526

(13 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

A nice cold Heineken Lager Beer please. I'm going to buy some crisps next time I'm in the Supermarket as Phills sandwich combo sounds good to me.     Welcome back Joeyjoeyjoey.

527

(7 replies, posted in My local band and me)

Thank you Piri my brawd glad the lyrics make sense.  I look forward to hearing if my rough recording which lacks a bit of polish on the vocal side, but a good guitarist works or misses the mark?

528

(7 replies, posted in My local band and me)

Thank you, Jim. When Ryan offered to do the guitar for me on this song, I knew he would be good despite my vocal short comings, and he delivered with his good playing. The song came about after a sweet young girl I know has ended up in hospital due to problems around her smartphone addiction causing her to have an eating disorder.  It is also an observation of mine when out and about noticing young people in groups many are focused on their devices not communicating or talking to or with each other and not seeing what's going on around them. I will put the lyrics down below of my song.
 
                                   Put Down The Phone

I don’t need to be glued to a phone screen all day.

Maybe it‘s because I’m old and I‘ve  been brought up in a different way.

Hey kid can’t you see your glued to that screen all day.

It seems to me as though its taking your communication away.

I wish you could just put down the phone leave it alone for a minute or two.

Just take some time.

Just maybe have a talk or two.

Put down the phone and lets look around and roam.

Put down the phone.

There are other possibilities.

Put down the phone.

There’s lots more going on.

I know your anxious because your waiting for a call.

Your  life’s tied up on that screen.

But believe me there is more to life than stuck on that screen.

I wish you could learn to dream about other things.

And see the possibilities.

Put down the phone.

Put down the phone.

Leave it alone.

Put down the phone.

Put down the phone.

Leave it alone.

You got a lot more that you can do with your life.

There’s things out there  that you got to see.

I don’t need a phone maybe  cause its a fact of age.

But then look at me.

I’m happy.

Because I don’t need that technology.

Put down the phone.

Put down the phone.

I know it seems easy because I’m older and I don’t need that machine.

But see that’s why I’m happy.

Happy baby because I don’t need that technology.

That’s why I’m happy.

I don’t need that technology.

Put down the phone.

Put down the phone.

Put down the phone.

529

(3 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Good song Jim. Many a top song hasn't had a chorus.     

530

(7 replies, posted in My local band and me)

Here is a song called Put Down The Phone  which I hope the song tells the story in a good way in this rough recording. Thank you, Ryan, for playing the guitar for me on this one as I know it must have been hard for you to work around my weird vocal delivery and my poor guitar playing instructions. So your playing was exceptional despite me.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KigxGyQ5Eoo

neophytte wrote:

Dancing in the dark: https://youtu.be/9aox2lsj7F0 has the word 'help' in it ... (not home like I said in the video).

Cheers

Richard

Good one Richard your guitar has an upright piano sound coming through which I like on this one. It's one of those songs in a pub singalong setting if people had a lyric sheet, I could imagine them singing along with you and it would sound great with your lead vocals and guitar as done on this video.     

532

(9 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Jim it is good to hear your rendition of your well written song. I would love to hear Marty Stuart And His Fabulous Superlatives do this song singing it with a country gospel style, that they use when performing some songs like they do with that song The Unseen Hand.

533

(9 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hi Jim that is a top piece of song writing.  Here is a rough idea of how I hear it in my head. I will take it down after a few days as I know my recording of the first part of your song isn't very good.
https://soundcloud.com/eatleville/whispering-love     

534

(14 replies, posted in Poems)

Beautiful sentiments Jeff.     

Thank you, Richard, for checking my videos out. I hope it inspires people to have a go and make videos and music better than what I can do.     

536

(2 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

In the Maori language, The Queen is known as Kotuku, which means "the white heron", a cherished bird rarely seen in New Zealand. She was our head of state here in New Zealand a role she handled incredibly well. It is sad that our Queen has passed on it feels like losing a member of the family.  I wish Charles all the best as our King.     

Thank you, Jan and Jim for taking time to have a listen and give some feedback. Richard Morse if you are still out there in Chordie land I wish you all the best.     

Richard and Uncle Joesband great to see your videos on here. I have had to more of less stop playing guitar a health thing. So I will put up a song I wrote three years back, "Mountains To Sea."  I hope it makes sense as it's about the weird way songs come to me sometimes.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Jua53gh04NY

539

(4 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Jeff you have transformed your poem into a real good folk song.     

540

(5 replies, posted in Poems)

Good words Jeff. Coming from down here at the bottom of the South Pacific crossing the equator it use to be a big rite of passage in the days when people travelled to and from  the northern hemisphere mostly by sea. If it was your first time to cross there was an initiation ceremony performed on each voyage at sea. Today most people fly so when you cross the equator there is no ritual performed. A short video attached.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KO_cNKReOz8

541

(26 replies, posted in Poems)

Cheers Jan they most probably wouldn't sing a song like that in school today and now as a sheep add on here is a more modern short piece of Kiwi sheep paddock music.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r1dr7OUkj2k

Good one Richard .     

Good one  easybeat with the start of Spring your guitar has come into full bloom and is sounding good with nice and clear vocals.     

I love your song choice on that one Jan you did a good rendition. It got me reminiscing about the coffee bars here in Wellington when I was in my teens. Many of these places would at night have folk singers singing and the patrons would singalong with them and that was one of the songs I would hear.     

545

(26 replies, posted in Poems)

Cheers Jan they are interesting looking little creatures and I like the way their faces have a cartoon look.

EB that gave me a chuckle. Today the first day of Spring good to see all those cute newborn lambs running around the paddocks.  Here is a song we had to sing when I was at primary school about sheep shearing.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=plCTGKrhByk

546

(5 replies, posted in Poems)

Cheers Jan  thank you for your feedback.  leading into Spring and with today being the first day of Spring I have noticed the birds around here have had plenty to feed on in the last few weeks and are getting plumper. smile

547

(5 replies, posted in Poems)

Merci Piri, greetings and best wishes to you and your family  from my human and wild avian family at my domicile. Thankfully at home we don’t have to put up with pesky seagulls like you have to and also those people on the waterfront close to my part of the world also have to contend with. My mum physically is doing ok and her broken hip has recovered well, but unfortunately mentally not very good and she now requires plenty of nursing care due to her sudden onset dementia. It was only a few months back that she was very sharp and quick witted and onto things. She now is in a care centre for the confused and bewildered. Next month she turns 102 so she has had a good run up until now.



Jim, thank you for taking time to read and comment on my words. The Tui singing around here are big part of the soundscape of this place. I remember you and Jan have both written good songs about Tui. The town where you live sounds like a place with a good community. I remember you posted a video during the lockdown of a brass band playing in your town it looked real nice.



In the unlikely event reading this line in my poem anyone wonders about the use of the word preacher, “Above the preacher on a branch a singing Tui fills my head with a beautiful vibe.”

The reason I used the word “preacher” it is a  cryptic type reference to what early European colonists called Tui, the parson bird. The Parson bird  name came about because of the Tui’s  distinctive white throat tuft which  looked to them like the collar that church ministers wore back then.. When early European arrived the non Catholics here often referred to the church priest as being their parson.

548

(2 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Jim
Another clever song very true, love is patient love is kind.  I have been married to Maree this September for 41 years. Maree and I relationship before we got married is a long story.
It  was after knowing each other for nearly ten years that we could say those three magic words to each other. Finding that right moment  to say, "I Love You"  when we had that epiphany about us being meant to be more than friends was a scary but when it came it was perfect. As your song says our love has endured through all the challenges that many couples face. Once again another brilliant piece of song writing by you. Nothing wrong with the bible references Bob Dylan does that a lot with his lyrics and so do many others.
Congratulations on  your 39 years.
Pete

549

(14 replies, posted in My local band and me)

easybeat wrote:
neophytte wrote:
TIGLJK wrote:

I wish I had the talent to be a performer.

Jim

Sorry, but I'm going to pick on this statement, because you *do* have the talent, it's up to you to use it ....

Cheers

Richard

Agree!! just need to find a way to use it.

Jim you do write great songs and your performances have their own unique quality in what I call a Bob Dylan way.. You are a truly talented songwriter.     

550

(5 replies, posted in Poems)

This is about where I live and what it means to me I hope it makes sense.                   



       Home  My Sanctuary

As long as I can get down my front steps.

This place will always be my sanctuary.

As the morning sun holds me in its embrace.

On a blue sky a hidden hand paints different colours.

Above the preacher on a branch a singing Tui fills my head with a beautiful vibe.

This place will always be my sanctuary.

The friendly toot of the horn and a beaming smile and a wave.

As the many who know me drive past.

This place is my future is my past.

Long may it last.

May it always love and hold me.

The trees and the ferns on the hill.

My little cottage in amongst it.

The days of a fast step  for me are now gone.

The spring in my heart still lives on.

I have spent many a year travelling to faraway places.

Adventures I have had some.

There are many places in the world that mean a lot to me.

This place here will always be my sanctuary.

Hidden in beautiful native bush the trill of the Grey Warblers thrills.

Bird songs enter my soul to me they are more precious than gold.

As I sit in the sun on my front veranda where our stories are told.

Maybe today in an unrealistic way before the sunset comes.

We can imagine that we put the world right.

Later on in the evening away from an uptight world.

I contently sleep building up my energy for the sunrise in the morning.

The trees close to our bedroom are  a place where the Tui break into morning song.

Are they singing about good news as they admire the valley views.

Life carries on once more as the sunlight hits the floor.

Through windows before we open the door.

This place will always be my sanctuary.

We have had many a storm and winter go pass.

Shaking earthquakes happening hard and fast and in the past.

I live for today and tomorrow even when the flags at half mast.

Those unwanted things all soon pass.

Tranquillity finds it’s way back home into my heart.

This place will always be my sanctuary.