4,526

(9 replies, posted in Songwriting)

hi ark,

love the sound of the acoustic, and as you say, it's really chill out time, i could lay back on a sunday afternoon after lunch and a pint, and drift off quite happily.

great

phill

lets take sony as a forinstance; an artist records an album for the uk market, then his record producer tries to get it released in the us. the us company may decide that 15 songs maybe too many, and they could save a few for the next album, in effect making three albums from two as was done with the stones and beatles in the 60's. i didnt realise that this was still being done today!

i may be completely wrong, if so ....sorry

phill

4,528

(11 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

dare i say it: the beatles "drive my car"

4,529

(3 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

hi doc,

i will go along with dylan, even though as you say; other artistes covered his songs, i will add that most improved on them performance wise. i never liked his vocal delivery or his harmonica playing, having said that his songs do make it easy for the beginner to get a start on playing the guitar.
i admit i never understood his hidden meanings and still dont, his best work for me was on the travelling wilburys albums.

i like songs that tell a story that you can identify with, which is why i vote for ian anderson of jethro tull.

why; each song tells a story, backed up by excellent musicianship and well produced and arranged.

also jon anderson of yes and vangelis fame, for much the same reasons as above.

these are my opinions and i respect your opinions

phill

4,530

(5 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

i hate rap, i dont need it and i dont want to hear it! as you say; it's all about profanity, fighting gangs and shooting people. i much prefer the inocense of the 60's when if you made a sexual reference it had to be so veiled. remember the storm over lennon saying "bloody" on "i am the walrus"?
i know it's a bit over the top saying all rap songs are the same, i dare say there are some out there that are more relevant to peace and love and getting knife crime off the streets, without lewd sexual references, and offering peace and harmony to everyone, regardless of race or religion, but i have not heard one yet

"music was my first love and it will be my last" as the song goes, but rap is tuneless, and who is going to remember all the words in a years time, i know almost all the words to almost all the beatles songs, 40 years on, and i'm not alone there.

phill

hi doc,

what is a great song? chirpy chirpy cheep cheep?...nah
ah shuddapa yer face?...nah

but it's songs like that that become #1 hits...don't it make ya wanna puke?

if you look at TV progs like the x factor, a pattern becomes clear, the music industry is looking for young singers who look pretty, that can dance and are sexy to both boys and girls. if they can sing well then that's a bonus. they need to be pliable so the producer can "guide" them as they want the next trend to be. if they write songs themselves they must be prepared to put their writing aspirations on the back boiler while they get professional writers[?] to come up with they're hits. [as a wannabe writer i wouldn't mind this job!!!] while their own songs [if they are allowed any] are relegated to album fillers, with inferior production.

so in effect there is no fast track to getting a million seller. right place right time, and getting an established artist to record your tune, that's the hard bit! which is why i keep putting songs on chordie, in the hope that someone famous will pick-up on it and ask me to write their next album...that's enough dreaming for now.
i know i haven't answered your question, but i feel all the better for letting all this out.

phill

4,532

(3 replies, posted in Songwriting)

hi daddy,
i got a nice chilled out, laid back feeling as i read this.

nice one mate

phill

4,533

(4 replies, posted in Songwriting)

hi daddy,

we've all felt this way about someone. that person is too good for me, she wont look twice at me, that type of thing.
i've always had the impression that my wife is too good for me, which is why a lot of my songs indicate my fear of her leaving or chucking me out, well i must be doing something right, 28 years next year! enough about me, see this is what a good song does, it makes you think...and this song has made me think...well done

phill

4,534

(4 replies, posted in Songwriting)

wow jeff,

you've stuck the whole reference guide book into this one,  gambling, sport, and love [not necessarily in that order!]

i sense some strong emotions simmering in the background, but you describe me and the wife perfectly, i do something, she decides i've messed up, even when i think i've done a good job or just done good...it's wrong.

men and women are definitely different species, viva la difference!

cant live with em, wont live with out em

great song my man

phill

4,535

(7 replies, posted in Songwriting)

THANKS TO ALL,

Jeff, I thought of just plain "Grandchild" what do you think?

I have recorded this song but I'm having trouble uploading to myspace for some reason, i'll try again.

phill

4,536

(12 replies, posted in Songwriting)

thanks to you all for your kind words,

yes any time you want to use any of my original ideas roger, just carry on [a small charge may apply] big_smile

phill hmm

4,537

(13 replies, posted in Songwriting)

hey daddy,

firstly, condolences it's hard to lose someone you've known for years, but i think you've given him a great send off with this song. a fitting tribute to an old mate.

unfortunately it's a subject we dont want to get into too much as you get older, yeah pete townsend was very brave when he said "i wanna die before i get old", i wonder how he feels now?

again, sorry for your loss, great song

stay cool

phill

4,538

(12 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hi folks,

I've reinstalled this one on myspace if you'd care to give it a quick listen. just hit the button on your left

phill

4,539

(9 replies, posted in Songwriting)

well done you two, i dont have time to listen to it at the moment, but the words are great

phill

4,540

(7 replies, posted in Songwriting)

hi jeff, lena,

thanks and will do 1st chance i get, it's my wifes birthday tomorrow so i'm in the middle of making her a card, and composing a little verse, i have recorded it, so maybe tonight or the weekend.

ps, any ideas on a title jeff?

phill

4,541

(7 replies, posted in Songwriting)

This was inspired by jeff saying that he was an expectant granddad. I drew on my memories from when my daughter had her first baby [a boy] fortunately I was nearby and I could go visit next day.

Congrats young man, let us know when the birth occurs, and I dare say there will be glasses being lifted all over the world.

By the way, as I wrote this song for you, Jeff, I will leave it to you to give it a name



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I have recorded it but I have no time tonight to post it on Myspace...hopefully tomorrow.

night all

I once had a friend who's father [how's that for a disclaimer?] had a saying "woe man"

Did Mccartney have it right... Venus and Mars?

Funnily enough I've never seen a chocolate bar named Venus

Having said all that I've written a song called "Venus in the Sky", it's about [uh] Venus in the sky, on one of those rare [very rare] clear summer nights we had a couple of months ago I saw Venus shining up there on it's own looking very beautiful and majestic...like all women

Do they do an X Factor for politicians?

job description;

Must be able to lie

Must be reasonably good looking

Must have a sordid past [and present]

Must be married and a closet gay

need I go on?

4,543

(12 replies, posted in Songwriting)

This is a song all about insecurity. you can find it on my web page

Goodbye Dear Friend.Undefined


[F]Simple words to say the things [Dm]that I need to hear


A [Bb]smile from you to [Gm]take away [C]all those inner fears


But [Bb]deep inside I [C]know that I might [F]some day lose your [Dm]love


[Bb]Some day without warning I come [C]home to find you gone




[F]Every day we blindly go and [Dm]do just as we please


Not [Bb]thinking of the [Gm]longer term or [C]where each path may lead


We [Bb]think that things will [C]stay the same and [F]life will still go [Dm]on


Till [Bb]everything has changed and then I [C]look to find you gone




Chorus


[Bb]Oh, [C]oh. [F]goodbye dear [Dm]friend


[Bb]Oh, [Am]oh. [Gm]someday it had to [C]end





[F]People are invincible they [Dm]think they'll never die


[Bb]Living life just [Gm]like a bird [C]flying in the sky


[Bb]Getting older, [C]getting weaker [F]time just fly's [Dm]away


[Bb]Till you end up, waking-up and [C]blessing every day




Repeat chorus




Solo. [F][Dm][Bb][Gm][C]- [F][Dm][Bb][Gm][C]




[Bb]But deep inside I [C]know that I may [F]someday lose your [Dm]love


[Bb]Someday without warning I come [C]home to find you gone


repeat chorus x2




[F]One day without warning I came home to find you gone...



4,544

(10 replies, posted in Songwriting)

hi jeff,

you've put me right off buying a water bed [not that i ever wanted one] lots of verses, but i read every one as i wanted to see what the ending was, i wasn't disappointed!

great work

phill

4,545

(9 replies, posted in Songwriting)

hi russ
any kind of creative input or helpful criticism is always welcome, like i've said before, honesty may hurt but it is honest and ultimately helpful

you think it could be a show tune? i never even thought in that direction, i'll have to listen again

thanks
phill

4,546

(8 replies, posted in Songwriting)

hi jeff,

words what a mine field?

flows well, lovelly song, all about us i guess

phill

4,547

(12 replies, posted in Songwriting)

hi jeff and congratulations, welcome to the club

i've got 8 grandchildren at the moment, soon to become 9 with my youngest son's daughter expected in october.

i remember when my daughter was about ready to pop with my first grandchild, it's the only time i've carried my mobile [cell phone] around with me. now it's not so stressful but no less exciting.

great song and once again congrats. enjoy it as much as you can, even though your so far apart.
all mine are within a few miles, except for the two in australia which we visited last year, love them all

phill

4,548

(9 replies, posted in Songwriting)

hi kap,
it's not a 12 string! it's a 6 double tracked and chorus...sorry and thanks for the nice words

thanks also to helena after all it was your song that gave the inspiration

and daddy cool  chill man!

hi ark, glad you like it

i'll soon be on the beach my-self cant wait to get out of the rain

phill

4,549

(10 replies, posted in Songwriting)

hi helena,

my god your so profound! i find your words take a song somewhere i would never think of going.

your niece has done you proud, is she harmonising with herself or is that a friend with her?

just lovely

phill

4,550

(10 replies, posted in Songwriting)

hi jeff,

dont you just hate it when a chance [of any kind] presents itself, but for some reason you just let it go, then later think "why didnt i...?"

i dont suppose you've heard the english version of "brand new key"? it was called i've got a brand new combined harvester, you've got a brand new key" it's meant to be funny, and i guess it is for us brits.

keep up the good work

phill