nice blues sound to it. I played it with E7 A7 and B7 (hope you don't mind) I like it a lot
552 2015-03-11 00:27:12
Re: dont fall for me (6 replies, posted in Songwriting)
easybeat not sure how I did it. to me it doesn't sound that great it was recorded on my lap top microphone (I are a profreshinull recording artist) NOT. just three simple chords with some embellishment on the A chord
TIGLJK yea I like the lizard to found him on yahoo a couple of weeks ago tried to put him on here but the file was to big. tell me how to put in chordify and I will gitther done
thanks for the comments
553 2015-03-10 21:26:20
Topic: dont fall for me (6 replies, posted in Songwriting)
heres another one I don't like the name any suggestions? maybe internet love song? or is it worth naming?
I played it with a capo on the first fret. I left the chorus out between the 2nd and third verses not sure why just though it was to much with it in the song three times. open to suggestions.
https://soundcloud.com/mojo01/dont-fall-for-me
(D) don't fall for(G) me and I wont(D) fall for (G)you
(D)its just a one night (G)thing that we(A) want to do
(D)what you think is(G) love (D)is just a lonely(G) tease
it wont(D) fill your (G)heart or put your(A) mind at ease
(G)so don't fall in (D)love with(A) me
(G)it will only break your (D)heart when I(A) leave
(G)its a losing(D) game your (A)in
(G)one you(A) just cant(D) win
what I want and what you need
just don't matter because I wont be freed
so don't think that you are gonna change my mind
I can see it coming girl im not that blind
though you may have dreamed you never felt my touch
you always had to know the distance was to much
you know im sorry if I left a scar
you know I never meant for to go this far
(G)so don't fall in (D)love with(A) me
(G)it will only break your (D)heart when I(A) leave
(G)its a losing(D) game your (A)in
(G)one you(A) just cant(D) win
(G)a game you will (A)never(D) win
554 2015-02-26 02:28:10
Re: i have one that needs a title (10 replies, posted in Songwriting)
TIGLJK you would be correct im not a very good proof reader. im glad you liked it. I was leaning towards battered and bruised or devils brew I will wait on a few more votes
555 2015-02-25 16:44:07
Topic: i have one that needs a title (10 replies, posted in Songwriting)
after getting a few suggestions I also realized that besides a title It needed something more so I added another verse I think closes it.
story of my life I guess working the oil field just cant think of a good title any suggestions?
https://soundcloud.com/mojo01/needs-a-name
(G) spent half of my life on the(C) gulfs open(G) waters
(G) the other half drinking(D) trying not to(G) fall
(G) dodging the foot steps(C) left by my(G) father
(G)but I hear the voice of his(D) ghost down the hall
(D)these blood shot eyes are a(C) window
(D)to a soul that's been (C)battered and (G)bruised
(D)I've been scared and left un(C)attended
(D)I've been stained by the(C) devils own(G) brew
now I cant escape the blood in my veins
its part of a curse and it came my name
there aint no reasons for the demons in me
I never saw depression war or disease
these blood shot eyes are a window
to a soul that's been battered and bruised
I've been scared and left unattended
I've been stained by the devils own brew
now I like the whiskey just a little to much
some call it a weakness some call it a crutch
so what if I like to get drunk everyday
I pick up my whiskey my guitar and play
but these blood shot eyes are a window
to a soul that's been battered and bruised
I've been scared and left unattended
I've been stained by the devils own brew
now I walk in the foot steps left by my father
but I cant blame him for the path that choose
each one of us must look in the mirror
and see our own truth that we cannot refuse
556 2015-02-18 16:00:43
Topic: the other side recording (0 replies, posted in Songwriting)
https://soundcloud.com/mojo01/the-other-side
playing with a capo on first fret
557 2015-02-17 15:57:19
Re: first posting (7 replies, posted in Songwriting)
558 2015-02-17 15:22:33
Re: Song post (4 replies, posted in Songwriting)
I have an account I recorded the song straight on to sound cloud
559 2015-02-17 14:55:42
Re: Song post (4 replies, posted in Songwriting)
not bad , can you tell me how you posted your link to sound cloud? i would prove to you my singing is much worse than yours but can figure out how to post a link to souncloud
560 2015-02-14 14:08:49
Topic: the other side (0 replies, posted in Songwriting)
ok going to try another one
(D) I go to a quiet place in place (D4) (D) (D4) (D) (G) in my mind
(D) sometimes the silence (D4) (D) (D4) (D) (G) is hard to find
(D) I ask myself a question (D4) (D) (D4) (D) (G) as old as time
(D) the answer to which in this life (D4) (D) (D4) (D) (G) we will never find
(D) they say only God knows (D4) (D) (D4) (D) (G) but he wont say why
(Em) I guess we'll find out (G)on the other(D) side(D4) (D) (D4) (D) (G)
(Em)the truth will find you (G) on the other (D) side(D4) (D) (D4) (D) (G)
some times this guitar it speaks to me
but sometimes the message even I cant see
just some words on a paper they disappear
did anybody listen did anybody hear
I guess we'll find out on the other side
the truth will find you on the other side
sometimes I wonder what's over there
should we even question should we even dare
does it really matter does anybody care
the only one who can answer is the man upstairs
I guess we'll find out on the other side
the truth will find you on the other side
(Em)on the other side(G) on the other(D) side
561 2015-02-14 13:48:03
Re: first posting (7 replies, posted in Songwriting)
just note with my lack of musical knowledge I made a mistake transcribing . that Cm7 should read a Cmaj7. different sound and a whole lot easier chord to form.
562 2015-02-10 02:10:05
Topic: how to post a link to sound cloud (0 replies, posted in About Chordie)
can any one tell me how to post a link to recording on sound cloud?
563 2015-02-01 15:47:26
Re: first posting (7 replies, posted in Songwriting)
thanks for the input I guess I need to record it to give an idea of how I think it should sound
564 2015-01-29 03:43:31
Topic: first posting (7 replies, posted in Songwriting)
one of a handful of songs I have written. thought I would post one and see what comments I get on it.
[Cm7] blue moon rising[G] over the pines
[Cm7] shining softly [G] like a mellow wine
[Cm7] and in the shadows [G]she comes to me
[Cm7] no place in this world[G] id rather be
chorus
[Em]blue moon sh[C]ine your light on m[G]e
[Em] in your l[C]ight our love will b[G]e
[D] don't let the m[C]orning in to s[g]oon
[D] shine all n[C]ight for me blue m[G]oon
I don't want this night to ever end
ill always remember where our love began
under neath that moon she held me tight
never want to see the morning light
chorus
and when the morning comes
as it always will
the flame may falter but I love you still
and when some day that blue moon returns
underneath that rare moon light
our flame will burn
chorus