Tenement Funster i only enter my tame songs,i would be banned for life otherwise i see myself as counter culture. Some are so extreme i wont post on chordie.  Maybe one day when im dead someone will find some of my songs and say he was spot on. Why didnt anyone listen...     

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Hi Tenement Funster, the powers that be prefer us whites to hate and feel ashamed of who we are. Not me im proud of my ancestors and what they have achieved,and will die to protect there memory.
I too see the "its ok to be white stickers " but living in a town full of commies it usually get torn down and replaced with refugees welcome or some other communist garbage. With the great replacement in full swing its a case of stand you ground or die. Im no white supremacist im just a man who is standing up for his kin and a future for his grandchildren.  It how nature made us.   

I feel sorry for you, your prime minister is a joke(is he even a man?),but the ours isnt no better. They have all sold us down the river.

Cheers Brian, in my mind a song is a hit, mostly depending on the majority mind set,yes you do get outsiders but on the whole it familiarity that sales,(when i was young i was into punk rock,now i think what the hell did i see in that"young rebelious mind")And these day thats the same old monotony with a few outside good songs getting a break.

It good for me to know ive got a few fans. Ill keep writing and entering just because i enjoy it.

Thanks Peatle,  I didnt think i would get anywhere so was happy with what i got. Im not up in rhe clouds . Haha!     

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Cheers peatle just a song to get out my frustration at the world and to say this cant go on the snake is already eating its tail, people are waking up to the hipocracy.  I see light at the end of a very dark tunnel. Hence "our sun will shine again , hold out"     

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Hi Jim ive writen a few with a repeating chord structure as long as the melody changes for the chorus or the arrangment in this songs case being all verses its ok. Good song. ive known a few women with a heart of stone.     

To all that are intrested.
My song results points out of 10
Christmas without you. : 4 points ,participant position
Rise : 5 points commended position
Ill die with a sword in my hand: 5 points commended position
The lone tree : 6 points highly commended position
Lady you've got me going crazy: 6 points highly commended position
To get in the semi final you need 7 points , the final 8,9 point to win 10 points. 
Oh well ,Give it another go next year. 

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Excellent  song, who will we vote for next election? ,we live in intresting times.     

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Hi Brian,Couldnt find the song on your sound cloud  link goes nowhere.  Did you delete it?     

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Hold Out 
                                                                 
Am G6 Fmaj7 E
Verse 1
Am                                        C/G
It’s hard these days to be a white straight male
G6                                          Fmaj7
Feels like the whole world is trying to bring you down
Am                                      G6
Slowly chipping away at all that we have made
Fmaj7                                    E
Turning it all upside down they’re filling our lives with fear and hate, we’ve got to

Chorus
Am           C/G
Hold out, hear what I’m saying
G6            Fmaj7
Hold out, do like I’m doing
Am           C/G
Hold out, hold out
Fmaj7                                       E                                                    Am
Cos it won’t be long before their world comes crumbling down
(Am)         C/G
Hold out, hear what I’m saying
G6            Fmaj7
Hold out, do like I’m doing
Am           C/G
Hold out, hold out
Fmaj7                                       E                                                   Am
Cos it won’t be long before their world comes crumbling down

G6                Fmaj7        E
Yeah, yeah, yeah

Verse 2
Am                     C/G
I feel your pain it keeps coming around again
G6                                              Fmaj7
This multicultural nightmare is enough to drive us all insane
Am                             G6
People pass you by false virtue in their eyes
Fmaj7                      E
There aint no justice the punishment never fits the crime, we’ve got to

Repeat Chorus

Am           G6                Fmaj7        E
                 Yeah, yeah, yeah                          our sun will

Outro

Am                             Fmaj7                        G6     E
Shine,   our sun will shine, our sun will shine, again, again, again, our sun will
Am                             Fmaj7                        G6     E
Shine,   our sun will shine, our sun will shine, hold out, hold out, hold out
Am                             Fmaj7                        G6     E
Shine,   our sun will shine, our sun will shine, again, again, again, our sun will
Am                             Fmaj7                        G6     E
Shine,   our sun will shine, our sun will shine, hold out, hold out, hold out

Fmaj7                                       E                                                    Am
Cos it won’t be long before their world comes crumbling down



© Trevor Scrivens 15th November 2018 
Listen to Hold out by Ctech #np on #SoundCloud
https://soundcloud.com/user-415450650/hold-out

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Great song  Jim.  Nice demo done by phill.     

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Good song Brian ,i have the same problem doing demos i usually sing a different word or forget what chord im playing,haha!     

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Thanks Jandle, having lived the experience, i was hoping it would come out through  the song. I wrote it to heal an old wound i was carrying arpund.     

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Thanks Classical Guitar . Never really thought about that.     

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Hi neophytte thanks for comenting. Yep very sad.     

When im out walking or just wake up,on when i hear or see something around me. Or when i play around with chords. I sing or wistle on to my phone whereever i am.     

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Fifteen Years   Capo 3rd fret

G

Verse 1
G             G/E                      G
Silently I look across the table
Cadd9             Csus2                A7sus4
Not knowing quite   what to say
Em7                            G/E               Em7
Your cheating heart has left me disabled
G                            Gsus4                           G
What made you want to hurt me that way?

Verse 2
G          G/E                          G
I’m so tired of your small talking
Cadd9  Csus2         A7sus4
It don’t get us anywhere
Em7                           G/E                 Em7
Maybe I should get up and start walking
G                       Gsus4                             G
You've shown me that you don’t really care

Chorus
Dsus4                                  A7sus4   Cadd9    Csus2
For fifteen years I’ve been laying     here        beside you
Dsus4            A7sus4        Cadd9   Csus2
Living all the good times  and the sad
Dsus4           A7sus4   Cadd9      Csus2
Never once did I tfeel that you'd lie to me
G                         Gsus4                       G
What did I do to turn your heart so black?

G
Verse 3
G                      G/E                  G
I still want to reach out and touch you
Cadd9                Csus2                A7sus4 
Remembering all the love we made
Em7                      G/E                Em7
For every part of me that still wants you
G                                 Gsus4                    G
Theirs a part of me that must call it a day, cos

Chorus
Dsus4                                   A7sus4    Cadd9    Csus2
For fifteen years I’ve been laying       here       beside you
Dsus4                 A7sus4        Cadd9   Csus2
Living through  good times   and the sad
Dsus4          A7sus4      Cadd9    Csus2
Never once did I feel that you'd lie to me
G                          Gsus4                     G
What did I do to turn your heart so black?

Dsus4                                    A7sus4    Cadd9    Csus2
For fifteen years I’ve been laying        here        beside you
Dsus4                 A7sus4        Cadd9   Csus2
Living through  good times   and the sad
Dsus4          A7sus4    Cadd9      Csus2
Never once did I feel that you'd lie to me
G                         Gsus4                       G
What did I do to turn  your heart so black?

G                         Gsus4                       G
What did I do to turn  your heart so black?
G                                 Gsus4                       G
I’m leaving now and I won’t be looking back

© Trevor Scrivens 28 September 2018



Listen to Fifteen Years by Ctech #np on #SoundCloud
https://soundcloud.com/user-415450650/fifteen-years

SCIENCE CONFIRMS THAT SONGWRITING IS GOOD FOR YOU

The act of creative writing, and songwriting in particular, has more benefits than most people realize.

The benefits are far reaching, affecting us both physically and mentally, and the interesting thing is that the quality of the writing has nothing to do with it. Just the act of writing itself leads to strong physical and mental health benefits and it doesn´t matter if anyone else reads your lyric or hears your composition, or if it is a commercial success or not. Just writing it is enough. The many benefits documented by researchers include long-term improvements in mood, reduction in stress levels, a reduction of depressive symptoms, lowered blood pressure, better lung and liver function and an improved immune system with fewer illnesses.

A major study at the University of Sidney (by Karen Baikie and Kay Wilhelm) on emotional and physical health benefits of expressive writing discovered just how much time spent writing is needed to make a big difference. And its not that much. They say that although the more time spent writing the better, just 15 to 20 minutes of writing on three to five occasions over the course of their four-month study was enough to make a real and noticeable difference.

Another amazing finding is that writing can even make physical wounds heal faster. A study in New Zealand found that if medical biopsy patients wrote about their thoughts and feelings for just 20 minutes for three days in a row before the biopsy their wounds healed more quickly than the people in a control group. Other studies have shown that people with asthma who write have fewer attacks than those who don't, AIDS patients who write have higher T-cell counts and cancer patients who write have more optimistic perspectives and improved quality of life.

So what exactly is it about writing that makes it so good for you? Well, researchers are generally agreed that the important thing is to express your own personal, traumatic, stressful or emotional events in your writing and composing. It seems that this is the key and it is this expression of personal events and trauma that leads to improvement in physical and mental health.

One well known researcher in this area is James W. Pennebaker from the University of Texas, Austin, USA. He is a leading authority on expressive writing and health and he says; "When people are given the opportunity to write about emotional upheavals they often experience improved health. They go to the doctor less. They have changes in immune function." Pennebaker and others believe that the act of expressive writing distances people from the upheaval and trauma in their lives and allows them the space to creatively step back and express and evaluate their personal dramas and tragedies. They stop obsessing unhealthily on those events and instead they focus on turning this into a positive creative outcome. This leads to lower stress levels, a more positive outlook and an improvement in general health.

The good news is that you don't need to be a famous or successful songwriter to get these great benefits. You just need to write! As a songwriter you probably already know that writing songs goes deeper than, well, just writing songs. We all instinctively know when we write that there is more going on at a deeper level. But now it has been confirmed by science. Every time you write a lyric or poem that expresses your feelings and your inner self, or compose a piece of music that expresses and contains a part of you, you are acting as your own personal therapist and doing your physical and mental health a huge favour.  If you are a songwriter you are certainly doing something right. Keep on writing! 

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Great song Phill i look forward to hearing it.
Been there too best to leave. 

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That's one well written song. Jim. And very popular I see by all the views.  I've always been  anti drug having had a girlfriend in my teens died from an over dose.

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Thanks Bill,much appreciated.  I'm going to try and write some more with an old English theme. I've been researching a few subjects and now i'm waiting to see if anything jumps out at me.

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Thanks ark much appreciated glad you liked it. Being from kent I'm proud of my ancestors for standing after the battle in resistance and in doing so kept most of their rights. That's why our motto is invicta. Undefeated.

Jim. Just had a listen.  Good song all round. Like others I think you sound like a folk singer. I wish I was blessed in the way you are with song writing. You come up with some good stuff . Keep them coming.

Jim. Just had a listen.  Good song all round. Like others I think you sound like a folk singer. I wish I was blessed in the way you are with song writing. You come up with some good stuff . Keep them coming.

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Just had a listen licked it. Reminded my of the Irish songs my aunt played when I was a child. Good lyrics chords and melody. Played and sung well too.