I have been reading "The Craft of Lyric Writing" by Sheila Davis.  This book is by far the best book on the subject I have ever read.

http://www.amazon.com/Craft-Lyric-Writi … amp;sr=1-1

Every section of every chapter has nuggets of wisdom and practical advice about how to create lyrics.  She cites examples that span the genres and the decades.  She offers a very thorough approach to structure, content, and style.

There are lots of books about song writing and I have read several others.  They have all been interesting and helpful - - - but this book by Sheila Davis is just superb.

Just wanted to share about something good,
James

152

(24 replies, posted in Music theory)

Purple Rain by Prince!
http://www.chordie.com/chord.pere?url=h … 0McCormick

153

(13 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Starting recording is scary - I just dove in about a year ago and am learning as I go.  Just start doing it and realize that your technical knowledge and skills will improve with experience.

Roger Guppy encouraged me (or rather hounded and shamed me) into finally starting to record.  I'm glad he did - it is scary, but rewarding.  James

154

(19 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Arkady, this is lovely music.  Your creative wings have really spread.  Man, keep playing with your software - it has obviously stimulated your creativity.  Your new direction is great.

Your instrumentals remind me of the music of Oregon and the Paul Winter Consort.  The oboe-like melody line on 'Lunar Spirits' is wonderful.

Couldn't find any good stuff by the Paul Winter Consort on YouTube, but here is a lovely arrangement of "Icarus" for 3 guitars.  Ralph Towner (on 12-string here) was a member of both Oregon and the Paul Winter Consort.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=38k2W5UFyjM
Here is a fabulous live performance of "1000 Kilometers" by Oregon featuring some dandy English Horn and a dandy double bass solo:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QRcnunCY3pY

James

155

(10 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Love it!

I hearing this one being howled out in a shacked-out old honkey tonk.  There's a fight out in the parking lot and the sheriff's taking his time getting there because it's just easier to let 'em all have at it and get hurt than to arrive in the middle of the brawl.

156

(13 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

Just read a news account of the capture of the former Serbian president who is accused of genocide and war crimes.  He had lived incognito for years and frequented a local bar where they played traditional Serb music.

Anyway, a Gusle is the instrument Serbs use to accompany the telling of their epic poems.  This one-stringed bowed instrument is quite interesting.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3mefOO8VLhg

My question is this . . . does playing this thing really help a Serbian guy meet Serbian girls?

157

(14 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Phill - here's another approach . . . instrumental piece with spoken passages.
Think 'Peter and the Wolf' by Sergei Prokofiev, or 'Lincoln Portrait' by Aaron Copeland.

In this format, bits of the story are read and then the music dramatizes the imagery.  You have plenty of vivid images on which to base instrumental parts - a small combo could pass around musical themes & variations. 

I realize this would be an ambitious undertaking to compose - but give it some consideration.  Might even be worth it to seek out collaboration with an aspiring composer of classical orchestral or chamber music?

Never at a loss for big ideas,
James

158

(8 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hi Roger - Nope, still laying down single-track recordings . . . the whole multi-track thing is still a little scary for me.

However, since I finally figured out that my microphone was not fully configured I am feeling bold and dangerous!  So, I'll be trying out the multi-track stuff soon!  James

159

(1 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hello Killallm & welcome to chordie and the Songwriting forum!

Well - I hope to see the lyric soon.  Being that I play autoharp guitar tabs are of no use to me.  Looks like you've got a great start on the song - be sure to post the rest when it comes out of the oven!  James

160

(13 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hi Mark,
Just found this gut-wrencher at your MySpace page!

Great idea for a song and you really hit the bullseye with your lyric.  Very nicely done.
James

161

(13 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Yeah Love & Music - probably the first person to bang some rocks together and sing was just trying to pitch some woo!

I would love to hear you play this one.  James

162

(14 replies, posted in Songwriting)

I agree with others that this could be made into a dandy song.

Seems something in a minor key would work well to capture the mood - then maybe shifting into major on some verses.

It is long for a song - but that's OK.  Your instrumental skills can help to break it up into segments.  Don't abandon this one as 'finished' quite yet.  It is a great idea and deserves more time to 'season'!  James

163

(4 replies, posted in Guitars and accessories)

Forget the G-strings - It's tighty whities for me!

164

(4 replies, posted in My local band and me)

Hi Jerome - this might actually turn out to be a good thing and the chaos could result in creative energy.  Break a leg!  James

Hi Headcase - you bring up an important point. Yes, we might not all agree with the choice or placement of chords in some songs . . . but remember, all the stuff indexed on chordie was figured out by some well-meaning person somewhere out there.

I see all the song versions as being helpful hints on how a song might be played - not exact blueprints.  The index contains some versions that are, in fact, in need of help.  By all means do what you can to improve any song that you find lacking in accuracy.

The best way to do this is make the changes first within your songbook.  Open the song with the 'edit' button (at the end of the song's listing line) and make whatever changes you feel are needed.  Once the song is improved you can replace the song in chordie's index with your version.  Your name will appear with the song as being the person who improved the song.

Any registered member of chordie can improve songs.  Also, you can always click on the 'original song' button to see the song as it was before somebody did their editing.

Regarding overuse of chords: Yes, some songs seem to have more chords than they really need.  Again - use the versions in chordie's index as 'helpful suggestions' not as perfect blueprints. 

There is nobody here at chordie who knows it all - we are all learning a little more each day.
James

166

(8 replies, posted in Songwriting)

"Doofus Blues" is now up at my 'Songs for Human and Autoharp" page:

http://www.myspace.com/r200james

Please give it a listen!  James

167

(16 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

I have started setting up a page.  But, I figure there is no real rush since the next round of the contest does not start until August 1st.  By then, I shall have all my plans for total world domination in place . . . James

168

(16 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

Good thinking, Sir Harding!
Shall check it out and do what I gotta do . . .
James

169

(9 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

Hi Kenny
Any song writing contest where they require an entry fee is probably a scam that will benefit only the organizers.  Likewise any "producer" who wants to "help you put together an album" (for a big up-front fee, of course) is just a fast buck artist.  Avoid these come-ons.

I did recently participate in a song writing contest on MySpace.  The 'Henry Poole is Here' movie contest seemed like a good exercise for me.  The organizers wanted no money and merely asked that the songs submitted be about certain themes.

For me, it was simply a creative challenge to write a song using their themes.  I like the song I came up with - however, it did not get selected as one of the finalists.  I did meet some other song writers on MySpace in the process - so I'm glad I chose to participate.

If you choose to participate in a contest, read ALL the fine print in the rules.  Ask questions about stuff that is not clear.  Don't give anybody your money along with your song.

Here's a song about Golf I wrote while back:
http://www.chordie.com/forum/viewtopic.php?id=5899

170

(5 replies, posted in Acoustic)

Hello Mark & welcome to chordie!

Never a dull moment here on chordie's forum.  Plenty of information and many helpful people.
James

171

(8 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Yesterday, I realized that I have recorded a year's worth of original songs with my USB microphone improperly configured . . .

I just thought the hiss noise on my recordings was because I didn't have a nice soundproof room.  Actually, it was because I had not fully specified the audio input in GarageBand.  Live and learn!

Anyway, it got me to thinking about just what a very special sort of idiot I am . . . .

Doofus BluesJames McCormick, July 19, 2008


12-bar blues


I'm a [C]big goofy doofus, [C]nerdy and uncool


[C]Big goofy doofus, [C7]stubborn as a mule


[F]Big goofy doofus, [F]doofus through and through


[C]Big goofy doofus, it's [C]absolutely true


I'm a [G7]big goofy doofus es-[F7]pecially because


[C]Doofus is as doofus [G7]does!




I can [C]doof it up, doof it down, [C]doof it in reverse


I'm the [C]doofiest doofus [C7]in the universe


I can [F]doof it in my sleep, [F]doof it on the go



[C]Doof it scientifically, [C]doof it like a pro


I'm a [G7]big goofy doofus, it [F7]gives me quite a buzz


Hey, [C]doofus is as doofus [G7]does!




I'm a [C]big goofy doofus, [C]totally uncouth


[C]Big goofy doofus, [C7]silly as a goose


[F]Big goofy doofus, mag-[F]nificent klutz


[C]Big goofy doofus, [C]probably nuts


I'm a [G7]big goofy doofus, it's [F7]all I ever was . . .


Yeah, [C]doofus is as [G7]doofus [C]does!


172

(11 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Beautiful and sad ballad . . . well written, Kenny . . . well performed, Roger.

I agree with Roger that this song is 'finished' in that it tells the story and feels complete.

This is good stuff - - - and I gotta say that Roger's inclusion of autoharp on the choruses is a very nice touch!  James

173

(10 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Quite nice, zenbutcher!

I would also like to hear more verses - there are many places you can go from a great start like that.  Don't limit yourself to continuing the song just about that particular family member - different verses can be about different people or even different perspectives on the same theme.  James

174

(3 replies, posted in Song requests)

Hi Completebeginner & welcome to chordie!

I must confess, this artist was unknown to me until I got to looking for what you want!  Strange, but true.  I have trolled about on the web and found no lyrics or chords for her stuff . . . Except her official website:
Julie Felix website
http://www.knibbworld.com/juliefelix/front.html

There are no tabs on the site . . .
I notice there is a fan club there - perhaps somebody involved with that group could help?
Sorry this has not been very helpful.  James

175

(6 replies, posted in Songwriting)

"That Gizmo Thing" is now recorded and posted to my 'Songs for Human and Autoharp' page:

http://www.myspace.com/r200james

Please give it a listen!  James