idea you caught


[Am]You seemed on the verge of a grin


But it [G]turned into a [Dm]frown in the [Am]end




Chorus 1


I [Dm]wondered what you were [Am]thinking of


I[Dm] wondered what had changed your [G]mood


[Am]I wondered what to say to you


But [G]I decided [Dm]not to in[Am]trude




Verse 2


[Am]Many years have come and gone


[Dm]Memories galore I’m [Am]sure there’ll be more


[Am]Today I remembered you standing there



And [G]all I could [Dm]do was just [Am]stare




Chorus 2


[Dm]What if I had walked up [Am]to you


I [Dm]wonder what you’d have [G]said


It’s [Am]difficult to know another’s thoughts


It’s [G]difficult to [Dm]know another’s [Am]head




Verse 3


[Am]Now today again I’m watching you


[Dm]And I saw you frown with [Am]no one else around


[Am]I almost asked you what the frown was for


But [G]once again [Dm]I choose to ig[Am]nore




Chorus 3


To [Dm]me it means more when it’s a [Am]mystery


As I [Dm]ponder what’s going on inside your [G]mind


[Am]What thought could ever erase you pretty smile


Here’s [G]hoping another thought [Dm]brings it back in [G]time[Dm] [Am]



1,930

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Thank you all for your kind words and comments
James I'll pass it on to him and thanks
Reb - I agree. My son volunteered and knew what he was getting into. I didn't want him to. I didn't want him to place himself in danger but he did what he thought was right and I support him on his decision, though I worry about him a lot. My son Tim is a bridge crew member in the US Army and while it is not in the most dangerous field in the military he is, like many of our sons and daughters, over there in a war zone where sometimes bad things happen and I want him home safe as soon as he is done with what I hope is his last tour there. I cannot imagine how the mothers and father of the soldiers who routinely go out on patrols keep from worrying themselves sick.
Toney - Thanks you for your comments. I could never have started writing if it wasn't for chordie and all my fellow chordie friends. I think I did a good job on this one too and like I said to Jason I plan on recording it when I get some time. I just wish I could sing it and play it exactly how I hear it in my head where I never make a mistake and am always on key. smile Gainesville is just west of Manassas and where I live is on the edge of Haymarket just off I-66. It’s almost like the mountains but not quite
Daddy - Thank you I like it too
Helena - Thank you for your words and your prayer for my son.

1,931

(8 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hey Jas - Yep, this is one I want to record as well but I really have a stack of songs I want to record I might have to pick and choose

1,932

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My son’s on my mind a lot lately with his redeployment only about a month away so here’s another song for him. I hope you like it.

You’ll Come Back Home By Jeff Gilpin


October 11th, 2007




Intro


[Bm]x4




Verse 1


The[Bm] time is almost here


That time that’s [G]filled me with [Bm]dread


Kept trying to [G]keep it out of my [Bm]head


But it keeps [A]returning[Asus4] [A]




Verse 2


Like looking [Bm]out on a foggy day


It’s all so [G]shapeless at first [Bm]glance


But when you [G]give your eyes a [Bm]chance


You’ll catch [A]details [Asus4] [A]




Chorus


It’s [D]clearer now


Closer to the [A]time


That you go a[G]way


Not for a [A]crime


Just to [D]serve


And one [A]day


You’ll come back [G]home




Verse 3


You’d [Bm]think it’d be old hat


That we’d be [G]stronger this time [Bm]round


There’d be no sur[G]prises to be [Bm]found


And that we’d be [A]ready[Asus4] [A]




Verse 4


But it’s like we’re [Bm]playing a dangerous game



Only it’s a [G]game that’s absent of [Bm]fun


Where there’s [G]nothing to be [Bm]won


Only your sur[A]vival[Asus4] [A]




Chorus


It’s [D]clearer now


Closer to the [A]time


That you go a[G]way


Not for a [A]crime


Just to [D]serve


And one [A]day


You’ll come back [G]home




Verse 5


If this [Bm]world could be made fair


I could [G]do your time for [Bm]you


[G]Double if they asked me [Bm]to


And I’d do it [A]smiling[Asus4] [A]




Verse 6


Be[Bm]cause when you’re away


Every [G]single day you’re [Bm]gone


It seems the [G]days are twice as [Bm]long


And the nighttimes [A]longer [Asus4] [A]




Chorus


It’s [D]clearer now


Closer to the [A]time


That you go a[G]way


Not for a [A]crime


Just to [D]serve


And one [A]day


You’ll come back [Bm]home



1,933

(11 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Another great one James - Well Done!

1,934

(10 replies, posted in Songwriting)

I think that's what I'll have to do and it doesn't sound weird at all.

Thanks!

1,935

(10 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hey James - this one is in the que as well but it is tough to play the GBE sequence so it'll be a challenge.

1,936

(4 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hey James - thanks -I'm lucky the wife lets me freelance a little to put her to sleep. It's where I get a lot of my musical ideas. I too like this chord progression and want to hear how it sounds recorded as well. I'm getting a bit of a long que going though so I'll have  to pick and choose.

Hey Helena - I was just about to give up when I actually used a trick James had mentioned in the past, by turning the frustration around on itself and writing about it. He's still the king in my mind but thanks.

1,937

(4 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Thanks Jas - Glad I could connect with you.

Be well

1,938

(4 replies, posted in Songwriting)

This is another little melody I got from playing my wife to sleep, like sleepy time song I wrote awhile back. For the life of me I couldn’t come up with the lyrics tonight until I let my difficulty coming up with the lyrics be the lyrics. Anyway, I hope you all like it. Play it slow and sleepy like you’re trying to drop someone off to sleep and you got it just about right.

In My Dreams By Jeff Gilpin


October 8th, 2007




Intro


[D7]x 4




Verse 1


[D7]Night time comes creeping in


[Am7]Pulling down the shades of the [D7]sky


A [D7]little painted magic then it all ends


[Am7]Setting my imagi[F7]nation free to [D7]fly




Chorus


So [Am7]where will I go this [Dm7]evening


[F7]Which path will I meander [D7]down


[Am7]Will I end up smiling a [Dm7]silly grin


Or [F7]end up with a [Am7]tearful [D7]frown




Verse 2


I[D7]magination’s sometimes a silly thing


[Am7]Bringing on belly laughs until you [D7]cry


[D7]Other times you hear angelic voices


Singing [Am7]songs you couldn’t [F7]capture if you’d [D7]try




Chorus


So [Am7]where will I go this [Dm7]evening


[F7]Which path will I meander [D7]down


[Am7]Will I end up smiling a [Dm7]silly grin



Or [F7]end up with a [Am7]tearful [D7]frown




Verse 3


[D7]Many trips to familiar places


That [Am7]I thought I’d forgotten from my [D7]youth


[D7]Mountain streams on a moonlit night


[Am7]Watching shooting [F7]stars on the [D7]roof




Chorus


So [Am7]where will I go this [Dm7]evening


[F7]Which path will I meander [D7]down


[Am7]Will I end up smiling a [Dm7]silly grin


Or [F7]end up with a [Am7]tearful [D7]frown




Verse 4


Re[D7]calling old memories gets me drowsy


I[Am7]magining new ones stirs my [D7]head


So it’s [D7]off to write a song I hope’s not lousy


Then I [Am7]think that I will [F7]head on off to [D7]bed




Ending Chorus


So [Am7]where’d I go this [Dm7]evening


I [F7]didn’t travel far tonight it [D7]seems


[Am7]I’ll give it another go tomor[Dm7]row


But for [F7]tonight it’s off to i[Am7]magine in my [F7]dreams [Am7] [D7]



1,939

(10 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Thanks Roger and Helena - Roger, I wil give it a go sometimes this week and I agree it is a little different. Just trying something new. Helena, I'm proud of him but I worry - thanks for the prayer.

1,940

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I was playing around with my guitar just after tuning it and was thinking how nice a tuned guitar sound just strumming the strings. It got me to thinking what a song would sound like based on those individual notes played as chords and I came up with the music below where you strum through the E and A and let the D ring out for the first line in the verse and chorus and then G and B and E the same way for the second line. It sounded pretty good to me so I thought of words and with my son going back over to the desert soon and the sound of the mix of chords I thought I would write this one for him. So Tim, if you read this, this song was written for you. I hope everyone else likes it as well.

Into Harm's Way By Jeff Gilpin


October 7th, 2007




Intro




[Em] [A] [D] [G] [B] [Em]




Verse 1




[Em] [A] [D]He joined up to fight for his country


[G] [B] [Em]He joined up because he thought it was right


[Em] [A] [D]He joined up to find out if he was a man


[G] [B] [Em]He joined up because he wanted a fight




Chorus




[Em] [A] [D]So please remind me what we're fighting for


[G] [B] [Em]I thought we were defending our own land


[Em] [A] [D]When is it going to be time for


[G] [B] [Em]A country to make their own stand




Verse 2




[Em] [A] [D]They taught him what he needed to do to survive


[G] [B] [Em]They taught him what he needed to learn to belong


[Em] [A] [D]They taught him a job that they needed him to do


[G] [B] [Em]And he learned now he's proud and he's strong




Chorus




[Em] [A] [D]So please remind me what we're fighting for


[G] [B] [Em]I thought we were defending our own land


[Em] [A] [D]When is it going to be time for


[G] [B] [Em]A country to make their own stand




Bridge




After [D]many months of training



He went [A]over to the dirt


They [G]set up camp and told him to [D]wait


There were no [D]battles to be won


Just sit there [A]baking in the sun


And keep the [G]faith


Yeah keep the [B]faith [B7]




Verse 3




[Em] [A] [D]He came back from the desert with a different view


[G] [B] [Em]He came back wondering what it was about


[Em] [A] [D]He came back knowing that he'd be going back again


[G] [B] [Em]He came back with some steam to let out




Chorus




[Em] [A] [D]So please remind me what we're fighting for


[G] [B] [Em]I thought we were defending our own land


[Em] [A] [D]When is it going to be time for


[G] [B] [Em]A country to make their own stand




Verse 4




[Em] [A] [D]Pretty soon he'll be heading back over again


[G] [B] [Em]And he's ready with pride to do his best


[Em] [A] [D]While we're here and we're still trying to figure out what to do


[G] [B] [Em]To figure out how to get out of that mess




Ending Chorus




[Em] [A] [D]To him it doesn't matter what we're fighting for


[G] [B] [Em]He's pledged to go where our leaders say


[Em] [A] [D]He's proud and he's strong and sure he'll get along


I just hope and [G]pray


That some [B]day


We'll stop [D]sending him [A]into harm's [Em]way



Hey Dave - I wrote a song a while back about a similar experience I had when my cousin passed away. It is tough dealing with all the emotions and thoughts that are going on when you experience something like this and I think you've done your friend proud. I would really love to hear this one if you get the chance to record it.

1,942

(2 replies, posted in Songwriting)

I also wrote this because I have a vacation coming up which my life will be hell the frist month after I get back. I will make sure I enjoy my time off. smile

1,943

(2 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Was just strumming the guitar and thinking about all I need to get done this weekend. I started thinking about how nice it would be to slow time down and take a break. Anyway I hope you like it. It has a pretty quick tempo but slow it down at the end of the last chorus. Ah, you’ll figure it out I’m sure.

I Can’t Catch Up By Jeff Gilpin


October 6th, 2007




Intro


[Em] [G] [Em] [G]




Verse 1


[Em]Look at that [G]clock


Up [Em]there on the [G]wall


Just [Em]ticking a[G]way


Taking [Em]no breaks at [G]all


It just [A]goes


That [G]clock on the [Em]wall [G] [Em] [G]




Verse 2


I [Em]want it to [G]stop


Or at [Em]least slow [G]down


There’s [Em]so much to [G]do


But it's [Em]going to [G]town


That [A]clock[G]


Just won’t slow [Em]down[G] [Em] [G]




Chorus


[A]There’s so [G]much I have to get [Em]done[G] [Em] [G]


[A]For work [G]and just for [Em]fun[G] [Em] [G]


[A]It seems I’m [G]always on the [Em]run[G] [Em] [G]


Trying to [B7]catch up


But I can’t [A]catch up[A7] [Em] [G] [Em] [G] [Em] [G] [Em] [G]




Verse 3


Because [Em]time keeps [G]ticking


It [Em]keeps pressing [G]on


[Em]No rest for [G]no one


The [Em]weak or the [G]strong


So I [A]try [G]


But this road is [Em]long[G] [Em] [G]




Verse 4


So [Em]what are plans [G]for


If you [Em]never catch [G]up



Just when [Em]you think you’re [G]close


Is when [Em]time inter[G]rupts


Like your [A]life [G]


Is a half empty [Em]cup [G] [Em] [G]




Chorus


[A]There’s so [G]much I have to get [Em]done[G] [Em] [G]


[A]For work [G]and just for [Em]fun[G] [Em] [G]


[A]It seems I’m [G]always on the [Em]run[G] [Em] [G]


Trying to [B7]catch up


But I can’t [A]catch up[A7] [Em] [G] [Em] [G] [Em] [G] [Em] [G]




Verse 5


[Em]No va[G]cation


You [Em]just get be[G]hind


Look a[Em]way for a [G]moment


And [Em]you’re out of [G]time


It’s so frus[A]trating [G]


But there’s no time for [Em]crying[G] [Em] [G]




Verse 6


So [Em]do what you [G]can


In the [Em]time that you’ve [G]got


[Em]You’re racing [G]no one


And you [Em]can’t beat the [G]clock


So stop [A]trying [G]


But don’t [Em]stop [G] [Em] [G]




Ending Chorus


[A]There’s so [G]much I have to get [Em]done[G] [Em] [G]


[A]For work [G]and just for [Em]fun[G] [Em] [G]


[A]It seems I’m [G]always on the [Em]run[G] [Em] [G]


I won’t [B7]catch up


But I won’t[A]stop


No I won’t stop[G]


No I won’t stop[B7]


For now I’ll stop[Em7]





1,944

(11 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Thanks you all - I'll try to get it recorded soon.

1,945

(5 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Thanks selso, Roger and saba - Go for it selso. Roger - she told me she would not take advantage promises never to play when it's snowing or raining hard...or at night. saba - my girl liked it fine. smile

1,946

(5 replies, posted in Songwriting)

My wife has been feeling guilty about being away lately. She has been playing lots of golf lately and since I am not into golf she’s out with other friends and not with me. She already tried to get me to play but I’d still rather play soccer or guitar, not necessarily in that order. Anyway here is a song for her letting her know she’s always with me. I hope you all like it as well.

Lingering By Jeff Gilpin


October 3rd, 2007




Intro


[G] [C] [D] [Em] [D]




Verse 1


[G]Whenever you go a[C]way


[D]For whatever [Em]rea[D]son


[G]I still feel your [C]presence


[D]Lingering




Verse 2


[G]It’s not your per[C]fume


Or the [D]way you leave the [Em]house[D]


[G]It’s just your im[C]pression


[D]Lingering [D7]




Chorus 1


I [Bm]feel you in the kitchen


And [C]how you make me laugh


I [Bm]feel you in the laundry room


[C]Giving the dog a bath [D]


I [C]feel you everywhere


You’re in [D]everything


Linge[G]ring




Verse 3


The [G]way that you [C]have to


[D]Have everything just [Em]so [D]


I [G]see you on the [C]table


[D]Lingering




Verse 4


[G]Falling fast a[C]sleep



To the [D]sounds of my [Em]guitar [D]


I [G]always see you [C]there


[D]Lingering [D7]




Chorus 2


You’re [Bm]with me in the car


[C]Trying to stay awake


You’re [Bm]outside in the yard


When it [C]needs a good rake [D]


I [C]feel you everywhere


You’re in [D]everything


Lin[G]gering




Verse 5


[G]So don’t you worry a[C]bout


Spending [D]little time with [Em]me [D]


[G]You’re always with [C]me


[D]Lingering




Verse 6


[G]You could even [C]be


A [D]thousand miles a[Em]way [D]


Yet [G]here you are with [C]me


[D]Lingering [D7]




Chorus 3


When[Bm]ever you’re away


[C]I still have you here


[Bm]There’s just no way


You’d [C]ever disappear [D]


I [C]feel you in my heart


You’re right [D]here


Lin[C]gering [G]



1,947

(11 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hey Daddy and Selso - I was really trying to come up with a lyrical idea to match the chords I was playing around with so I thought, "What should I write about?" That started me thinking how I should write a song that someone might be able to connect with like a few songs that have connected with me and that's pretty much where the idea came from. I also tried hard to suppress the urge I usually have so as not to overwrite the lyrics. Glad you like it and thanks.

1,948

(11 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Thanks Roger - I admit that I kind of cheat on the Bm and Gb by not barring them fully across but I'm working it and they still sound good when I cheat. You are right that it is a good barred sequence going from Bm to Gb I think.

1,949

(11 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Just a question about the power of music and how it helps in so many ways. I hope you like it.

How Can a Song? By Jeff Gilpin


September 30th, 2007


Intro


[Bm] [Gb] [G] [A]




Verse 1


[G]How can a [A]song


[G]Catch someone’s [A]ear


[G]How can a [A]song


Make [G]someone want to [A]hear


[G]How can a [A]song


[G]Heal a world in [A]pain


[G]How can a [A]song


Re[D]main




Chorus 1


[Bm]There is power in music


The [Gb]power to connect


[G]Someone hears and may feel the same [D]way


[Bm]It might help them


To [Gb]feel they aren’t alone


[G]Help them be okay, [A]get them through the day




Verse 2


[G]How can a [A]song


[G]Cure the many [A]woes



[G]How can a [A]song


[G]Elevate the [A]lows


[G]How can a [A]song


[G]Take away your[A] fears


[G]How can a [A]song


Bring you [D]near




Chorus 2


[Bm]Music helps your memory


And it [Gb]helps you to forget


[G]Like taking medicine for your [D]head


It can [Bm]lift away your anger


[Gb]Sooth away your hurts


[G]Remove your worries and [A]all that you dread




Verse 3


[G]So play that [A]song


Let [G]it take you a[A]way


[G]Listen to that [A]song


And [G]it’ll all be o[A]kay


[G]Hear that [A]song


Let its [G]message lift your [A]heart


It [G]won’t solve all your [A]problems


But it’s a [D]start



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Hey Zurf - Nice shots. I do have to get back up there sometime but I bet the fall colors are going to bring down everybody and their mother. I might try to head up ther before it gets too crowded.