1,876

(20 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Thank You   Jan

I only wish I had a voice on equal station as yours to make my words sound good. smile

Thanks again for your kind words.

I hope your recovery has been moving along quickly and to a full extent.
Jim

1,877

(474 replies, posted in Bands and artists)

sweet tune. Excellent playing !

Thanks for sharing

1,878

(11 replies, posted in About Chordie)

I never see any of that stuff - i have some ads around the edges - but they do not infringe in any way.

1,879

(20 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Thank you for your kind words Peatle

I only wish I had a decent singing voice  smile

JIm

1,880

(20 replies, posted in Songwriting)

I posted a quick computer mic recording of my song on soundcloud. here is the link - with my sincere apologies to your ears  for the playing and vocals.

https://soundcloud.com/tigljk/where-dre … ty-collide

1,881

(14 replies, posted in Electric)

That looks like a very cool product -wish I played well enough to actually know what it does, how to use it, or why I even would need one.

You guys are way out of my league -   I am so  envious - it looks like it must be so much fun.
smile
Jim

1,882

(20 replies, posted in Songwriting)

K.I.R.

Thanks for the suggestion--- I tried it and I like it !!  Made the change.

Thanks for checking it out.  I always look for constructive feed back as my musical background is extremely limited.

Jim

Neo

Nicely done !

Having your son ( I assume)  give you flowers so innocently and unconditionally sincere made it fantastic!

Thanks for sharing

Jim

1,884

(1,560 replies, posted in Bands and artists)

Badeye
That was a good one sir!

The talent on that song was unbelievable!
Thanks for sharing

Jim

1,885

(20 replies, posted in Songwriting)

This is the link to the song lyrics and chords on Chordie in the chopro format

I find it easier to play from there and you can change chords if you want  to.

http://www.chordie.com/chord.pere/?url= … ranspose=0

Thank you so much for your comments 
Jim

1,886

(20 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Thank you Peatle

1,887

(20 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Phill

Ironically I had just changed the one line from smell to sweet breath

and I struggled with the other line you caught.

Thanks my friend -  do you think the chords are ok 
It sounds ok to me when I play it - but then again it is me playing so who the heck knows.  smile

Thanks Phill   your advice is always welcomed !!

1,888

(20 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Well... I had this line in my head for weeks now and finally sat down early this morning and worked on it.

I'm not too sure it's in it's finished version yet, but I thought I'd through it out there for my Chordie friends to review.
Let me know what you think.  Thanks for giving it a look over.

Jim

[song]

{t: Where Dreams And Reality Collide}

[Am]With the stars sparkling in her [F]eyes,
And her [C]laughter like hues of an evening[G] sky
[Am] the wind gently blowing through her[F] hair
[C]and her sweet breath  in the midnight [G]air

[Am]She used to be only in my [F]dreams
A free[C] spirit ,chasing cryptic [G]schemes
[Am]beautifully awkward, out of [F]place
she was [C]gorgeous chaos,  full of[G] grace



Chorus
but now she's [C]   right here in front of me
Oh, I'd[Em] love to reach out and hold her hand
But I [Am]don't know if I can take that chance 
see I [F]don't want to get [C]hurt  a[G]gain

[C] she's everything  I ever wanted
Oh my [Em]heart  feels  it deep inside
Maybe [Am] one day I'll find the place
where [F] dreams and re[G]ality col[C]lide



[Am]It's so hard to move on with my  [F]life
With a  [C]heart , riddled with sad good[G]byes
[Am]hoping  courage , will soon come  my [F]way
and let me [C]fall in love again ,  some[G]day

Ending Chorus
and now she's  [C]  right here in front of me
Oh, I'd[Em] love to reach out and hold her hand
But I [Am]don't know if I can take that chance 
see I [F]don't want to get [C]hurt  a[G]gain

[C]she's everything  I could ever want
My [Em]heart  feels  it deep inside
[Am]is  this is the day I'll find the place
where [F] dreams and re[G]ality col[C]lide


where [F] dreams and re[G]ality col[C]lide

where [F] dreams and re[G]ality col[C]lide

[song/]

Zurf
That certainly did not need an overdrive pedal - it was outstanding!
Great cover - and as Peatle said - Holy cow is the bar set high !!
Very, very cool
Jim

sounds good !

I always use Tire Rack --- have had excellent tires and great prices

1,892

(27 replies, posted in Guitars and accessories)

Wow - Nice guitar.

I am sure it will be producing some outstanding music.

Have a blast - -and ahhh - go on wake her up with a morning lullaby !

Jim

1,893

(12 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

Yup
Awful news - But the news out of Las Vegas is more tragic. 59 dead and over 400 wounded. 

This world has some crazy damn people in it

May God bless Tom, his family and all the victims of Las Vegas

1,894

(26 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

Wow Beautiful guitar !

1,895

(7 replies, posted in Songwriting)

I have been re- writing this thing over and over - trying to find the right chords and the right fit with the lyrics. I have modified both.
Phill did an excellent version of the original version.... however  - it was bothering me that something wasn't quite right.  as it turned out - i found that I needed lryic changes that were necessary - which then led me to replay this thing a hundred times or more - until I finally was happy with the chords.
That led me to re-thinking the title of the song -  Which I changed to just   " STONE COLD ".

I think I finally got there - at least it sounds right in my head. I have been finger picking the heck out of this on my Martin ( and occasionally on my Fender 12 string) both sounded great to me. 

anyway - here is the new version

STONE COLD

[C]I think you and I both know
That our[Em] love is passing by
[Am]been trying to think of reasons,
and I'm [F] trying not to  [G]cry
[C]seems  long ago,  you and I
Thought our [Em]lives had turned to gold
[F]now all we have are stormy  nights
where  your [G]heart has turned stone [C]cold

Chorus


[F] you once  said that you'd love me for[C] ever
[F]  now I'm finding out ,  that isn't   [C]true
[F] I know I can't make you [C]love me
But  I [G] can't make myself [F]stop loving [C]you
no  I [G] can't make myself [F]stop loving [C]you

.


[C] now I wake up every  morning
and I  [Em] feel the emptiness  inside
[Am] the silence makes me feel like
a [F] part of me has  [G]died
[C]started  looking at  old photographs   
[Em] got me  wishing for days of  old
[F] but love can't be saved by  sweet memories 
Cause  your  [G]heart has turned stone [C]cold

.

Chorus

.
[F] you once  said that you'd love me for[C] ever
[F]  now I'm finding out ,  that isn't   [C]true
[F] I know I can't make you  [C]love me
But  I [G] can't make myself [F]stop loving [C]you
no  I [G] can't make myself [F]stop loving [C]you
I [G] can't make myself [F]stop loving [C]you



[C] Now I've got  long,  sleepless nights
Cause I  [Em] can't get you off  my  mind
[Am] never thought it'd  come to this
It's  so  [F]  hard to leave  love  be[G]hind
[C] my friends all tell me to move along
but i [Em] won't listen to what I'm told
[F']  I know what your love was like
before your [G] heart  turned stone[C] cold

.
  Chorus

.
[F] you once  said that you'd love me for[C] ever
[F]  now I'm finding out ,  that isn't   [C]true
[F] I know I can't make you [C]love me
But  I [G] can't make myself [F]stop loving [C]you
no  I [G] can't make myself [F]stop loving [C]you
I [G] can’t make myself [F]stop loving [C]you
This is a link to the  same- but it is my songbook in chopro from which for me is a lot easier to see , read, and play - not to mention - scrolling ability
http://www.chordie.com/chord.pere/?url= … ranspose=0
Thanks for giving it a second look and thanks to Phill for a wonderful first version.

Jim

1,896

(15 replies, posted in Songwriting)

the answer my friend is blowing in the wind...........

i agree with the others ... my greatest hits cd that I made this morning,  would be different by the end of the day

good thought, though virtually impossible to nail down.

1,897

(26 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

Richard

Glad you have joined us - looking forward to some great stuff !

Jim

1,898

(4 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

what he said - I always look forward to a great Blues lesson every friday !! Keep em  coming Badeye !!
JIM

Steve Earle - You're still standing there

1,900

(8 replies, posted in Poems)

That's really,really  good Peatle !!!!!