1,851

(3 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Welcome to Chordie Peatle, thanks for your kind words smile  Looking forward to seeing some of your songs up here too.  Peatle you are a great supporter and encourager to us all, appreciate it smile

1,852

(13 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Love this song of your Jim, perfect as is, says it all.  Looking forward to having a go at it myself smile

1,853

(8 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hi Jim, looking forward to hearing you sing and play this one, let us know when you put it on  sound cloud or you tube  smile  .........your another one who can write all these amazing songs, they seem to just pour out of some of you guys smile

1,854

(18 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hi as well Cocktailsfor2, glad you liked it and glad you found it on sound cloud, (thanks to mekidsmom).  Looking forward to TRYING to write more.......it doesn't come easily to me as some others smile

1,855

(18 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hi Mekidsmom, thank you and wow only us two ladies in here?  Thanks  for your great comments and  for listening to my song and glad you liked it smile  By the way a big thanks for posting my link to sound cloud on here, I wasn't quite sure how to do that smile

1,856

(18 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Tenement Funster, hello and thank you smile Great to hear you like music and poems about nature too and thank you for your comments smile   This one came easily to me as I was sitting at the computer one day and saw this beautiful Tui bird outside my window, on a tree very close to me. It was fluffing itself up and preening itself right in front of me ....................... (I hope other songs will come to me just as easily as I don't really consider myself as having a natural talent at writing songs)  smile

1,857

(18 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hi Keepitreal, nice to met you and go for it with your ukulele!!!!! Love you to try my song on your uke, as you can see, it is very easy smile

1,858

(18 replies, posted in Songwriting)

TIGLJK, hello and thank you smile  Nice to be here and thank you for the nice comment.  Looking forward to see what else you write and sing smile

1,859

(18 replies, posted in Songwriting)

HI Easybeat, thanks for the welcome and if it wasn't for you mentioning this place to me I probably wouldn't be here.  Thank you re: my first song smile

1,860

(18 replies, posted in Songwriting)

HI Dino 48, thanks for the welcome and I hope my song is good smile ............. hmmmm hadn't thought about a video ...................*watch this space*

1,861

(18 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hi Phill, thanks for that welcome and the  feedback smile  I did read up on the chopro thing up the top before I posted, thought I had done it right but obviously not .............. hope to get it right next time (see hoping I will write another song wink   )

1,862

(18 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hi, I am new to this site and this is my very first attempt and only attempt at writing a song so far.  I play this on my ukulele as I am better on my uke than on a guitar.

BEAUTIFUL   TUI 
   
INTRO – {Slide finger along A string whilst strumming}

[C] Sat watching a Tui in a tree [AM] today
[C] Chirping and talking to [AM] anyone
[C] Sitting proudly on a branch in the [AM] greenery of the tree
[C] Looking down on all as it [AM] perched up high

CHORUS

[E7] Beautiful Tui [A7] bird
[E7] Come sing me a [A7] song
[E7] Come sit beside me in that [A7] tree
[E7] As I watch and try to sing a [A7] long

{Slide finger along A string whilst strumming}

[C] Puffing itself up and cleaning its [AM] wings
[C] Its feathers shine like a [AM] paua shell
[C] Deep beautiful colors that can [AM] only be seen
[C] If you remain still and watch [AM] unseen

CHORUS

{Slide finger along A string whilst strumming}

[C] Flying off the branch as you [AM] leave
[C] Looking for some berries or some [AM} seeds
[C] The nectar of the kowhai flower is [AM] sweet to taste
[C] As you swoop and dive looking in [AM] your haste

CHORUS

{Slide finger along A string whilst strumming}

[C] Sometimes I see you bathing in the [AM] bird bath
[C]Splashing and thrashing your [AM] wings
[C} Shaking and cleaning yourself [AM] as best you can
[C] Ready for another day as you [AM] fly off and soar   

CHORUS

OUTRO – {Slide finger along A string whilst strumming and fade out}


You can listen to me attempting to sing this song on Sound Cloud which is also new to me this year.  I am under the name Kiki Jan.