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(8 replies, posted in Poems)

looking forward to it !

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(7 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hi Daddycool.

This has a real atmosphere. Reminds me a bit of a TV programme - Lark Rise to Candleford". that was on on a Sunday night - good work.

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(2 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

And the next time be sure to tell your teacher that you haven't heard the song he's asking you to learn ! It will help you both.

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(8 replies, posted in Poems)

Thanks, for the re-direct Southpaw - I'll have to change the profile !

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(11 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

I taught my youngest daughter and now she wipes the floor with me every time. She plays it in school.

For me it's a source of pride - and deep frustration - at one and the same time !

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(2 replies, posted in Songwriting)

I am uploading two new recordings. They are

The Only Thing Missing is Music

Originally posted at http://www.chordie.com/forum/viewtopic.php?id=11159

And

Swimming In The Rain

Originally posted in the Poems section at http://www.chordie.com/forum/viewtopic.php?id=10385

They are available on http://www.myspace.com/alansheeran .

The recordings still need work, but it's finding the time in a busy schedule, hopefully they will give you an idea of the melodies.

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(10 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

I was working Saturday and just got back in time for the match. We had welsh participants over for the day and I opened the meeting wishing everyone a good day, unless they were welsh - in which case I would wish them a good day after the match. It was all good fun.

Watched the game with my daughter, both of us were up to high dough by the end. I had to take a walk to calm down. Jones final penalty attempt had me walking around the coffee table thinking we had thrown it away.

It's been an incredible week for my daughter - her school rugby team won the Schools cup (u18) and the Medallion (u16), she sang for the school at Belfast's Waterfront hotel mid-week and then the Grand-slam - AND she's off to see Snow Patrol tonight. That's the kind of week you like to see come around once in a while!

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(6 replies, posted in Poems)

I whispered, 'I am too young,'
And then, 'I am old enough';
Wherefore I threw a penny
To find out if I might love.
'Go and love, go and love, young man,
If the lady be young and fair.'
Ah, penny, brown penny, brown penny,
I am looped in the loops of her hair.

O love is the crooked thing,
There is nobody wise enough
To find out all that is in it,
For he would be thinking of love
Till the stars had run away
And the shadows eaten the moon.
Ah, penny, brown penny, brown penny,
One cannot begin it too soon.

And that's another rhyme for Love too !

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(12 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Great song, Selso. Really liked the guitar, it has a vintage country feel about it - and kind of edgy - like Johnny Cash. Well done.

They need to be straight brackets on the "song" part of the chopro, not curley ones - same key.

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(6 replies, posted in Poems)

Was it this one ?

Aedh wishes for the Cloths of Heaven

HAD I the heavens’ embroidered cloths,   
Enwrought with golden and silver light,   
The blue and the dim and the dark cloths   
Of night and light and the half light,   
I would spread the cloths under your feet:          5
But I, being poor, have only my dreams;   
I have spread my dreams under your feet;   
Tread softly because you tread on my dreams.

We used to have it in a frame at the top of our stairs. I always thought it would be difficult to set to music.

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(17 replies, posted in Poems)

Jeez Phill, now I'm going to have to explain to the kids what "mated" means ; )

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(1 replies, posted in Poems)

Searching for My Lost Songwriters.

I'm riding the wave,
Not feeling very brave,
As the mountainous waters
Break over the boat.
I'm straining to see
You waving to me,
Hoping for a glimpse
Of your famous blue raincoat.

I'm searching for my lost songwriters,
The writers left in my past.
Their lyrics are the stones
Their music the bones
That built me and still hold me fast.

I'm wading across the desert
Not feelin' so pert
This long road's a-winding,
Fading slowly to gray
I'm looking for your blue eyes
That memory of child-time,
On a black and white screen
Where you sang of Yesterday.


I'm stalking the city streets
Not feelin' so great
And the guy in grey cover-alls
Just can't be found.
I'm following the slick trail
of that greasy, down-beat male
From the chop-shops of Jersey
To his girl's pad uptown

I'm tunnelin' prison-wards
Spittin' out tunes and worms,
Bringin' bread for your belly
And word from your daughter.
And if I ever find you
I'm gonna remind you
Of the song that you sang when
Silvie brought you water.

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(12 replies, posted in Songwriting)

So re-name the Poem section "Lyrics" - and leave this non-issue behind. I don't see how a poem section can put anyone off writing songs.

I tend to consider both words and music essential to a song ( and that's not to suggest that instrumentals aren't moving and emotional, Ark and others). Seeing what people could do by adding music to a limerick that I wrote (nod to Phill) started me trying to put the two together.

I've pulled plenty of duds off the old poem-tree over the years. What I've learnt by starting to put music to words ( and that is the way I work, rather than starting with the melody ) is that poems are not lyrics. Lyrics don't have to scan or follow any arcane rules. It's freer and just as expressive. So perhaps calling the section Poems is a bit dismissive?

I want to hone my musical AND lyrical abilities, I want to learn from other writers who put up lyrics, and I want to read wonderful images and feel great thoughts expressed as lyrics. I get that in both the "Poem"  and in the Songwriting section.

So lets call it the Lyrics Section.

Do you have links to the lost songwriters, I'd love to become acquainted with them ?

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(8 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hi Selso,

You've got the stomp ! "Never Cared" is a classic. Like the guitar parts too.

I'd love to see the worms.

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(6 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Thanks everyone.

It's a beautiful place. I will admit that the photographer chose a good day for the shoot. I always think the best weather in Ireland is in May, rather than July/August.

As a kid you don't notice the weather. We would fish and run along the beach in the rain and never notice it.

A few years ago I went back and decided to fish while the kids and herself went in to paint bowls etc in an artists studio tucked just under the cliff. It's a long way out to the best fishing spots, and the rain came on while I was halfway there. The rain was horizontal, so I walked backwards all the way to the car. At least only half of me was soaked ; )

Selso,

Know what you mean about the last verse. I suppose I'm trying to suggest that he has got into the boat, that he still feels close to her, but he is moving away. In the first version of this I did, I was trying to suggest that he was holding a different woman and thinking of the woman on the beach, but it just got too complicated, so I scrapped it.

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(9 replies, posted in Songwriting)

"Too far gone for fixing"

Sounds like a song !

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(6 replies, posted in Songwriting)

This, I suppose, is a location song. I was thinking about Mussenden Temple on our Atlantic coast and this came out.

We used to take our summer holidays here at Downill - below the cliffs. There was a train used to stop, which no longer does, there used to be a hotel, which is gone, there used to be fish, they are also gone - but the Temple remains.

Here are some views

http://www.discovernorthernireland.com/ … aine-P2928

http://www.nationaltrust.org.uk/main/w- … ddings.htm



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(9 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hi Phil,

Great stuff! I was head-banging until I caught myself on.

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(17 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

And may you all have a very happy Paddy's Day.

"I'm going to feel like a real dummy if St. Patrick was not the guy who ran all the snakes out of Ireland."

Naw - he left all the two legged ones behind.

Today on the oul sod we'll be rising late and the evening will be a mystery. In between we'll be watching the school's cups in GAA and Rugby. This year my old school will be playing my daughter's school ( Inst v Methody ), so the stakes are high.

After that, we'll be feasting on mash, cabbage and bacon ribs which is our family tradition. You have to travel into the older parts of town to get the bacon ribs.

I often wondered if you have bacon ribs anywhere else across the world. They are ordinary pork ribs cured like bacon. We boil them hard until the meat is falling off the bone, then cook the cabbage in the stock until it's dead - and then use the stock again to make lentil soup the next day. A real poor man's dinner in these straightening times.

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(9 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hi Daddycool,

Just heard that Robin of Sherwood may have been a bit of a run-a-gate. Not sure if I see myself as Allan-a-dale or Friar Tuck ( tonsure coming free). Sherwood, here I come !

Selso,

Thanks for the comment, I fully agree !  Waiting on your next.

Ark,

Thanks for listening. I'm probably going to keep it simple - I'm no Russell.

Just spent tonight in a state of frustration. My daughter writes for a "Twilight" ( novel about vampires, for youngsters ) fan-site that has a competition for the best recording of a chapter of their latest story, so she was using my one and only mic to record her written word. One of those situations when you want to but can't say no !

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(8 replies, posted in Poems)

Great thread G-Doc.

I won't add my life poem as nobody would believe it, particularly the rhyme schemes ; )

"5) During my US trips, I can "mimic" even dialects, and I was asked a few times from which state I was.  "

Well, first time I was in Toronto, I was asking a guy ( who had an Italian accent you could whip ice cream with ) where the subway station was and after a few minutes of chat he says to me.

"You know, I can tell you're not a native English speaker - well done !"

UYK,

I know where you are coming from, did you hear Paxman recently described Rabbie Burns' language as "doggerel."

Accents kind of make you stand out. That was a bad thing for me in the seventies in England where you immediately came under suspicion and would get grief from the dimmer elements in bars and snooker halls. However, more recently the Belfast accent has developed an added frisson as a result of the success of Liam Neeson and James Nesbitt - ladies in London do like to hear you talk. It's something to do with a hint of danger and that wee bit of Belfast cheek.

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(5 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hi Phill,

Yes, lament is the right word. It's straight out of that old line of Irish immigration songs. There are thousands of them ( Check out Spancil Hill with Christy Moore and the Pogues at -  http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_iUEwB4M … re=related ).

As far as i can see the difference with Mary Anne's Grave is that one person has returned, leaving a loved one in a grave overseas.

As for taking you there, here are some of the places mentioned in the song -

The cliff path - http://www.cushendall.info/tourism/cliff_walk.htm

Layde Church - http://www.northantrim.com/laydechurch.htm

McCollum's Bar - http://homepage.ntlworld.com/sean_quinn/music/joes.htm

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(11 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

Well, guess I was supposed to be a monk, because I have the tonsure without having to pay for it. And the last two hairs at the front get trimmed once a month. Aside from that I am hair care free - apart from that shampoo that stops the white bits on your shoulders.

You'll be very happy to hear that, in terms of hair colour, grey is the new black. Tom Jones finally came out as a grey wolf on Friday on BBC's Comedy Relief - the black is gone. All he needs to realise now is that he needs to get it cut  - a number two for you sir ?

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(9 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hi everyone,

I appreciate the feedback.

I'm going to re-record the vocals on one of the last two songs and re-record two of the others that went up as single tracks - sometime. I have been away working, so I'm short on family time, never mind recording time. But I'm off over St Paddy's Day, so I may get some done.

I'll have a think about the collaboration thing - it's all very new this stuff !!

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(6 replies, posted in Poems)

Hi,

Thanks for the words of solidarity.

Lena,

Peace and pint all round, next Tuesday !!


Phil,

If you saw me you wouldn't say beautiful.

UYK,

Na, NAAA, na, na - na, nah . . . . .

Heard about them ? Jeesh, they were my teenage years. Did you see yesterday's BBC4 programme about Rough Trade Records. SLF were on, they broke the market open for Rough Trade and a lot of other bands up to and including the Smiths.

I am proud of the fact that, way back in the 80's, I had just enough cash to go to either SLF or the newly arrived U2 - at Queens in Belfast (they were playing one evening after another for BBC's Sight and Sound in Concert, if you remember that.) . I chose to pay to see SLF and gatecrashed U2. SLF were the business. They are playing the Ulster Hall here for it's month of re-opening ceremonies.