976 Reply by daddycool

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hi selso its great just being able to create a song and the pleasure of playing them after,thanks for your comments....stay cool

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977 Reply by daddycool

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hi trevor i can't afford to risk losing my 40yrs  service lump sum when i retire,so i'm afraid i'll have to take it on the chin and grin and bear it,it sucks but what other option is there....stay cool

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978 Reply by daddycool

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hi trevor sounds like you need some buffers like on a dodgem car,once is hard luck,twice is unbelievable,as long as your ok and nobodys hurt you can always replace a motor.....stay cool

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979 Reply by daddycool

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hi holder23 here is a link to the song

http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/tabs/j/j … or_crd.htm

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980 Reply by daddycool

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hi holder23 welcome to chordie,i've just looked at two video's of the song and it lookslike the chords are" PICKED" so you won't need a strumming pattern just pick the chords to the right speed of the song,the other query you should do some practicing just changing from chord to chord,then do some strumming patterns,then add them gradually together picking an easy song that you know then progress to other songs as you get more confident,have fun....stay cool

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981 Reply by daddycool

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hi selso,kenny i'm not a happy chappie whilst this lot is going down,we've drawn the short straw again,thanks for your comments......stay cool

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982 Reply by daddycool

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hi kenny,stransongs malcolms ok just a bit of paint exchange,there was a big que of traffic so he thought he'd save time going round,these things happen,i told him you can always replace metal,as long as there's no injurys thatsthe most important issue,thanks for your comments.....stay cool

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983 Topic by daddycool

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Chordpro error: This is not a valid artistname. You will have to specify an artistname in the form {st: Artistname} in the beginning of the code.

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984 Topic by daddycool

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Chordpro error: This is not a valid artistname. You will have to specify an artistname in the form {st: Artistname} in the beginning of the code.

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985 Reply by daddycool

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hi badeye fancy chucking your cuppa away,nothing like a good brew,great song.....stay cool

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986 Reply by daddycool

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hi phill thats got to be X FACTOR quality,listened to both versions,BRILLIANT,keep em coming....stay cool

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987 Reply by daddycool

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hi stransongs a load of feelings in this one,great lyrics it'll make a nice recording,ps we've been moved next door while ours is renovated so we're like in the same boat,hope to be back in by end of month after we've redecorated ect ect.....stay cool

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988 Reply by daddycool

(9 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

hi guys its great when we all come together for one cause,or any cause,wer're just one big happy family.love to helena and her family....stay cool

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989 Reply by daddycool

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ctech wrote:

If I see you in another way

Slow ballad

Intro

Verse 1

[C]All the time,[F]you were there,
[C]can't understand why,I did'nt[G] run to you,
[C]I miss-treated your trust,I can[F] lie no more,
[G]Is it to late?,I'm[C] so confused,

Chorus

[F]If I could see you in[C] another way,
Would you [F]hold me in your [C]arms,
If[F] I could see you in[C] another way,
[G]Would you let me [C]stay,
[F]would my devotion[C] make the difference,
[G]would your tears[C] fade away,
[F]would it bring a [C]smile to your face,
If I[G] see you in another [C]way,
[G]In a different[C] way-----

Verse 2

[C]Love is a[F] strange em[C]otion,
[F]Sometimes you dont know its [C]th-e-re,
[F]Please don't[C] walk away,I [G]need you to[C] stay-,
[G]Give me the chance,to [C]show you i can care

Chorus repeat

Bridge

[C]I was wrong,this [G]life belongs to a[C] fool.
[F]Will you forgive me,[C]say that you do,
Cos[G] i can't stand the thought of[C] living without [G]you.


Chorus repeat to end

Lyrics by Trevor Scrivens 20/12/88

I wrote these lyrics back in 1984,I had just met the mother of my children,but was also seeing another girl i had grown up with, anyway to cut along story short. I felt guilty and told her I was sleeping with this other girl,she cried n cried & that's when I wrote this for her and got it made into a song,we ended up staying together for 13 years and had 3 children,I got someone to write the melody and arrange it for me,but have long lost the score,
moving from home to home,if anyone on chordie would like to put this lyric to music i would love to hear from you.
The original was in the key of G then modulated to Ab on the chorus,But you can do it how you like.

HI TREVOR I HAVE'NT PLAYED IT BUT THIS IS HOW IT LOOKS TO ME.....STAY COOL

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990 Reply by daddycool

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hi mike welcome to chordie,great lyrics,looks like a rock song,like to hear recording,well done....stay cool

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991 Reply by daddycool

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hi trevor great song/lyrics,you'll soon have emptied your archives at this rate,keep em coming....stay cool

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992 Reply by daddycool

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hi s.n.s they aren't bad i use them all the time.....stay cool

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993 Reply by daddycool

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hi trevor got to keep em sweet lol,i only use about 12 chords all on the first three frets,don't do barr chords,don't do tabs,but i survive.....stay cool

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994 Reply by daddycool

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hi phill i just love your country n western sound it kinda rolls off the tonge,great recordings,keep em coming.....stay cool

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995 Reply by daddycool

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hi trevor how many more you got hidden in the closet,a great song nice lyrics.....stay cool

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996 Reply by daddycool

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hi kenny she'll look to her fold through hell and high water,nobody can say a bad word about her babies,she's brilliant though could'nt ask for better,thanks for your  comments....stay cool

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997 Topic by daddycool

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Chordpro error: This is not a valid artistname. You will have to specify an artistname in the form {st: Artistname} in the beginning of the code.

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998 Reply by daddycool

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hi ark i used to help them mess up then mrs would end up cleaning ha ha,she did'nt think it was funny,thanks for your comments.....stay cool

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999 Reply by daddycool

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hi kenny,selso when you're told after 40yrs *you need to get more experience*it makes me wonder what they think i've been doing since 1969 ,thanks for your comments....stay cool

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1,000 Reply by daddycool

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hi selso she is developing her senses,bit messy but fun to watch or you could record these moments for many memories as they grow ,have a jelly on you ,stay cool

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