hi james,

this song reads really easily like a good novel should, it feels as if you just sat down and wrote it out as if it has been sat in your head forming itself all your life, i hope you dont take that the wrong way, it's a cracking song and if the recording is only half as good it will be a million seller!

best of luck with it

phill

ps "rhythmic drive" what a wonderful description.

hi highwayman61,

i can only add to what everyone else has said, good song in fact it's a very strong lyric and well written. armageddon raises it's ugly head once more.

nice to see that we can spread the themes from not just love songs to protest and anti war.

lets write a song about the greedy bankers who continue to force up prices on fuel, food and everything we need to buy, and then force down the price on things we need to sell to buy them.

sorry highwayman,  just a little rant there, the song does the biz, keep up the good work

phill

hi roger,

such a sad song, unrequited love i think it's called, and it's usually the woman who get's the poo end of the stick [trying to be polite]
nice song, very heartfelt and emotional, nice picture too, is that the present love interest or who the song is about?
hope your move wasn't too stressful, if you'd asked i would have come out to help...honest [lol]

keep em coming

phill

hi all and thanks for the great replies, as far as recording is concerned, i've got a bit of a back-log, but this is top of the list.
thanks roger, what kind of brackets should i put on for chorus? bear in mind i've only just worked out how to do chopro

and russel, if you knew the young couple the song refers to... especially the girl who goes completely ballistic, the guy had to call the police last week because she attacked him with a kitchen knife! he's so scared of her he wont press charges cos her family are just as crazy.

thanks again to all

phill

hi linus,

maybe if you substituted
" you opened my eyes
   and i realised..."
for;
"you gave me sight, the quest begins..."

it seems to go with the next line about the mystery part, please use it if it fits with your vision of the song [or if you think it's good enough]

hope i helped

phill

thanks daddy and arkady, i did actually write the first draught of this on a sunday, just before she went ballistic over something i said, that was then this is now nearly thirty years later, and were still together..love all [tennis reference....get it?]

phill

nice one ark, i'll get over to ourstage later and see whats cooking

hi daddy, another masterpiece, i take it barbara is the little lady [if not you'll be in trouble lol]

very personal bit history i think?

i like it

phill

what a beautiful song,  i'm going to your web next. even if you haven't recorded it i still think the sentiments are so close to my life and i expect everyone else's that if you played it on a jew's harp it would sell a million. and yes how fortunate we are that we have found our life partners, i dont think i would like to take part in the race for a mate, is she? isnt she? i used to hate it when i was young free and single, now i'm old married and spoken for [very loudly] i'm happy and content to be in a monogamous relationship.

great song jeff

phill

hi kap54,

very image intensive, i know you envisioned the american civil war, but to me it brought back the tv images of the german troops frozen on the russian front. it doesnt really get that cold in the south western uk [some wont agree with that ] so i cant imagine a body freezing solid as the life seeps away. life is so tragic, war is a travesty, and killing is the greatest crime against humanity and god. how the hell the human race has survived its own culling over the centuries is beyond me.
sorry this turned out to be another semon

so amen
phill

hi ark, kap54 and helena,
thanks for replying, i don't understand how this song hasn't come up on my web, it's not a very good recording and i'm in the process of rerecording it. i have been very busy for the last month or so, i had an intensive course for work and then i went on holiday, and i've been writing a lot of new songs, and i haven't even got time to finish one off before another on e begins, and you cant afford to let one slip away...know what i mean?
yes as usual your so right lena, jealousy is such a waste of time and emotion, especially when it's over something stupid like what this song was written about...just something i said about my ex!!! that was 26 years ago, i think it's passed now, but you never know?
thanks again
phill