Good job Isaac...when you write,try to paint a picture, and it looks to me like your moving in the right direction.
Keep on Pluckin
KAP54
1,651 2008-06-09 20:10:06
Re: the fire in my eyes (5 replies, posted in Songwriting)
1,652 2008-06-09 20:02:05
Re: Image of You (4 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Thank You Again Helena and daddycool
It was a hugely special time in my life and I think thats what made the imaging come easy to me.
(written in one night) I wish I could feel that way always but alas...
KAP54
1,653 2008-06-09 19:55:22
Re: Faded Dreams (6 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Thanks again daddycool and helena
Theres no bout-a-doubt it,the music of 60's-70's and maybe 80's always was and always will be #1 with me.Geez-a-lou...Did I joust date myself? LOL I don't know if its me or not but the music today
just seems to be missing something. There's a few good bands out there today...but it's not like it used ta was.
KAP54
1,654 2008-06-08 23:46:40
Re: Mother Earth! (21 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Hi Helena
Ive just spent the last bit of time going back on a lot of the songs you have posted here. You truly have the gift to write beautiful lyrics.This is a very moving song that you wrote for your son.I especially like the line"Hickory Dickory Lost in Time" Has your son and new bride had the chance to hear it ?
There are also other songs you've posted but the links to hear them are not working.Do you have a site where a fan could have a listen.
Hope all is finding you well
KAP54
1,655 2008-06-08 21:37:21
Re: The Price of Gasoline (33 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
Joust came in the door from a long night and day getting "Toasted and Jam" party.My head hurts. Lots of good material coming in fer a well deserved song and maybe we'll find a warm home for Old Doll this coming winter. By the way Old Doll...My middle name is Mo.
KAP54
1,656 2008-06-08 21:27:55
Re: Cries for You (4 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Thank You seriousfun
For me the words were extremely difficult to come up with and it probably took me the better part of a year to write them down as I "needed them" to convey what people don't seem to talk about when suicides take place. Thats the people left behind.I do plan to record it some how so possibly it can help change the mind of at least one person.
As strong as the lyrics are I believe the melody is stronger and I "need it" to be recorded properly.
In my mind I visualize this as a Neil Diamond song.His voice is perfect for it.
Any ways ...Thank You Again
KAP54
1,657 2008-06-07 17:32:27
Re: The Price of Gasoline (33 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
My heat is natural gas and I dont know how much its gone up cause I dont wanna know but yer welcome to stay here except I fear it is much colder and snowier and miserabler in Southwestern Ontario in the winter.Yuck.
Present gas price is $1.35 per liter =$5.40 American
Present diesel price $1.40 per liter =$5.60 American
Thanks for the anecdotes ...I know theres a song in there
KAP54
1,658 2008-06-07 17:17:02
Re: Hold On (2 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Nice job seriousfun
Good progression and lyrics.Funny how the time flys by when yer havin fun
Keep on Pluckin
KAP54
1,659 2008-06-07 17:08:41
Re: Home County Time (15 replies, posted in Songwriting)
It seems we have common interests Old Gal.
Cool story about how rostrevor got its name. July is right around the corner so when you go to
the fiddlersgreen festival this year you'll have to take sum pics or vids to share with us.It looks like a beautiful place.Some day(or in my next life LOL) I'd love to travel to Ireland where green is green and fresh air abundant and maybe,just maybe I'll find my "Pot O Gold"
Cheers to You
KAP54
1,660 2008-06-07 16:24:29
Re: Feel the Breeze (10 replies, posted in Songwriting)
You just cant beat nature.By the by...fly fishing is a great sport that I have yet to try.I hope to one day.Thanks again Old Doll
1,661 2008-06-07 16:19:10
Re: Cries for You (4 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Thank You Again Old Doll
With my experiences I have come to the conclusion that all this crap happens because of a chemical imbalance due to genetics and a bad deal that life has dealt.It doesn't matter why, because what hurts the most is watching those left behind.
As I say...suicide is a long term solution to a short term problem.
Its most times hard to read someones thoughts when they are hurting....I wish I could
KAP54
1,662 2008-06-07 15:57:39
Topic: Image of You (4 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Wow... I'm all of a sudden I'm remembering all the old songs I wrote.For me thats kinda cool cause it tells me all my brain cells aren't burnt out.He-He
This song I wrote for my sons mother when she gave birth to him.With them in the hospital and me alone at home with my guitar.
Image Of Youby KAP54
1,663 2008-06-07 14:57:00
Re: To You A Lullabye (2 replies, posted in Songwriting)
No..Thank You Old Doll
It really would mean a great deal to me to have him listen to it. Evan though the love word isn't spoken enough between us I know he'll truly understand.
Thanks again for your kind words
KAP54
1,664 2008-06-07 14:18:58
Topic: To You A Lullabye (2 replies, posted in Songwriting)
This is a song I wrote when my son was born.He is 24 now and has never heard the song.Maybe I will show him on this forum and if I have the nerve and the voice I will sing it to him.(Me thinks I will need a few beers LOL) No verse or chorus. I am not sure what proper terms are but its done mostly fingerpicking
To You A Lullabye
C C Em/Am/G
Nighttime is full of fantasies if you close your eyes and drift into the sea,
G
The sea of love inside your mind.
G C
Go to sleep and you will find, what you have been seeking.
C C Em/Am/G
Giant trees with emerald leaves and babbling brooks the color of your eyes,
G
Blue as the early morning sky.
G C
Go to sleep and find , what you have been seeking.
Am G
Close your eyes don't be afraid and soon you'll see the love you've made.
Am G
Beho-o-o-o-o-o-o-old.
Am
The magic kingdom where love grows
Am F C G F C G
Where the musics made of solid go-o-o-o-o-o-ld m-m-m-m-m-m-m-m
Dm F C
Don't you worry baby don't be lonely.
C Dm F C
Though your mommas gone, your daddy is by your side.
Dm F C
If your feeling sad reach out and hold me
C Dm F C
Oh and I will sing to you a lullaby
Dm F C
Don't you worry baby don't be lonely.
C Dm F C
Though your mommas gone your daddy is by your side.
Dm F C
If your feeling sad reach out and hold me.
C Dm F C
Oh and I will sing to you a lullaby
1,665 2008-06-07 13:12:51
Re: What line of work are you in? (66 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
Great Thread...This year would have been my 30th year installing commercial and industrial overhead doors.Another company offered me a job in sales so now I don't struggle going up and down ladders ,I just struggle to make ends meat LOL I should of stayed were I was but I'm not as young as I used ta was.I made my bed so now I toss and turn in it. No complaints here.
1,666 2008-06-07 13:01:34
Topic: The Price of Gasoline (33 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
I am going to write a song about how gas prices are affecting life today.
The tittle will be "The Price of Gas Gives Me Gas"
In my home town of London Ontario Canada the price just jumped up 10 cents to $1.35 a litre.
I am new to this forum and in my short stay here I am finding my creative juices flowing again.
I have also noted that this forum has worldwide members and I am sure that what I am paying is far less than others.
It would be cool if I got a lot of responses on what prices others are paying and how it affects you
in order to give an honest overview of this quagmire we are in.
It has the makings of a great and topical song.
Hope to hear from ya
KAP54
1,667 2008-06-07 11:36:26
Re: writers block! (10 replies, posted in Songwriting)
kbrassel
When I have the dreaded writers block and am having a hard time coming up with lyrics I substitute all those syllables and vowels for words that don't make any sense at all. For example.....Jellyboo...filbertflange...jingy jingy...dopuumway and the list goes on. If have your melody, than fit words like these into your song and soon you'll come up with the right words.This makes it a fun way to get the right lyrics and dispel the dreaded writers block.Don't pressure yourself to finish the song.If its not working ...file it and come back to it later.
Keep on Pluckin
KAP54
1,668 2008-06-07 11:07:15
Re: Just Amazing! (5 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
I watched a show on autistic savants a couple years back and he was one of the features in it.
Truly an inspiring storys while at the same time extremely puzzling as to how the almighty brain works.
Thanks for bringing it up Old Doll
KAP54
1,669 2008-06-07 10:46:53
Re: Still In The Shack (3 replies, posted in Songwriting)
I'd love to ark but that will take some time as I have no means of recording or knowledge of how to get them posted.Unfortunately I have a bad phobia with micro-phones ,singing in public,the sound of my own voice and the list goes on.I write for my own pleasure with dreams of conquering my demons.(Hey... I think theres a song in there) If any body has some advice(besides a bottle of beer and a couple of doobies) that would be awesome.
Thanks again Ark
KAP54
1,670 2008-06-07 10:35:10
Re: Great World War 2 Story (7 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
Hey James
Thanks for the link.I love those stories about real people that put them selfs in harms way to protect others. Cool
1,671 2008-06-07 02:52:40
Topic: Still In The Shack (3 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Blue Grass Tune
Verse Still In The Shack
E G/A/E
Summertime in 1996.
E B7
Me and Bobby was hunting in the sticks.
B7 E A
We was looking for some deer to shoot and we went ten miles and all on foot.
E B7 E G/A/E
And then we found that shack to our surprise.
E G/A/E
Well we walked up to the windows cautiously.
E B7
And we wiped off all the dirt so we could see.
B7 E A A
Well I put my head up on the sill and said "Hey Bobby now theres a still"
E B7 E G/A/E
And he said glory be we gonna get drunk.
Chorus
E
Cause theres a still in the shack.
E A
Oh theres a still in the shack.
A E B7
Oh theres a still in the shack way out back.
B7 E A
And if we find any sign of that whiskey moonshine,
A E B7 E G/A/E
than we gonna drink it till the day we will die.
Verse
E G/A/E
So we busted down the door with one good kick.
E B7
We fought our way through cobwebs two feet thick.
B7 E
Then Bobby fell and he scraped his knees,
A
and I got stung by thirteen bees.
E B7 E G/A/E
So we retreated back into the woods.
E G/A/E
Now the bee stings that I had started to swell.
E B7
And I heard Bobby swearing all to hell.
E A A
He said that we ain't lost yet we'll get that booze and thats a bet
E B7 E G/A/E
Theres no one here its free man its all ours
Chorus
E
Cause theres a still in the shack.
E A
Oh theres a still in the shack .
A E B7
Oh theres a still in the shack way out back.
B7 E A
Well if we find any sign of that whiskey moonshine,
A E B7 E G/A/E
then we gonna drink it till the day that we will die.
Verse
E G/A/E
So we waited by the shack until night fell.
E B7
We mounted our assault and it went well.
B7 E A
Well we stole two jugs of whiskey lightning and we got drunk and took to fighting,
E B7 E G/A/E
And then we both past out so naturally.
E G/A/E
When I woke up I thought that I was dead.
E B7
It felt like all those bees was in my head.
B7 E E A A
Then I looked at Bobby and I had to grin,his eyes were black as black as sin
E B7 E G/A/E
Now I thought Bobby boy that ain't bad booze
Chorus
E
Oh theres a still in the shack.
E A
Oh theres a still in the shack.
A E B7
Oh theres a still in the shack way out back.
B7 E A A
And when we find all that shine ,all that whiskey moon shine.
A E B7 E G/A/E
We gonna drink it till the day that we will die
E G/A/E
Oh theres a still
E G/A/E
In that shack.
E G/A/E B7
Oh theres a still in that shack way out back.
E E
With the bees around here it is too warm
A A
We'll wait until a winter storm
E B7 E G/A/E G/A/E G/A/E B7 E
When the bees are hibernating in there hive
1,672 2008-06-07 01:03:33
Re: my first song comments please (11 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Hi Telemaster17
Lots of good advice for your good lyrics.what you gotta do is put yourself in a room all by yourself with no distractions and just fart around with your guitar. You already have the words , when I get stuck trying to find a melody I use words like jaberwing wing and filbertflange. nothing that makes sense.It seems to take the pressure off makes it fun and before you know it .....you'll have a melody.If you still cant find the right melody for your song than put it aside and work on another tune.I'm guessing everybody here has tons of half written songs.
Good Luck and keep on pluckin
1,673 2008-06-07 00:47:08
Topic: Cries for You (4 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Again I have to say thanks for the inspiration to get back to songwriting.
This song I started ages ago...forgot about it...remembered it today...today finished it.
In my life I have known a number of good friends that have committed suicide so I wrote this song hoping that if it ever got published it would make somebody think twice ,because "suicide is a long term solution to a short term problem"
Verse Cries For You
C
I hear your momma crying,cause she looks around the room and she finds your gone.
F G
She cries for you
C
She knows you loved to laugh and now she knows that time is past and so.
F G
She cries for you
F C Dm G
In the middle of the daytime and in the nighttime cause you gone
C G7 C
Now she awakes and sees your face and deep inside her soul she cries for you
Chorus
F C G C
Sometimes your feelings reach out but the ceilings to high for your fingers to reach all alone
F C
And then comes illusion and lonely confusion .
Dm Dm Dm G7
No time to walk, no time to talk,no time to say goodbye
Verse
C
Now I hear your daddy lying cause he looks around the room and finds your gone
F G
He lies for you
C
The emptiness he feels inside just cant accept your suicide.
F G
So he lies for you
F C Dm G
In the middle of the daytime and in the nighttime cause your gone.
C G7 C
Now he awakes and sees your face and deep inside his soul he lies for you
Chorus
F C G C
Sometimes your feelings reach out but the ceilings to high for your fingers to reach all alone
F C
And then comes illusion and lonely confusion
Dm Dm Dm G7
No time to walk,no time to talk,no time to say goodbye
Verse
C
Now I see your lady trying but she looks around the room and she finds you gone
F G
But she tries for you
C
She struggles hard to find the way to make it through another day
F G
But she tries for you
F C Dm G
In the middle of the daytime,and in the nighttime cause your gone.
C G7 C
Now she awakes and sees your face and deep inside her soul she tries for you.
Verse (Vocal with baby crying in the background)
C
Now I see your baby crying cause he looks around the room and he finds your gone.
F G
He cries for you.
C
He knows you loved to laugh and now he knows that time is passed and so
F G
He cries for you
F C Dm G
In the middle of the daytime and in the nighttime cause your gone
C G7 C
Now he awakes and sees your face and deep inside his soul he cries for you.
Chorus
F C G C
Sometimes your feelings reach out but the ceilings to high for your fingers to reach all alone
F C
And then comes illusion and lonely confusion
Dm Dm Dm G7
No time to walk,no time to talk, no time to say goodbye
Fade out
C C
Now I see your momma crying..................Now I see your momma crying
1,674 2008-06-06 22:37:45
Re: Feel the Breeze (10 replies, posted in Songwriting)
No Doubt about it. It was sweet except for the 50' walk down the hill to get a bucket of water to flush the toilet.LOL
Thanks Again
PS Check my WW2 story in chordie chat
1,675 2008-06-06 22:34:25
Re: Home County Time (15 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Thanks daddycool. It was a great time to be alive