76

(13 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hi Phil,

I just have a thing for acoustic, so for me, it's the acoustic version. Acoustic just seems more honest, earthy and real.

77

(8 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Thanks for the comments.

I'd say I'm getting better at the recording business, but still making basic errors. I'm used to playing and singing together, but these last two were recorded as two different tracks, guitar and then vocal. The most obvious error is in the arrangement.

I regularly leave out the two or three counts between chorus and verse when I am laying down the guitar track, particularly at the start. The best answer to this that I know is to take my time to learn the arrangement, but there are times when I'm ready to scream with frustration at it.

78

(27 replies, posted in Electric)

I started off by playing the violin. The school decided I should learn it. They sat the class down and asked us loads of questions like what note was higher than another. Myself and a mate were sharing one pencil between us ( those were the days when you got caned for forgetting your pencil ) so we just filled in anything. I got chosen to play the violin - somehow.

The guitar was my choice, for passing my 11+. I was bought a Bert Weedon Play in a Day tutor book -= and gave up. Then I got dragged around the corner by the ear for a lesson with a guy who played jazz. He taught me Tom Dooley - just two chords - and i was on my way.

79

(8 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hi,

I've just got two more recordings up. They are -


Do You See that Star. ( Original Post at http://www.chordie.com/forum/viewtopic.php?id=10817 )

I Can't Look at You Tonight. ( Original Post at http://www.chordie.com/forum/viewtopic.php?id=10932 )

They are available on

http://www.myspace.com/alansheeran

80

(77 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

My first guitar was a japanese classical. It's a bit boomy and mellow - I have abused it mightily over the years and still have it.

My first steel string was also japanese, but is a bit of a mystery.

It is a Yoshi, which ( honest to goodness ) is built like a Martin and has a bray like a mule when you tear into it. It'll cut diamonds. It is also the strangest looking thing as it is flame maple top, back and sides.

I think it's all solid wood, because you can see the flame on the inside of the box as well as on the outside. The box is bound, and the neck is rosewood with what looks like rosewood binding, so it's a very "woody" looking beast.

81

(4 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hi,

Thanks for the comments.

Yes, age is a subjective thing (?!)

I'm working on three recordings at the minute. Been futtering with multiple tracks ( the mandolin sounds so sweet on some of them). but things just got confused. So I will be keeping it to two tracks per song.

82

(5 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hi Selso,

Love the sense of rythm in your recordings.

On the chordpro issue, try (soc) (but change it to curly brackets) at the start of your chorus and (eoc) (again change to curly brackets) at the end of your chorus.

83

(4 replies, posted in Songwriting)

These days it seems like "OLD" starts at about the age of twenty-five.





Chordpro error: This is not a valid artistname. You will have to specify an artistname in the form {st: Artistname} in the beginning of the code.

84

(1 replies, posted in Poems)

VEGETARIAN: DOESN'T EAT MEAT
VEGANIST: DOESN'T EAT FISH, EGGS.... Fruit Bat don't eat ....

Winter's a hard time for fruit bats
I hang upside-down-hungry all day
Arthur, my brother
Says blood is the answer
With a strange kinda look in his eye.

But like me he's no fangs
For those kinda thangs
So I'll dream of spittin pips
And lickin up drips
And I guess by next Thursday I'll die.

85

(13 replies, posted in Poems)

Hi Marcalan,

I see your son-in-law has a Belfast connection, I have had the pleasure of eating in most of the places he has cooked in in Belfast.  Wish him a happy St Patrick's Day - it's only a couple of weeks away. He may be interested to hear that the Rankins are supposed to have gone bust and are fighting to save Cayenne. Apparently Paul is cooking.

86

(7 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hi Lena,

I suppose it's all part of the human condition. Here's wishing your neice all the best!

I remember a line in an Anglo-saxon poem I studied once ( yes, I am that old !). Translated, it meant "Life is lean". And I suppose there are times when that is very true.

It always fascinated me that we could read ancient poetry ( most of which was sung) and empathise with the feelings of people at that time. The only thing that is missing is the music.

87

(13 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hi,

Great Lyrics, Phil.

Did you ever hear Guy Clarke's song "Always trust your Cape"? This reminded me of it - in a good way, I hasten to add.

Guy's lyric goes -

Eight years old with a flour sack cape
Tied all around his neck
He climbed up on the garage
Figurin’ what the heck
He screwed his courage up so tight
The whole thing come unwound
He got a runnin’ start and bless his heart
He headed for the ground…

88

(7 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hi,

Thanks for the comments. Russell - yes it has that little swing to it.

Phil - I know where you're at. I  had two otherplacealtogether-ectomies for suspected prostate cancer about five years ago.  Just getting the clear results was like scoring in the Champions' league.

I was determined not to play Gdim !

89

(7 replies, posted in Songwriting)

I suppose many of us have had a health  "scare" on the course of our lives. Mine came a few years ago, and after months of tests, I was given the all clear. On the way there, however, I spoke with many guys who were going through the same thing. This is for all of them.

We all agreed that it was hardest on our partners.



Chordpro error: This is not a valid artistname. You will have to specify an artistname in the form {st: Artistname} in the beginning of the code.

90

(12 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Well, I suppose I'll give it a bye.

I'm working on an A7sus2 for a melody for a poem I've already posted. But that's because you only have to move one finger to play the whole song.

91

(12 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Gdim !  The man uses Gdim !!

92

(4 replies, posted in Poems)

Hi Phil,

This reminds me of my Aunt. She used to sit by the open fire with a teapot with a tea cosy sitting on the hearth. It would sit for hours brewing, and she would sip away.  She liked the brew so strong that your teeth would squeek if you had a cup.

93

(10 replies, posted in Songwriting)

You are all very kind, thank you for the comments.

The one thing I learnt doing this is that it takes as long to learn your own songs as it takes to learn other peoples'. In hindsight, why that should be a revelation I don't know, but it was.

The original posts were at

Bring You Home
http://www.chordie.com/forum/viewtopic.php?id=10619


If you weren't so coy
http://www.chordie.com/forum/viewtopic.php?id=10454

94

(10 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hi,

OK - these are my first recordings going up. They are miles from what I want them to be, but I do want you to hear them. They are all recorded straight acoustic to one mic - hence the back of the room guitar sound.

They are "If you weren't so coy" and "Bring me home".

http://www.myspace.com/alansheeran

I'm now working on recording the elements separately, which will hopefully result in something a bit more sophisticated - but these things take time. Writing tends to get in the way of this, but I'm concentrating on the writing.

95

(4 replies, posted in Poems)

A powerful little piece, Phil.

96

(13 replies, posted in Poems)

Love the theme, Buvvy - I know there's a tune here somewhere . . .

Lord won't you buy me
A carrot to chew,
A legume would do lovely
Or an artichoke stew.
Don't give me veal cutlets
For I know I would spew.
So lord won't you buy me
A carrot to chew.

97

(5 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hi, everyone,

Thanks for the comments. North Ridge was, as far as I remember, north of Barrie (straight up the 401 ? Isn't that Yonge St too ?). We were there in '91. It was an adults only resort, meaning no kids, rather than anything else. It had everything, including a hot tub.

There was the obligatory lake ( Canada should export lakes to the rest of the world !). I wrote a poem about a heart beating in the lake - Canada's heart - there was a heart shaped stone that seemed to pulse in the  waves.

I played this to her - and she collapsed in a fit of giggles - and then . . .

98

(5 replies, posted in Songwriting)

This was written for my Valentine.

Memories of a night in a place called North Ridge - north of Toronto. Living in the City, the light polution hides the stars. North Ridge was a revelation - in more ways than one.

This song has no chorus - sort of . . .



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99

(8 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hi Phil,

The lady in your song is definitely in the wrong place - some guys pay a lot of money for that type of treatment !

Roger,

Thank you sir.

Sure we all have our wee lacunae. Since coming onto this site I have picked up a number of interesting "finds" - UYK mentioned Richard Thompson who I hadn't heard before, and someone else mentioned "The  Waybacks* which I found of great value

Mind you, having "you tubed" the Lee lady, I'm still none the wiser why she got to number 1. Ain't that the way ?