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(9 replies, posted in Songwriting)

I struggled with this one and I noticed it was changing even as I sang it.
there's the link https://soundcloud.com/sak-26/the-moreporkmp3


The Morepork

[C] The morepork calls out to the moon, I [G] lay awake in bed
[Am] Sleep isn’t coming fast, things [F] running through my head
[C] Alone in bed, outside a frost is [G] covering the ground
[Am] The morepork calls his mournful call, it [ F] is a forlorn  sound
Chorus:
[C] Oh Morepork with your sad sad song [F] I hear you singin all night long
[C] Oh Morepork with your sad sad song [F] I hear you singin [G] all night [C]long

[C] He’s sings his love song to the moon that [G] is so far away
[Am] He goes on calling through the night and [F] sleeps all though the day
[C] There’s something haunting in his song that [G] sounds so very sad
[Am] I relax and listen, and I think [F]  things are not so bad
Chorus:
[C] The morepork is a friend of mine he [G]calls out from the gloom
[Am]There’s something kindred in his song as I [F]  listen from my room
[C] His love is very far away and [G] though the night he cries
[Am] The moon just sits and listens as [F] time just passes by

Chorus:
[C] Oh Morepork with your sad sad song [F] I hear you singin all night long
[C] Oh Morepork with your sad sad song [F] I hear you singin [G] all night [C]long

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(8 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Cecil the lion was laying in the grass,
Along came a dentist who shot him in the ass
The dentist said I didn't know the lion
But we all know he was really lying.

Or "but we know he was lying about the lion."
smile

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(7 replies, posted in Songwriting)

I really liked "Can't Live" your latest post on soundcloud

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(8 replies, posted in Songwriting)

If I don't write an idea down when I have it, it gets lost. I have a book of lines I have come up with but most of my songs come at a rush and get written really fast. My big problem is quite often I have a good hook but it leads nowhere. It is still worth writing down as often the idea is good but I need to come at it from a different direction. for example "I hear the call of the Morepork" can become  "the Morepork's lonely cry"If I get too caught up on trying to use some things everything ends up at a dead end. Once I have the first 3 or 4 lines everything starts flowing.

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(4 replies, posted in Songwriting)

I tripped over a few words. After quite a few attempts this one worked the best. I'm still playing it too fast and I'm thinking of changing a few chords as it sounds too jaunty. I will be trying again with a friend and then I can put more radio in the middle and end. I need to vary the volume in the chorus as well.

https://soundcloud.com/sak-26/the-waihine-disastermp3

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(17 replies, posted in Songwriting)

I enjoyed it. Nothing wrong with sounding a "bit poppy" every now and again. It is short for popular after all. smile

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(4 replies, posted in Songwriting)

This is a song about a ship that sank here in Wellington Harbour. I was just 7 at the time but I am amazed at how much emotion came out when I wrote it. It is one of my first memories.  I will have to play it a few times to get the lump out of my throat when I think about it. It takes me right back to the day as we listened at home unable to do anything.

Waihine is Maori for Woman or Wife. Tapuhi was the tug in Wellington at the time but she was far too old to do much to help. The Wahine hit Barrett Reef just after 6 in the morning and abandon ship was sounded around 1 in the afternoon. By that time she had too much of a list so she could only launch half her lifeboats. There were no life jackets for the children on board. The wind and tide blew people onto the rocks on the eastern side of the harbour that had bad access and no one much to help people who made it to shore. Small boats from the Seatoun side saved a lot of lives that day at great risk to themselves.

Waihine

[G] April nineteen sixty eight, the  [C7] Unions Steamship’s pride,
[F] Holed herself on Barrett Reef and [ G7] fifty two souls died,
[G] Two hours out of Lyttleton, [C7] and sailing through the heads
[F] In winds of over 50 knots, [G7] her radar had stopped  dead.
[F] Listening to the radio, [Em7] we heard it all unfold
[F] Tapuhi was sent out to help, [Em7] but she was just too old
Chorus:
[F] I listened on the radio, [G7] as we had no TV
[F] Memories seared into my mind [G7] as clear, as clear can be.
[G] The wind whistled around our house [C7] perched upon the hill
[F] Giselle was blowing at full force [Em7] and going for the kill.

[G] It was still dark  that morning when [C7]  Waihine came to grief,
[F] Her radar down, out of control, [G7] as she hit Barrett Reef
[G] No one knew how bad the blow that [C7] tore right through her heart
The [F] port propeller was knocked off, [G7] as she stumbled in the dark
Chorus:
[G] She drifted in near Steeple Rock in [C7] clear sight of the shore
[F] People stood on Seatoun beach, un [G7] able to do more
[G] Four more hours past in vein, [C7] with a starboard  list
[F] The small boats headed out in force, [G]  heros in our mist   
[G] Fifty two died on that day,[C7]  just off wellington’s shore
[F] Without the help of local men,  [G] it could have been far more.

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(10 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Sends a shudder through my spine, remembering bands like The Sweet and Gary Glitter. What were we thinking back then? smile

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(4 replies, posted in Songwriting)

here are the lyrics.
On the ukulele D7 can be played 2 ways, as a straight D7 or as the Hawaiian D7 or Am6. I switched between the two.

Amanda

[D7] Her knicker’s on[G7] the chandelier , [C] I remember how we [F]got them there
I[D7]  gave her an inch,[G7]  she took a mile,[C] Amanda with your [F] come on smile
[D7] “No string attached”[G7]  is what she said, as we [C] headed for her [F] double bed
It was full on all [G7] through the night, [C] I didn’t put up [F]  any fight.

[Dm] Girls hate her [G] , but she don’t care, she [C] just ignores their [F] filthy stares
[Dm] She always seems [G]  to get her way, a [C]  different guy most [F] every day
[Dm] Amanda you are [G] just so sweet, [C] the sweetest girl I’ll [F] ever meet
[Dm] You don’t care what  [G]  others say, [C] no regrets is [F] what you say

[D7] You’re hot as hell, [G7] that’s for sure, you [C] know I will be [F] back for more
“No [D7] string attached” is [G7] what you say, as we [C] head out on our [F] different ways
[D7] All she wants is [G7] one night stands, not[C]  too keen on [F] wedding bands
[D7] Same time next week [G7]  said with a smile, [C] Amanda you have [F] tons of style

[D7] Your honesty is [G7]  just refreshing, as we[C] start into [F] another session
[D7] Off the bed and [G7] on the floor, you [C] know I always [F] crave for more
[D7] Amanda, you’re one [G7] of a kind, you [C] can always blow my mind

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(4 replies, posted in Songwriting)

After reading the lyrics to Last Night by TIGLJK and One  Night Stand by Phill, I was reminded of a lady from my misspent youth. I have kept if fairly toned down so I hope I don't offend anyone.
https://soundcloud.com/sak-26/amandamp3

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(8 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Great Lyrics. I look forward to hearing it.

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(7 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Love the lyrics. I must admit,  after reading the title and the first verse it went in a completely different direction than I thought.

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(9 replies, posted in Songwriting)

yep smile

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(13 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Thanks for that, I'll have to muck around a bit and see what I can do.

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(8 replies, posted in Songwriting)

I think you are right, It's a bit fast and the uke is not the best choice for playing it on, but it's the only thing I know how to play.

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(8 replies, posted in Songwriting)

This is Alan's version of loves lost
https://soundcloud.com/sak-26/loves-lost-alanmp3

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(13 replies, posted in Songwriting)

this is a version sung by Alan, who can sing way better than me.
https://soundcloud.com/sak-26/living-th … -keepermp3

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(9 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Great song. Reminds me of someone I know.

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(12 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Great song. well done. really enjoyed it.

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(13 replies, posted in Songwriting)

You can hear it here. https://soundcloud.com/sak-26/living-the-dreammp3
Not the greatest mixing and my voice sucks but you should get the idea.

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(13 replies, posted in Songwriting)

I am trying to get a friend of mine to record this for me. He does a very good George Formsby impersonation. We have had a couple of practices and the words aren't set in stone yet, but comment would be welcome. The fourth line used to read " from Golden Plates". Not to sure which is better.


Living the Dream


[G] I wish I was as rich, [A7] as rich as my mate Hugh,
[D7] With tons of hotties by my side and nothing much to [G] do
[G] I wish I was as smart, as [A7] smart as Mister Gates
[D7] I’d lie around the house all day eating hand peeled [G] grapes



[C] Money can't buy you love is [F] what they always say,
But it [G7] can sure rent lots of fun as you go along your[C] way,
[C] Every man is equal is [F] what they always say,
The [G7] guy that is most equal [C] earns the highest pay


[G] Paris Hilton has lots of fun, [A7] while she’s working on her tan
[D7] She can hire body builders, and still has lots of [G] fans
[G] Kim may not be the sharpest tool [A7] you’ll meet along the way
[D7] But money helps if you’re a fool, to get you through the [G] day

[C] Money can't buy you love is [F] what they always say,
But it [G7] can sure rent lots of fun as you go along your [C] way,
[C] Every man is equal is [F] what they always say,
The [G7] guy that is most equal [C] earns the highest pay



[G] I wish I was as rich, as [A7] rich as my mate Oprah
[D7]I’d be eating lots of sweet things as I lie down on my [G] sofa
[G] I wish I was good looking,[A7]  just like my mate Brad
[D7] With looks like that, and no cares he never will be [G] sad


[C] Money can't buy you happiness [F] is what they always say,
But it [G7] can sure rent lots of friends as you go along your [C] way,
[C] Every man is equal is [F] what they always say,
The [G7] guy that is most equal [C] earns the highest pay

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(6 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Thanks Strummerboy Bill, the whole point of me posting here is to get feedback. I must admit I enjoy writing the funny songs. I find that the words tend to change slightly every time I play it. I'm only really doing it for the shear fun of it. I don't take it too seriously.

thanks for the tip. moving the Am does seem to help. It stops it ending quite so abruptly.

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(6 replies, posted in Songwriting)

This is my version
https://soundcloud.com/sak-26/beautymp3

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(4 replies, posted in Songwriting)

https://soundcloud.com/sak-26/beautymp3