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Aw, all the high tech in our world can't come close to replacing the need to physically touch the one you love!  time apart excruciatingly painful, but time together ever sweeter....  Lovely write StranS - T

StranS, it's a pleasure to read your writing once again, it's been a while.  The cold and dark gives a sullen sense of lost love, and the regret that goes along with it:

Guess it was me that broke the lock
And let the winter in
A foolish thing, regretted since
But that's how ends begin.

This is really beautiful; lovely, sentimental.

I almost, however, expected (wanted!) the last line to read something like: "And we'll dance there one last time".  Fine piece of writing!  -T

Hi Ray, I guess in re-reading I get your deeper meaning, however, I think what I found fun about your piece earlier was the somewhat lighhearted and easy flow in the way you've written this piece.  Really fine writing.  -T

Hello Dolly, this took my breath away, as most of your writing does....I had to log-in just to tell you so!  T

Love it!  fun and snappy!  would like to hear this as chorus again in the song:

But on the up-side
   On the south-side
   There's a fireside
   Where she sits
   And i can be there
   In a half hour
   And we can
   Dance and kiss

Keep up the great writes, Stran!  best, -T

I think we all have that little secret garden within that only some of us are able to express in such a fluent and picturesque way.  Well done FF, good stuff!  -T

deep stuff, I think may appeal to all; thoughts we've all had watching our countrymen and women fight and die for our freedom.  Nicely written.  -T

hey Marcalan, this is pretty spooky stuff!  kinda cool topic...I like this.  thanks for sharing! `T

Hi Doll, Ah, first love, you never really forget the sting.  Love all the timeline references: "photos, black and white", "latest vinyl", "The glitter of the dance ball reflected you into my eyes".  Really love this piece!  A true story for the ages.  thanks so much for sharing with us! ~T

lovey, beautiful, touching piece.  loved it

Once again Stran, lovely stuff....deep, thoughtful, moving, lovely; very much enjoyed it! Please continue to share your wonderful talent with us! ~T