551

(3 replies, posted in My local band and me)

Trevor

I had the exact same impression as Peatle did.  nice easy song to dance to.

Well done !
Jim     

Hey fellow chordians !
I hope you are well.

It has been so long since the forum has been lit up with posts it seems as if
someone turned out the street lights.

I know everyone is busy and covid has taken over- so I get it.

I Just wanted to say hello to all of you


also I have a new epiphone guitar coming Wednesday
I couldn't remember how to post a picture so here is the link.
https://www.sweetwater.com/store/detail … oa-natural


again- Hope all is going well with you all!

cheers and best wishes
Jim 

Thank you guys for the positive comments.
Jeff- thanks for doing a cover of it - much appreciated !


Jim     

554

(5 replies, posted in My local band and me)

Graham 
Sounds great - still loving the supermarket blues song - it is a classic !

I would love to be able to do what you guys that are real musicians do - It looks like so much fun!

JIm     

Well it took forever - but here is my version of the song I wrote

Apologies for my playing and singing, but the message is important and I wanted to get it out there.

https://soundcloud.com/james-kenyon-997 … -of-blue-1


comments and suggestions for improvement are always welcome.

Jim 

556

(4 replies, posted in Poems)

beautiful lyric and the pics are matching.  Nicely done Peatle. Relaxing tune. We all need a place like that.

Jim     

557

(11 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Phill
It could be any major city - they all have danger zones.
There are some gangs  and drug deals it makes it quite treacherous and savage sometimes.

Nice song -

Best Regards to Anne !!

Jim     

558

(11 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Phill
That describes such a sad life.

Jim     

Phill
Would that work on a telecaster ?

Might be an amusing sound.

Jim     

Wait.  Where do you put the rag?
By the sound hole?     

561

(9 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Quite clever lyrics !  I like it!!     

562

(5 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Beamer

In My Humble opinion......

it's your best song yet!
some classic lines in there!

Jim     

Hey fellas

I rewrote this song... made lyrical changes mainly. Changes are in this post - i edited it.
Mainly the second verse - I didn't like it the way it was.

If I get a chance I will try to record it tonight so I can torture your ears a bit  smile
Jim

Thank you Bill and Phill !     

Mojo

I too have lots of memories where cats that were sounding like lions.
When I was typing my thesis for my masters on a typewriter  this old tomcat was at my door howling away
I shooed him away a few times, and finally instructed him that if  came out again he was going for a ride.

sure enough - he came back and was howlng - i put him in the trunk of my car and brought him to my buddy's farm.

He stayed there for about the next 5-8 years - seemed to love all the other cats there.

Glad you liked the song. I'm gonna do a rough recording just so the guys that can actually play and sing can get
an idea of how it is in my head.

I also put the line about the ice cold beer flowing in their bc I thought being a Texan such as yourself, that would help en the bloc!  smile

Take care

Jim

Mojo  posted about having writers block for songwriting.  Phill, Brian (easybeat)  and I made a couple of quips
and I turned them into this.

Cryptic Trance by Jim Kenyon  (with Help )


[C]trying to think of something important to write


But I [G] only hear the fridge and two cats in a fight


oh I'm [Am]starin’ at blank paper as it nears midnight


and it [F]seems the notes just [G]don’t sound [C] right




.






[C] waiting for my pen and paper to dance


but they're[G] just victims of this circumstance


it's like [Am]my mind's held captive in a cryptic trance


and it [F]seems that a song [G]doesn't have a [C]chance


.




Chorus


[C]Yea, I been [F]searching for words that never came


ya know, [C]everybody's candle burn's a different flame


so when the [F] strings get dusty and sounds seem wrong



just [G]wait, be [F]cool, and something good will come a[C]long


.




[C]been 3 days now, but feels more like a year


seems the [G]only thing that’s flowing is ice cold beer


oh I'm [Am] waiting now for the words to appear


but my [F] imagination has [G]somehow disap[C]peared


.






Chorus


[C]Yea, I been [F]searching for words that never came


ya know, [C]everybody's candle burn's a different flame


so when the [F] strings get dusty and sounds seem wrong


just [G]wait, be [F]cool, and something good will come a[C]long





567

(9 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

Phill
threw this together from our thoughts  ... it's a start    smile
  feel free to make any changes.
(see what you started Mojo!!  )

Jim

Blocked by Jim Kenyon  (with Help )


[C]I’m trying to think of something important to write


But I [G] only hear the fridge and two cats in a fight


oh I'm [Am]starin’ at blank paper as it nears midnight


it seems [F] every note I play just [G]don’t sound [C] right




.






[C]I keep waiting for my pen and paper to dance


like a[G] song about the beach in southern France


or two [Am]lovers searching for their true romance


but it [F]doesn’t seem that I’ll [G]ever get the [C]chance


.




Chorus


[C]Yea, I been [F]searching for some words that never came


ya know, [C]everybody's candle burn's a different flame



so when the [F] strings get dusty and sounds seem wrong


just [G]wait, be [F]cool, and something good will come a[C]long


.




[C]It’s been 3 days now, and my vision's still not clear


seems the [G]only thing that’s flowing is the ice cold beer


and my[Am] chords seem strange,the lyrics sound weird


and now [F] all imagination has [G]somehow disap[C]peared




Chorus


[C]Yea, I been [F]searching for some words that never came


ya know, [C]everybody's candle burn's a different flame


so when the [F] strings get dusty and sounds seem wrong


just [G]wait, be [F]cool, and something good will come a[C]long





568

(9 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

Mojo
What works for me is to read accounts of history. There are so many amazing events and people - seems there s always a catch line or something that I find to be inspiring.
Sometimes it's something someone says in the news.

an example - I was reading about abolitionist leader and newspaper owner William Lloyd Garrison and his fight for the freedom of slaves in America.
When people tried to silence him - his response was " I will be heard !"    or Sojourner Truth's " ain't I a woman" line in speaking of women's rights.

Both of those phrases have the ability to inspire a song to me - not necessarily about slavery or freedom - but you could adopt them to any modern situation.
Another thing I find inspring is just walking around and observing nature.

Hope this helps - it works for me but who knows - everyone's candle doesn't burn the same flame.
(LOL - I just made that line  up and thought - that's a pretty good phrase for a chorus in some song  " everyone's candle doesn't burn the same flame"  smile  smile  smile  !
Jim     

PS 

Congrats on the recording of the CD  -  I'd like to hear it.
Where do you send them to to get publicized ?

569

(11 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Jeff

Ditto what Phill said..... I'd like some home fries with the eggs however.

Clever song !

Jim     

570

(8 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Phill and Peatle 

Good stuff boys.  Classic song and excellent video!

Message is spot on

Jim     

That guy is awesome..... if I could play and sing like that  I would do a concert every weekend free of charge for kids

Thanks for sharing Bill

AWESOME



Jim     

Thank You Honorata and welcome to chordie.

Do you play guitar ?
I see you like the outdoors and crime movies - me too.

Jim     

573

(30 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Bill

I am thrilled to have you back on chordie. I did not answer the other message b/c I do  not use facebook at all.
Here is my futile attempt at a song,still unfinished..... I will update - others can give input as well.
I have no chords yet b/c it is just in my head and haven't touched the guitar with it.
I think the title would be  " I ain't nearly done" .

Let me know what you think of it so far.

Jim

The future reaches out, while the past retrieves
Our memories are just tangled webs we weave
The mind plays games, and seems it sure loves to deceive
might not be true, but it’s what I’ve come to believe

time is so elusive, it always finds somehow to slip away
like a rainbow disappearing on a rainy summer’s day
nothing lasts forever, but I hope we’ll meet again someday
and let the love we’ve shared take us home , but who can say

chorus
the best of me may be hidden, but it’s far from gone
but it sure does get harder as every  year now adds on
know that inside my mind there’s still something good going on
please see the sparkle in my eyes, and know, I ain’t nearly done

JIm     

574

(9 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

Mojo

That's too bad !!
Just yesterday I almost bought tickets to a ZZTOP show that's coming near my town next month.
Now I wonder if they will still play.

Jim     

575

(4 replies, posted in Poems)

Just leave the spurs upon my boots,
An' drop 'em in right quick.
An' just in case there's music there,
Throw in a guitar pick.