Hi
Thanks to all for the positive comments. It's certainly encouraging to get nice feedback from other budding song writers.

Regards

Ark

Hi bonedaddy
Another good number your've done here.
The lyrics are what alot of people can identify with. I can see alot of thought went into them.
Well done
Regards

Ark

Hi bonedaddy
This is good and very original The chord progression is spot on. The Dm to A  gives the song something and I like it.
The lyrics are personal (as is the religion thing) but in my opinion they are right on the money.
All in all a Great first song.

Regards

Arkady

Wow.... Roger that's a real good job you've done with those lyrics.
Enjoyed it a lot.
Well done.

Ark

Lena this follows on from your post on the song writing forum I thought it sort of slipped off topic a bit
and I didn’t want to bring down the gentle wrath of our Moderators. lol

There’s an saying that goes “Every person has a book in them all I can say Lena is you must have a library.
It’s a pleasure to read  your responses.
It’s funny in life some people leave lasting impressions while others just fade away.
Your circus man certainly did that for you.
I don’t really know much about Irelands politics but I know the R.C. church  had a big hand in holding up political change and so held back the rights of people especially women’s.                                                 
The right of women to have legal abortions was especially held back.
You being apart of getting some change must  have given you satisfying sense of achievement .
Lena sorry I asked you a question lol……No way.

Regards

Ark

Lena I'm jealous.....Words trip off your pen like the fall leaves on a windy Autumn day.
and that took me half a day to think up! lol
Ever thought about writing a poety book.

Regards
Arkady

These guitar aces
Give me 50percent inspiration and 50percent desperation. Not necessarily in that order.
I pick up my guitar and think........Is this the same instrument lol

Ark

Hi Des
The boy quit chordie in a huff a while ago.
Who knows he maybe back on under another id.....I don't think so  though. He was shall we say a little "different"

The saying
If it ain’t broke, don’t fix it  was popularized by politician Bert Lance in December 1976, referring to the machine of the federal government in America.

Arkady

Hi Roger
Great song. Excellent recording.
Read alot of sci- fi fantasy over the years. Mainly the so called classics. Asimov, Arthur C. Clarke, Philip K. Dick, Robert Heinlein to name a few.
Liked the Dune series by Frank Herbert.

Regards
Arkady

Hello
Des From Liverpool.

Arkady

Hi

Have been reading all my life never been without a book .
Generally I will read any book that takes my fancy. Books made into films are usually a good read.
Good film usually equates to a better book.
Some that stick in my mind…

One Flew Over the Cuckoo's Nest…...Ken Kesey
To kill a Mocking Bird…….Harper Lee
Cider House Rules……. John Irving
Band of Brothers………Stephen Ambrose
Caine Mutiny………Herman Wouk.
The list could go on.
Just finished Blackhawk Down  Mark Bowden.

Arkady