I was just thinking about all the things kids are told about being careful with dangerous things and how sometimes adults over do it a bit and make kids grow up to become adults who are afraid to try things. I hope you all like it.
1,876 2007-11-29 05:19:46
Topic: Cautionary Tales (0 replies, posted in Songwriting)
1,877 2007-11-27 01:15:08
Re: That Evasive Tune (3 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Thanks Southpaw - I kind of use songwriting as as my look away from work so I can keep my head screwed on straight.
Thanks Lena - I hate the whole getting old and not remembering things you think you should...like old songs you like.
1,878 2007-11-26 00:45:02
Topic: That Evasive Tune (3 replies, posted in Songwriting)
This is just a song about trying to find a song that pops into your head but just can't put your finger on it. Usually, I can find the title but on some rare occasions, I have no luck. Those of you out that who like to solve mysteries don't worry because the song I'm searching for in this song is made up, but if you want to look for one please feel free to look and let me know if you find anything. Hope you all like this.
That Evasive Tune By Jeff Gilpin
1,879 2007-11-24 18:05:54
Topic: Birthday (0 replies, posted in Songwriting)
I was cleaning until a little bit ago and started looking at old pictures of my son which took me back to when he was born almost 23 and a half years ago. This song is about that experience looking back from where I am now. I hope you all like it.
Birthday By Jeff Gilpin
1,880 2007-11-23 17:17:16
Topic: Show Me Where (1 replies, posted in Songwriting)
This is a song from the heart by a country boy who misses how country use to be. I hope you all like it.
Show Me Where By Jeff Gilpin
1,881 2007-11-21 05:07:49
Topic: I Never Let You (1 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Some parents are blessed with kids who excel at all they do. These kids grow up and become the future leaders of tomorrow shaping the future of our world for generations to come. I truly believe those kids were brought to earth as part of some sort of alien invasion where the real babies were replaced at birth with these alien mutated genetic clones. The rest of us, the other 99.999 precent of the world, have big grand schemes of how our kids will go down some similar path but somewhere along the way something may, and usually does, derail the path to greatness and it is the parent’s job to keep these type of derailments from happening. Parents usually find out, when their kids are much older of course, that their great protective plans had long been circumvented. This song is about that protection and that protection of this kind is more often than not useless. Before I go into the song I have to confess first that while the things I mention in the song are what parents should protect their kids against t osome degree I was not so successful. First of all I’m a bigger slob than both of my kids put together and I also play my music much louder than either one of them although it is by necessity because my hearing is not the best these days. I have no excuse about being a slob though. Anyway, I hope you all like the song and sorry I'm so long winded.
I Never Let You By Jeff Gilpin
1,882 2007-11-19 04:33:04
Topic: Thankful Celebration (2 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Just a Thanksgiving song for this year. It's more about the event than it is what I'm thankful for but I am very thankful for my family. Chordie is way up there as well. Thanks to all you folks being supportive of me and my writing. Hope you all like this.
Thankful Celebration By Jeff Gilpin
1,883 2007-11-18 22:58:03
Re: One of Life's Little tricks (4 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Thank you back Roger.
I actually found this chord in "beautiful boy" by John Lennon and to me it gives a song a kind of mystical quality like you are looking back in time. That was the idea of using it in this looking back song. Glad you liked it - Jeff
1,884 2007-11-18 22:53:52
Re: Unspoken Thoughts About Mortality (15 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Thanks Bonedaddy - I'm with you there. I tried to pass on what I wish I had known to my kids from time to time and they usually give me this "whatever dad" look to let me know I'm wasting my time.
1,885 2007-11-18 15:51:17
Re: A Star Like You (3 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Hey Emma -just great lyrics, chords go well with it and the little tab up front was very nice. I played through but didn't get how the first set of lyrics is played with the tab so I guessed a bit. It sound nice and has a little bittersweet quality that I like. I still want to hear it though when it's done.
1,886 2007-11-18 15:41:39
Re: Unspoken Thoughts About Mortality (15 replies, posted in Songwriting)
That is very true. I think the "leap" part has to have a stronger support structure than I have right now but I'm working on it.
1,887 2007-11-18 06:06:48
Re: Unspoken Thoughts About Mortality (15 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Hey - thanks for all the comments. I pretty much figured I was not alone in this.
Marc - thanks for sharing the poem - very thought provoking. I can't say I'll ever figure out until that fateful day what will happen. I won't let it take up too much of my mind though...life's too short.
Lena - thanks - I sure wish I could play sing as good as you...okay write as good as well. This phase has pretty much been with me since childhood when a friend of mine was killed in a car crash. It didn't feel like he was gone and yet he was. Later in my life when many other friends and relatives died, I still felt like they were alive and kicking even though I knew they were not. So I still wonder about them and what will happen when eventually me, my wife and kids will die. I'm not a very good funeral person. I have no clue how to act. Words like sorry for your loss feel hollow when I truly don't know the extent of the loss. There is a big difference between going to a better place, a place of enlightenment and turning back into the earth. I guess I'll live with it and see.
Hey Acapo - I think I get what you are saying. I'm not sure I buy into atoms that make me up still being me when I die even though there are great amounts of power in even the smallest morsel of matter. I'm also not sure I buy into the whole spiritual side that I want to believe is in me yet I cannot feel it touch it ....sense it. Fortunately for me it does make for a good song topic.
1,888 2007-11-17 17:04:41
Topic: One of Life's Little tricks (4 replies, posted in Songwriting)
This is just a song about something that happened to me long ago. Reb, I hope you don’t mind but I used some of the chords I had suggested for your lyrics last week. I hope you all like it.
One of Life’s Little Tricks By Jeff Gilpin
1,889 2007-11-17 04:02:27
Topic: Unspoken Thoughts About Mortality (15 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Just like what the song says I wonder about this but people are never comfortable talking about this other than to attempt a conversion into whatever they believe in at the time which is usually why those thoughts stay in my head. Anyway for me, although I do have believes, I also have doubts and wish I had assurances that would help me to get rid of them. That’s enough jabber. I hope you like the song.
Unspoken Thoughts About Mortality By Jeff Gilpin
1,890 2007-11-17 03:02:41
Re: Don't Listen if You Don't Like It (5 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Hey Reb and Roger - Thanks
Reb - I too agree that sometimes a song labeled as this or that might turn me away but it truly is eye opening hearing a song for the first time, really enjoying it only to find out you're heard about the song for a while but were turned off by the name of the song, the group or type of music it's been labeled.
Roger - I was going to mention the key change up front but I left it for a surprise for those who like them....or maybe I was hiding it from those who don't.
1,891 2007-11-16 13:27:24
Re: Don't Listen if You Don't Like It (5 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Thanks Toney - This was a fun one to write too, so I guess I like it as well.
1,892 2007-11-16 05:17:21
Topic: Don't Listen if You Don't Like It (5 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Well, listening to music as much as I do I am sometime surprised that I like a song that I have never heard before and would never have listened to if it had not been played on the radio at that time. That got me thinking back in the way back machine in my head of growing up and wondering where my love of music first came from. I would have to say that it was from a force feeding on many long road trips. Those of you old enough to remember driving through parts of the rural southern United States can attest that there was not much selection to choose from back in those days, especially if you were sitting way in the back of the car and your Texas born and raised Father was controlling the radio. Needless to say my parents, both of whom worked at a fairly small college, had a wide range of musical tastes and so I was exposed to any and all sorts of music, either from them, their friends, my friends, my sister and/or her friends. So this song is about not prejudging any music or musician until your ears make the final call. Enough blabbing, I hope you all like it.
Don’t Listen if You Don’t Like It By Jeff Gilpin
1,893 2007-11-15 04:39:38
Re: Hey Jas, want to see what you can do with this? (6 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Sorry but I wanted to give it a try myself...throw it away if you don't like it
[em/d]I need to find some peace of mind
In between these city [d]walls
[em/d]The clones are marching right in line
The concrete bars they stand so [d]tall
I [d#]try to walk against the grain
And it rubs some people [d]sore
I [em/d]have to try and stake a claim
On what's been done [d]before
[em/d]Seven days to waste the time
A hundred ways to lose your [d]mind
A [em/d]thousand faces in the crowd
A million voices all out [d]loud
[d#]Try to pick and choose your game
Your very own stereo [d]type
[em/d]Make a meaning for your name
Try to live up to the [d]hype
The [em/d]rythym of an unseen drum
Keeps us all marching to the [d]tune
Of the [em/d]mob society made
Keeps us howling at the [d]moon
[d#]Even trying to stand alone
Makes you fall in with a [d]group
[em/d]We all wear the uniforms
Of our own respective [d]troops
Played like this
em/d = xx0000 d = xx0232 d# = xxx343
What do you think?
Again toss it if you don't like it but I though it sounded right...
1,894 2007-11-15 04:15:56
Topic: Just Say the Word (0 replies, posted in Songwriting)
I was feeling a little protective of my kids, what with one back over in the desert and the other having her 22nd birthday halfway across the country, so I wrote this song to let them know there is no distance I wouldn’t cross for either of them if they need me. I hope you all like it.
Just Say the word by Jeff Gilpin
1,895 2007-11-14 04:30:29
Re: Our Children's Daily Blessing (4 replies, posted in Songwriting)
You know you always have my permission Roger. Glad you liked it.
1,896 2007-11-13 04:03:50
Re: Our Children's Daily Blessing (4 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Thanks Daddy- Thinking about my kids again I guess.
1,897 2007-11-13 04:01:43
Re: Wait and See (4 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Thanks Daddy and Old Doll - I think the key is to be flexible
1,898 2007-11-13 03:54:23
Re: Wait and See (4 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Thanks Daddy and Old Doll - I think the key is to be flexible
1,899 2007-11-12 02:23:52
Topic: Our Children's Daily Blessing (4 replies, posted in Songwriting)
I was reading Old Doll's song dedicated to her friend who recently passed away and I thought what a nice song, prayer and blessing all in one. I thought one, a song, prayer, blessing for all our children and those who were at one time children and still might have a little child in their heart would be worthwhile as well. So here it is and thanks Lena for the inspiration.
Our Children’s Daily Blessing By Jeff Gilpin
1,900 2007-11-12 01:53:43
Re: [song] {: Foxey Magnet} words/ melody Helena Donovan. (8 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Hey Lena - Like a prayer blessing is what it is and a lovely one at that. Great Job