Thanks for the comments - I'm finding it hard to get my head through the door these days !
127 2009-01-27 07:19:12
Re: Promised Land - Bluegrass Maybe? (2 replies, posted in Poems)
Hi unhhuh,
I like the energy in this. Not sure what all of it means, but I'm getting the drift.
BTW I like your use of half rhymes ( show - clothes , land - am ) - it makes the lyric more conversational.
128 2009-01-26 22:06:56
Re: ODE TO BUSH (12 replies, posted in Poems)
That history is written by the victors
Seems to be one of history's strictures,
It's Obama's turn, as once it was Bush's,
It's all just jostling, elbows and pushes.
129 2009-01-26 21:19:53
Re: ODE TO BUSH (12 replies, posted in Poems)
When W comes Marching Home.
Let's leave the man to have his rest,
The worst he did was just his best,
It was his friends that egged him on,
He was their airhead, gormless pawn.
Did anyone else think as I did,
For the last year he was deliberately hid
Kept in the back by the same careless friends
Till McCain was beat and it all came to an end.
So the poor guy looks back now to study his legacy,
Broken down levees, war and despondency.
Think of his shame, as he walks off the set,
How much less missed can one President get ?
130 2009-01-26 13:17:28
Re: English music or foriegn? (4 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
I love the sound of Irish songs, sung in gaelic, preferably by a dark haired woman, by the lake, in the summer evening, with the wind rippling the lake water, the occasional cry of the curlew, with ice in my whiskey and her smiling at me.
131 2009-01-25 19:40:08
Re: Address to a veggie haggis (7 replies, posted in Poems)
Found this on thesession.org.
It's "Tae a Fart" - a Burns send-up.
132 2009-01-25 09:21:22
Topic: Brand New Pin (1 replies, posted in Poems)
This is a lyric I'm still working on.
It's about growing up in a war zone, when crazy things explode around you and you just have to cope. I was 9 when the Northern Ireland troubles exploded - and 34 when the ceasefires came - and we're still working on it - the peace that is.
Brand New Pin
How'd you like to start again,
Brand new pin in a baby pen
Looking through the bars out at the world?
Ready again to face the sun.
Ready and steady with races to run
Like this here life had never ever been.
Well you contradicted me,
Told me it could never be
That that little kid would be somebody else.
You said something about nature nurture,
My past wouldn't be their future,
Because of all the things that come by chance.
Well, what if it could be they knew
Every single thing I knew,
All the way back to the very start?
You said that for all I'd try,
That child would be sure to cry
At diff'rent things, at diff'rent times than I.
It wouldn't ever know my mother,
Or grow tall with my sister 'n' brother,
Wouldn't know the bombing and the pain.
And that one brought me to a shuddering halt,
Thinking 'bout the horrors that weren't my fault.
No child ought to grow the way I grew.
Soldiers on the streets, searches and car blasts,
The painful pictures locked up in my past.
All the anger at the men who stole my youth.
Who would wish that a child might live,
Learn to hate and never forgive,
Or shut their wounded heart in a bitter chest.
So the kid in the pen will be set free.
Ill content with the hours in front of me,
Thanks to the therapy session on your couch.
133 2009-01-25 08:00:16
Re: "Forgetful" (11 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Hi Jeff,
Great song - pity i couldn't ever sing it. It's too close for comfort.
There have been times when I've forgotten something REALLY important and herself has said
" A year after I'm gone, you'll forget me too!" Now that's just not fair . . .
134 2009-01-24 09:35:05
Topic: Bring You Home. (6 replies, posted in Songwriting)
OK - This is the song version of a poem / lyrics I posted on inauguration day. Since my last song post, I've been figuring out all that recording stuff and have finally bought a mic, so you can expect some really bad recordings sometime in the next 50 years or so - doesn't work get in the way of your real life!
Again, I've posted it in C, though I can only sing in Eb and F.
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135 2009-01-22 07:36:46
Re: Need A Bit Of Help With A Translation? (12 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
Fountaineaux could also be translated as the waters of the fountain, but it's more likely to be a placename.
I wonder if Fountaineaux is a corruption of Fountainbleau - it's a town with the largest Chateau in France - just outside Paris ( http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ch%C3%A2te … tainebleau ).
There would certainly have been many a rockin party there in the distant past - "Say, hit me with that Frere Jacques, man." "Well, pass me my sackbut, son."
136 2009-01-20 21:59:57
Re: where next....? (30 replies, posted in Acoustic)
Hi Radchael,
No. not sure what your wiggle is, but an arpeggio is just a string of notes. It can be in any order.
Just listen to the tune of the song. You can try to pick out the individual notes of the tune.
You may know Bonnie Tylers " It's a Heartache". Think of the part of the song when she sings " It's a Heart Ache . . ." A very simple version of what I'm talking about would be to play E ( 2nd fret D string), D ( Open D string) and then start strumming a C chord.
You can play this by fretting a C chord, hitting the note E, lifting your middle finger for the note D - then dropping it back down for the C chord. It's like getting the guitar to sing the melody.
You can then extend that by working out more melody lines as you go through the song. Its all about finding on the guitar the noes that your ears are hearing.
Hope that doesn't sound too complicated - it's really only lifting and replacing one finger.
137 2009-01-20 13:35:22
Re: Taunted Dreams. Helena Donovan. (4 replies, posted in Poems)
Hi Lena,
Sorry - I'm on a roll at the minute
If I, once stung, had dropped that ball,
Watched it roll, saw it fall
Beyond the limits of my outstretched hand.
I might have bled at night, like you,
But I've the sting and her ball too
Though precious poison beats this wedding band.
138 2009-01-20 13:01:05
Re: New President (5 replies, posted in Poems)
Cheers, Phil
Expectation is a terrible thing
I don't believe in crossing my fingers,
Want to keep them tight on the tiller
Gotta guide this boat home by the stars
Here's hoping this hope
Ain't one hope too far.
139 2009-01-20 07:49:59
Topic: New President (5 replies, posted in Poems)
This is my message to Barak Obama. Wishing him and everyone across the pond the best for the next 4 years.
"Bring You Home.
What all can one man mean,
long awaited, sight unseen?
Could you be the one
That brings us home?
We are all just walking down the road,
No place to settle.
Just bivouacs and fires,
Waiting for the someone
To lead us from the cold
Every man and woman on this road
Sees the situation and we know
That action is the watchword.
Now it's time to go.
I'm not looking for a shepherd
I can work and keep my word.
These hard hands are itching
To work for good
Won't dump my pain on one black man.
Just want someone to draft the plan
If you can hoist the flag
We'll shake your hand.
We've a forest of willing shoulders
To heave aside those blocking boulders.
Bring us peace and we will
Bring you home."
140 2009-01-19 07:40:55
Re: where next....? (30 replies, posted in Acoustic)
chords with arpeggio moving lines
You mention that other people might not recognise the song if you just played the chords. Russell has a point here. One of the simplest ways to spice up your playing is to add single note runs into your play.
Most songs will have a recognisable intro which you can play on single notes and then launch into a strum when you happen upon a longer note. Keep your fingers in the chord shape as best you can when playing the single notes. You can then add other arpeggio's as you move through the song.
It's a bit like learning a different strum pattern.
141 2009-01-18 21:12:46
Re: the use of reverb (15 replies, posted in Recording)
Who played the bass ? Simon used a lot of Black SA musicians on the album for their specific sound. I was involved in a lot of discussions at the time over whether the album should be boycotted, but it was agreed that using the musicians didn't mean he endorsed apartheid. Could it have been a Soweto thing ?
142 2009-01-18 21:03:52
Re: My Guitar Song (6 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Like it - a bit of Townes Van Z in there.
That is one surreal solo, btw.
143 2009-01-17 10:03:08
Re: Beatles & Eolling Stones (3 replies, posted in Bands and artists)
If you are looking for stories about the writing of particular songs, the BBC have a long list of songs with detail about their writing. For instance, "blew his mind out in a car" from A Day in the life by Lennon / McCartney was about guiness heiress Tara Browne.
You can access this at http://www.bbc.co.uk/radio2/soldonsong/songlibrary/ .
144 2009-01-17 09:24:29
Re: Address to a veggie haggis (7 replies, posted in Poems)
Great stuff, but there'll be no veggie haggis for me !
We do Burns Night in Northern Ireland too - most of the planters in Antrim and Down came from the Lowlands and Borders, so there's areal afinity for his "hamely" tongue. My mother's people originally came from Dumfries ( about 200 years ago ). They were millers and settled in Larne.
I serve haggis on Burns night once a year, but have to serve sausage as well ( not the square stuff ), because the weemin of the house have tricksy tummies - or so they say on Burns Night - but at least it's all meat !
145 2009-01-16 07:35:17
Re: Pomes penny each ! (6 replies, posted in Poems)
Selso,
Thanks for the comments. The thing I find most difficult is finding the story. Dividing the story across a number of verses and finding the right words come fairly easy. What I've noticed, however, is that many of the lyrics need to change over a day or two and you just need to let that happen. I suppose I'm always conscious of asking the question "Does this mean what I'm thinking?"
Also, you will only see the better ones here. There are loads that hit the bottom of the basket.
Hi Phil,
A Rat ? Hey, I have a ring on my finger ; )
146 2009-01-14 19:49:06
Topic: Mary Anne's Grave. (1 replies, posted in Poems)
I'm sitting in a hotel in London, after a long day of meetings, and this lyric pops into the world.
It's in in the tradition of a lot of Irish songs - so many friends and family left never to return.
Some words need translation - whin ( pronounced h-win ) is a gorse bush, a buck is a young man, and a blade a young woman. The places are all real, all around Cushendall on the Antrim Coast. I'll work on the melody when I get home.
"Mary Anne's Grave.
High on the Hillside,
In a cleft in the cliff wall
The old Church communes
With the South coast of Mull.
And I walked you there often
Along the cliff path
where the stark head of Garron
shelters Glenariffe.
It's there that I led you,
And there that we lay
Across Mary-Anne's gravestone
And consecrated the day.
But youth and all its vigour,
Would brook no return
To the moss and yellow lichen
on Mary-Anne's tomb.
We traveled and I held you
Close all those years
While the little Church at Layde
Stood proud among the trees.
But time it gets the better of us,
Despite what we try.
There are hospitals and sea cures,
But in the end we all die
Now I rolled my wheelchair
Down to Layde Church
Where the green of the sea
and the whin bushes merge
And startled a buck
To rise from his blade
Just as I did from you girl
When our bed we first made.
So I'll sit in McConnell's
In the back kitchen bar
And sing there with old friends
And remember the hours
that we dreamed of returning
To Ireland to stay
and visit that churchyard
And Mary-Anne's grave."
147 2009-01-14 18:42:10
Topic: In the worst of times . . . (2 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
Well, we are living in gloomy times, but what do we turn to when the going get's tough - well turns out that we turn to music. HMV ( a big music store in the UK ) has just announced that it's profits rose by 3% over Xmas !
148 2009-01-14 18:27:53
Re: Pomes penny each ! (6 replies, posted in Poems)
Thanks, Lena.
Guess we all have to start somewhere.
149 2009-01-11 23:50:06
Re: Playing Level (26 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
A little knowledge goes a long way - I have always found !
150 2009-01-11 09:25:15
Re: Straight Forward Blunt (8 replies, posted in Poems)
Yes, it's a twisted world.
And there, if I'm not mistaken, is another song . . . I'll see you later . . .