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Thanks jets60, it made me smile that you could get what I'm going for.  Yes sometime you try to make it better and it ends up worse. I will do another recording as the drums and bass are a bit weak. Glad you enjoyed it.     

Great song Brian i like the added strumming with the finger picking.

I cant sing that good Jim but it doesn't
stop me. Yes my dad is good to me . Hopefully it will help with my creativity.     

Thanks Phill ill post when its done. I surprise myself some times i start of going in one direction them bam the words just come from nowhere. I was playing around yesterday and come up with something that sounds ok folky or maybe im thinking as a western film opening track i would love to put a story lyric to it but my minds blank a the mo. I cant post the music as it realy rough me humming and whistling over guitar with added bass and sort of a drum track i played on keyboard. Im no drummer so sort off out of sync and made up as went along. Hard to keep playing for over 3mins.     

Cheers Phill made me feel good to know it brought back memories for you. Ill look them up when i get the chance.     

Thanks Classical Guitar, glad you liked it ,the tune came one day when i was whistling,as i always do when im out and about. Anyway it stuck so i wrote The Awakening around that.     

Thanks Russell, it will do great then, can wait to test it when i get a lead and power supply.     

Cheers Phill I may keep them in. I cant play piano that good,HAHA!

I wrote some lyrics and added the chords im using so far ,what do you think?

Chords A5 : Asus4 : Eb6/9 /G : C/G : F : Fadd9 : Csus4/F

You’re a rainbow fallen angel

Chorus
You’re a rainbow You're a rainbow you’re a rainbow
You’re a rainbow You're a rainbow You’re a rainbow
You’re a rainbow fallen angel

Verse 1
I"ve seen you out on the disco floor
With your bright blue hair, dressed like a whore
Millennial child,  that’s a crazy way you live
You treat your men like your upgrading  a phone
The rest of the fools are trapped in your friend zone
Feeding your lifestyle of all take and no give.

Chorus
You’re a rainbow you’re a rainbow your"e a rainbow
You’re a rainbow you’re a rainbow Your"e a rainbow
you’re a rainbow  fallen angel

verse 2
You give me the eye, so i take the chance
And make my way over to where you dance
The way that you move fills me with desire
Your pull is so strong i don’t care that it wrong
I know tomorrow that you'll be gone
So for tonight I'm going to set your world on fire

Chorus
You're  a rainbow you’re a rainbow You're  a rainbow
You're a rainbow you’re a rainbow You're a rainbow
You're  a rainbow fallen angel

Bridge
Oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh hit me with your kaleidoscope
Oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh hit me with your kaleidoscope

Chorus
You’re a rainbow you’re a rainbow You’re a rainbow
You’re a rainbow you’re a rainbow You’re a rainbow
you’re a rainbow  fallen angel
You’re a rainbow you’re a rainbow You’re a rainbow
You’re a rainbow you’re a rainbow You’re a rainbow
you’re a rainbow  fallen angel

Cheers Phill,I bought me a 18 year old Technics kn 6000 for £190 ,because i wanted to get away from the computer,its nice to just sit down and play around until you get something good going,the record to my 8 track(need more tracks).Also I just got a book on arranging songs so hopefully it will help when building a song. Ill post when put the words in ,i hear something but its a bit messed up.     

Thanks neophytte for your incouraging words. Ill write that on a piece of card and put it where i write my songs.     

Thanks neophytte i have lots of ideas but i havent got the musical knowledge to finish them.