576

(8 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Jim I like your lyrics about a songwriter trying to find their successful  place to be in the world.     

neophytte wrote:
Peatle Jville wrote:

Good one Richard and also a good  applause response from your audience on your video.

Thanks for having a listen; was only about 15 or so in the audience that night, but they apparently love when I do fingerpicking songs smile

Also, here is "Riders on the Storm", played with my son (who heard the song for the first time in the morning), which mentions the word "love" (gotta love your man): https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Kpt7HRc15rg

Cheers

Richard

Richard and Jai you work real good together.     

neophytte wrote:

I'm stretching a bit of artistic liberty here, the first time I heard this song was with a story where an old couple are the subject matter, and one is quite ill, and this song is a bit of a "goodbye" song, although it doesn't say the word itself: https://youtu.be/KarwZFku3lo

And it says "loved", instead of "love", as past tense.

Cheers

Richard (who still has to catch up on every one else's entries!!)

Good one Richard and also a good  applause response from your audience on your video.     

579

(9 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Jeff another brilliant song about the human condition, written  by you which many will hear and say to themselves this is me sometimes.

580

(13 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Jeff that is a good song about sipping Whisky right. Lastnight a lady told me this joke about whisky.
So Daffy Duck and Elmer Fudd break into a distillery.  Daffy turns to Elmer and says; " Is this Whiskey?    Elmer says: " Yeth but not as whiskey as wobbing a bank''. smile     

581

(6 replies, posted in Poems)

Phill Williams wrote:

Shwmae Pedr. Glad to see those creative juices haven't dropped down the drain with the rain! He he he


The music was rocking
The listeners were dancing
The clouds were gathering
The plops in the puddles
Got folks looking skyward
The electric musicians were rushing to cover
Guitars amps and keyboards
As the rain started falling
Water was running like rivers in torrents
Down drains with a gurgle
And the music was lost
With the rain down down the sewers

Just thinking about Glastonbury and Kiwi weather!

Thank you Piri my brawd I like your words.


            Just thinking about Glastonbury and Kiwi weather.

The sun shines bright on the Glastonbury crowd .

Singing lyrics written by the band  on stage about a deluge in a cup.

Meanwhile  down in the south Pacific people are dreaming is the rain over.

While watching on YouTube, Crowded House singing “Don’t Dream Its Over” on a hot Glastonbury stage.

Later on in the hot Glastonbury evening a Wings  song from that cool Beatle, Paul, that can’t deliver the excited crowd from the heat.

Elijah and Moses had that power to stop the rain but not everyday people opps no Sly And Family Stone playing there.

Are these lyrics of yours Paul about the weather,  "Well, the rain exploded with a mighty crash
As we fell into the sun."

There he is outside singing stuck inside these four walls.

Hey Sir Paul that’s me down here, not you up there .

I’m just waiting for the rain to stop .

Then I will go out for my walk and maybe pass a band on the run in the street.

In the mean time I might check out chordie and see if anyone has taken a sad song and made it better.

582

(6 replies, posted in Poems)

Jandle wrote:

Peatle, wonderful insight and I reckon you have covered just about every avenue of music in that poem, NAILED IT big_smile

Thank you Jan for your kind comments its real good to get your feedback.     

Cheers Jan thank you for letting me have a shot at FSOM. I am not up to much playing music as it gets painful for me to play piano and guitar Ive more of less had to give it away. Just playing simple open chords on the guitar like G C D are a struggle for me at the moment. Fortunately I have other things that keep me busy and happy.     

I've enjoyed listening to everyone's entries this month. Here is my entry for Chordie July song of the month with the word rain in it on the third line in.

                           Southern Pacific City.

Just looked at my TV and the people of the countries in the Northern Hemisphere.

Are saying it is far to hot up there.

Well I’m sitting here and it’s winter and the RAIN beating on my windowpane.

And I can feel the cold in my knees.     
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BwULH1WqMo4

585

(6 replies, posted in Poems)

Thank you EB. This winter weather seems to be encouraging a bit of pen to paper.     

586

(4 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Clever lyrics Jeff bucks and trucks.     

587

(7 replies, posted in Songwriting)

That rocks along real good Jeff.     

588

(6 replies, posted in Poems)

Music

To some music has to be rehearsed.

To others just a natural centre of their universe.

A send off tune to the one in the hearse.

A welcome tune to one who has just arrived in a cot.

To others it doesn’t mean a lot.

It can be magic.

Or just an annoying noise.

Blasted out by ones with expensive toys.

Or just cheap terrible instruments making grating noise.

Or a sound from the soul.

Making anyone feel whole.

Religious or political.

Joyous or sad.

Courage’s outrages loving happy or sad.

Or just enjoyable.

Good or bad.

Without music.

If you want it.

Or don’t choose it.

Most peoples life’s would be sad.

589

(4 replies, posted in My local band and me)

Richard that song suits your style of singing and playing perfectly.     

590

(9 replies, posted in Poems)

Chordie has had many characters over the years and the good thing is it has allowed everyone to have a go at making music. I myself had to stop playing recently due to health reasons so it means that I ended not checking out chordie much now days as I don't have much to offer the forum. It has been a privilege and a honour to meet so many interesting characters on here through chordie.     

591

(3 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Jim this song is something special.     

592

(8 replies, posted in My local band and me)

That was an interest read Richard thank you for sharing.     

593

(6 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Jim that is a beautiful tribute to your Mum. A lady who nurtured and inspired 10 children to grow up and bravely face and contribute to the world in good and meaningful ways. Here in New Zealand we talk about standing on the shoulders of those who have inspired us to improve the foundations they have made for us. Your beautiful mother lifting your spirits up into the sky through you to your children and with ten children there must be many descendants who have benefited through this legacy. I hope this song will be passed on through generations to come. A truly beautiful song.     

Jandle wrote:

Here is a song I have done for this month.  https://soundcloud.com/ukulelejan/dont- … ch-anymore

Jan that is a tough song to cover and you have done it real good.     

595

(5 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Good one Mojo.     

596

(3 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

This might be that guy's big break having him on chordie. Taking up guitar at 81 years of age shows it is never too late to start learning.     

597

(13 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

Hi Jan and Chordie,

Sunday here and after a busy morning out I came home and as it is the day of the week I usually meet up with Easybeat and a few others in the late afternoon between 4 and 6, I thought I better check out chordie. Me and EB always like to have a quick chat about chordie in the course of our Sunday afternoon meet ups. With a lot of things happening in my life at the moment  I haven’t looked into chordie at all for a while now. On the few times recently I have it has been like visiting a dead end street. Today when I clicked into chordie and  FSOTM I was pleasantly surprised. Chordie Street is no longer a dead end road but a street that leads into a musical highway. Good on all you champions of chordie for putting up your posts and musical contributions. Thank you Jan for coming back to chordie and connecting Chordie St to Jan Avenue which leads us to the global musical highway with your manaakitanga (caring attitude) and aroha (compassion). So rather than acknowledge each post I have just looked at now individually I hope you all on here  accept this as a thumbs up and thank you for all your contributions. Also thank you to those I connect with on here in other ways on the internet. He aha te mea nui o te ao, he tangata he tangata he tangata. The meaning of these words an old New Zealand  proverb roughly translates as What is the most important thing in the world, it is the people, the people, the people.
Thank you
Pete

598

(9 replies, posted in Poems)

Phill Williams wrote:

Peatle and I usually agree on everything, but there is one bit of this that we do differ! Wine....or as I know it: "devils urine" the only time I ever passed out after drinking!
Our queen is a great figure head for this country which unfortunately can't be said about other members of her family and elected politicians.

Well done Pedr

Cheers Piri,  I know what you mean the fermented grape can be a nasty thing.     

599

(9 replies, posted in Poems)

TIGLJK wrote:

LOL Peatle,

That's the only thing I thought was the Gin
I had pictured a Gin Bloody Mary with celery, and Olives.
Well done, my cryptic muse !

Jim

Thank you Jim . I have never been a Gin or Bloody Mary drinker but I enjoy sometimes a Virgin Mary  basically a Bloody Mary without the gin, with a bit of pepper, Wostershire sauce  and drop of Tabasco sauce.  Gin has an interesting history in London I will attach a short video  https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6lrZlEvQpIM     

600

(9 replies, posted in Poems)

Thank you Brian and Jim also Jan for your kind compliment about my some what cryptic wording.  I suppose most people would have picked up that the Beefeater was a reference to the Tower Of London, Yeoman Warder’s but I also wonder how many picked up on the fact Beefeater is also a brand of Gin.

Beside the Thames after a Beefeater and vegetarian breakfast.