thanks daddy and helena, funny how you both mentioned the "i had playing again line"
it actually meant...i played the song to remind me of us being together in better times.
sometimes when i'm doing a gig, i might smell the perfume that my wife wears on an other lady, then i yearn to be with my wife even though i know i'll be seeing her in a couple of hours, but you know what i mean now hopefully?
4,751 2008-03-14 10:12:32
Re: All Cause Of You. (3 replies, posted in Songwriting)
4,752 2008-03-13 10:55:51
Topic: All Cause Of You. (3 replies, posted in Songwriting)
This is a waltz...yes a waltz!
when you write a song you dont decide which way it's going to go, it does that itself, this reminded me of those Scottish songs that have bag pipes and accordions, and looking out on a loch, any way it's all about a lost love...sad innit?
ALL `CAUSE OF YOUUndefined
4,753 2008-03-12 12:37:05
Re: "Missing All the Signs" blues (15 replies, posted in Songwriting)
got to agree with southpaw, very trippy
you sound like an adrenelin junkie, unrequited love I guess the message is, well described we've all been there at one time or another, just one question though, gription? is that an Americanism? explain please.
regards
Phill
4,754 2008-03-12 10:59:46
Re: "I Got to Be Me" (3 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Why is it you always write what I'm thinking?
It is very annoying that I've been writing songs since I was about 9 years old [46 years ago!] and not one has ever done anything, I've sent them to recording companies and got a "not what's happening at the moment, keep trying" reply. after a while you just give up. Having said that, it's great to get support from like minded people like your-self and the others on this site. So lets keep plugging maybe one day....
Great words, I couldnt quite make out the tune though, that's not you that's me, I'm useless like that
keep the faith
regards
Phill
4,755 2008-03-12 10:48:46
Re: "I Will Walk Away" (14 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Oh! you wicked man...what's this then a cliff hanger, I can hardly wait
It may take a while though, my hard drive is full at the moment, let you know when it's ready.
Phill
4,756 2008-03-11 11:17:35
Re: The Friday Night Song (Not lyrics, its my recording) (5 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Hi Scrimmy.
Thanks I needed a laugh before going in to work. I particularly liked the part in the middle where you stop and turn the page!!!
It's spot on to the Friday nights I remember when I used to go out for a pint, now unfrotunately work has put a stop to that.
Any way great song full of truth and humour, and good singing too
regards Phill
4,757 2008-03-11 10:53:20
Re: "I Will Walk Away" (14 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Hi Roger,
just listened to "I Will Walk Away" very nice, still think there's more to the song than your letting on?
Did think that it is lacking a bit of bass guitar and drums, with your permission I'd like to down load it and add them my-self to see how it sounds? Then maybe I can email it back to you [if it sounds OK] let me know what you think...
regards
Phill
PS. Hope you don't think I'm being clever or cheeky or critical, I'm just trying to help in my own way. I won't be offended if you don't want it...:rolleyes:
4,758 2008-03-10 10:45:38
Re: Robinson Crusoe (3 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Thank you Helena, always nice to hear from you, yes we are getting the same weather in Wales, where I am is not quite so bad at the moment, I got woken by a huge [no exaggeration] thunder clap earlier, frightening!
Roger, yes I agree with you. To be honest, I do record every song I write, I just still can't upload them to myspace!!!, I am on the musicians page I think as I got to upload one song, then it told me it had not got there. I can't find that page again, I'm just a dick...
I thought that chord might be some kind of G, maybe with an added 4th? On the other hand it could be a variation of E minor with an added 7th and G note on the bottom string! Any way it's all academic, we should leave the arguments for the people who care about chromatic sequences and things like that. I'm just a strummer who learned to play chords [very loudly] so that I could sing in my bedroom with out people thinking I was crazy!
Thanks again
Phill
4,759 2008-03-08 14:56:12
Re: "I Will Walk Away" (14 replies, posted in Songwriting)
HI ROGER, couldnt get any sound form myspace, but the words are very bitter sounding, is there something your not telling us? it describes a relationship ending perfectly.
keep on keeping on
phill
4,760 2008-03-08 14:48:02
Topic: Robinson Crusoe (3 replies, posted in Songwriting)
As usual I was messing around on the old string box, when a riff came to the old digits, then words sprang to mind, it ended up a little morose, as it deals with a castaway waiting for the angels to come and take him. As usual the words wrote themselves, all I had to do was find a title, it reminded me of the Robinson Crusoe story, even though it has nothing to do with him, or the Tom Hanks film! Hope you like it...
Robinson Crusoe Phill Willimas
* THIS IS A CHORD I HAVE NO NAME FOR..NOTES ARE; [FROM THE BOTTOM] G, D, G&A OPEN, B, TOP E IS OPTIONAL
4,761 2008-03-03 14:59:07
Re: This should blow your mind! (6 replies, posted in Bands and artists)
Thank you very much, I can now go to work tonight with a smile on my face....brilliant
4,762 2008-03-03 14:47:10
Re: FARTISTS?!? (5 replies, posted in Bands and artists)
I still sing Obladi-Oblada in my set, [I'm a guitar/vocalist doing local pubs and clubs in UK].
The audiences still sing along and dance to it and many others, I do some just to annoy people like;
The Birdies Dance [yeh honest]
Chirpy Chirpy Cheep Cheep
Doo Wah Diddy
and there's more...
But I try to even up the dumb/intelligent balance by playing;
Something Inside So Strong
Drift Away
I Saw Her Standing There ... a cracking Macca song, I'm sure you'll agree
Wonderful Tonight
etc etc
I wont even go into the lower forms of music like; rap punk or Oasis [lol]
In all honesty, modern music, maybe goes more into the less innocent themes, [not the I love you, you love me..forever and ever stuff of the 50's and 60's], it's more brutal these days, and maybe that's sad in itself, as maybe pop music is committing suicide.
Music for the masses, it may be, but styles and fashions are created and directed by the suits and producers, whose only interest is making another million on the backs of the young and gullible.
Check out Simon Cowell; eats `em up and spits `em out. In other words, he makes and act, [usually mildly talented] makes them into household names, then before they can ask to actually have a say in their next recording he drops them for another flash in the pan!
Sorry...another sermon, I'd better log off
if your a wannabe...keep trying and ignore the above
Phill
4,763 2008-03-03 14:20:48
Re: MUSIC INDUSTRY, what is going on? (14 replies, posted in Bands and artists)
I just do not understand rap or the fact that other people can!
It is a sad fact that they believe that enough "F" words in a song will make it more listenable or a better song. Well I cant listen, and I turn the radio off when I hear it, I certainly would not buy a recording with bad language on it, and a rap song would have to be something special...sadly very few are.
I'm sorry, but recordings that blatantly borrow from other songs [either words drum loops or even whole sections of a standard of yesteryear is unacceptable. Rap songs do this continuously and unashamedly.
It's a sad fact that "Chordie" [so full of talented writers,] may never have a writer make it to the big time. Why? because the songs on these pages are heartfelt songs, songs that have a meaning and a story, not how much of a **** someone might be, or how they are going to get spaced out on drugs, or even glorification of gang culture and killing.
I am a John Lennon fan, but I'm so sad to say that he might have been the first to use the "F" word on record ["Working Class Hero"]...make my day and tell me he was not!
Sorry for the sermon
Phill
4,764 2008-03-02 18:36:13
Re: "The Land of Our Fathers" (5 replies, posted in Songwriting)
GREAT LYRICS, haven't had a chance to play along with the chord sequence [my lady's sleeping] and very topical.
What is really annoying is that profits come before anything else with governments and industrialists. If only they would take less profits and clean up their emissions, I work in a plant that has copper dust in the air, plus gasses associated with the tinning process, add to that the mineral oils and other chemicals associated with the manufacturing process, I and my workmates breathe this in every day, but it also goes out into the atmosphere!!!
Fact; we all want to feed our families; so we need to work for big bucks, [if we're lucky] and we also want to be independent by having our own means of transport [public transport being so crap in the UK] so therefor we are not too bothered with global warming, etc. And most of us believe it wont really happen, maybe little green men will come and save us all from ourselves at the eleventh hour.
Here's a flash; they didn't come and save us before the first and second world wars broke out! so whats the chance now?
Any way, we'll probably get wiped out by a giant asteroid like the dinosaurs before that happens, then when the ants and beetles have evolved enough, they can puzzle over what we were, and how we lasted so long.
Now I'm depressed
keep writing you were born for it
Phill
PS I'm not a greenie
4,765 2008-03-01 12:46:04
Re: I little help would be appreciated.. (3 replies, posted in Songwriting)
hi reb,
those last two verses you could use as choruses or bridges, try a different beat for them or maybe
change the chords and find an alternate melody for them sounds good though, in the same sort of theme as "crossroads" but obviously not resembling it musically or wordwise.
like it, keep the faith
phill
4,766 2008-03-01 12:33:35
Re: "From My Heart" (3 replies, posted in Songwriting)
my god! how did you know how i felt about my life?
it's just amazing, you've captured my feelings exactly, i've felt like this all my life but never been able to put down in words what i was feeling, so thanks for doing that for me and thanks for writing such an emotive and inspiring song...you're the man
respect
phill
4,767 2008-03-01 11:25:18
Re: {t:Because I Love You} (4 replies, posted in Songwriting)
HI HELENA
both, it's strange how enduring love can be if your prepared to work on it
got to go now phill
4,768 2008-02-28 13:18:13
Re: {t:Because I Love You} (4 replies, posted in Songwriting)
thanks Daddy,
nice to hear from you again, families can be a bit like that, at our wedding reception my family were on one side of the room, and my wifes on the other... very awkward as you can imagine. never mind we survived and my mother actually came round to her in the end.
chill man Phill
4,769 2008-02-26 18:32:15
Topic: {t:Because I Love You} (4 replies, posted in Songwriting)
I started this one in 1978, and finished it last year, there's been a lot of songs in the past week about wives/partners etc. and I just wanted to add my 5 pennorth...
Because I Love YouUndefined
This is all about the love between my wife and me and how we managed to get through all the interference from my family and still be as one today. Hope you like it.
4,770 2008-02-26 18:14:35
Re: Winter Song (7 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Hi Old Doll,
Talking of sunshine, it's been nice here today, but a bitter cold wind..summers coming
Phill
[Would you mind very much if I call you Helena? as your handle? sounds a bit rude}
4,771 2008-02-26 18:08:50
Re: "birds of the feather" (10 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Just a quick reply,
I usually find their poo contains blackberries, at least thats the colour it is on my car [just after washing it usually....
Phill
4,772 2008-02-25 18:57:50
Re: "our james tribute" (7 replies, posted in Songwriting)
cool? chillingly cool
phill
4,773 2008-02-25 16:25:38
Re: "ice-rink rock and roll" (10 replies, posted in Songwriting)
hi daddy,
just like me anything can spark off another song...
with me it's my wife that watches it, [and me unless i can get out of it]
dont freeze, just chill
phill
4,774 2008-02-25 16:22:11
Re: "birds of the feather" (10 replies, posted in Songwriting)
hi daddy,
in your dinnertime? you show off
ps, does your boss know?
warm regards
phill
4,775 2008-02-25 16:19:05
Re: PIECES OF DRIFTWOOD (4 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Thanks to all for your kind comments,
Noel, if you can think of a word that sits right and rhymes with night let me know and I'll change it.
it actually refers to the singing that goes on when Welshmen have had a good night, and some fine ale, the word we use is "joyo", I don't think I need to translate that one?
Phill