4,526

(3 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Having now listened to your offering I can now say that this is a very well produced song. Well done Mike.


Roger

4,527

(3 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hi Mike,


I followed your URL but found "Paradise" there. As I only listened to half the song you could say I have been "Halfway To Paradise" (sorry, before your time, a 1963 Billy Fury song).


Found it! This is the correct URL: 


<a href="http://www.myspace.com/americanchaostheoryband" target="_blank">http://www.myspace.com/americanchaostheoryband</a>


Roger

4,528

(10 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Well James,


You are getting to be quite the recording artiste these days. Having listened to "Come Away" at <a href="http://www.myspace.com/friendsofchordie" target="_blank">http://www.myspace.com/friendsofchordie</a> I have to say it is a delightful number and the guitar goes well with the autoharp.


I am not as pretty as Emmylou but I did my best and I sang the harmony in the chorus for you. <img src="images/smiley_icons/icon_lol.gif" border=0 alt="Laughing">



Roger

4,529

(12 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hi Alex,


You can add me to the list of people who like you latest offering, another good one. I did a 'badeye' and had fun playing along with it.  The recording was better this time too.


Keep them coming,


Roger

4,530

(12 replies, posted in Acoustic)

I hope you have treated your neighbours to a set of earplugs apiece then <img src="images/smiley_icons/icon_lol.gif" border=0 alt="Laughing">


Roger

4,531

(5 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hi Mark,


What I heard certainly was not tuneless warblings and demented strumming. Well done you perform very well, it is a great song.



Roger

4,532

(19 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hi Alex,


No one would expect a studio quality recording or a professional musician/vocalist performance. What is important is for us to hear the style, tempo and melody of the song you have created which cannot be ascertained from  just the chords and lyrics. The only suggestion I would make is to have the mike closer to your mouth so that your voice is not swamped by the guitar, other than that it is OK.


As for the song, well that is absolutely fine. The chord progression, the melody and tempo suit the lyrics, well done,


Roger

4,533

(9 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hi James,


After listening to "Happy Cute" I replayed the copy I have of "On A Day Like This" and the recording is so much better. You seem more at ease and less mike shy now, it can only get better.


The tone of your instrument comes over richer in fact I can how hear that it is not a guitar you are playing. Having never heard and autoharp before I am very impressed with it and I am going to try to see if I get my hands on one to try. Unfortunately music shops are few and far between here so I might have no luck.


I enjoyed your song and played and sang along with the recording and it was more upbeat than I expected - I liked it.


I agree with Jeff about the recording. If you can sing to the pre-recorded music it is easier which is why I write a backing track for the songs I am commenting on.


Thank you,


Roger

4,534

(12 replies, posted in Acoustic)

Hello Randy


I see that this is your first posting on the forum so welcome to Chordie.


Although many of the members here are accomplished players and will have no need of this chart, there will also be newcomers to guitar playing here that will find it helpful.


Thank you for your consideration,


Roger

Hi Donna,


My French is worse than my Poruguese and even that is awful. However I have given it a bash and, although I am sure any French person would have cringed at my pronunciation, I was on my own and I enjoyed myself.


Although unorthodox, I understood your chording, and I agree with Jeff that the result is haunting.


I shall look forward to hearing you sing it on MySpace sometime.


Thank you and well done.



Roger

4,536

(3 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hi Rhiannon,


A lovely, though sad song you have created there and it is great that this you have chords for it, it plays very well indeed.


Thank you and well done,


Roger

4,537

(6 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hi Jeff,


Another fine offering from you, I echo the sentiment of your song whole heartedly and I enjoyed singing it.


Roger

4,538

(7 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hi Jeff,


I was just coming to post a message that I was struggling getting this song to sound right, and then I read your last message to James. I went back and added the extra chord and bingo, it worked.


I liked the song and the lyrics remind me of many walks I have taken through woodland. My feeling, however, is that it could do with some variation in the chord sequence particularly now I have added some more, although I have to agree with you that it is a lovely progression that suits the mood of the song. This is only my opinion, I hasten to add, and I may well change my mind when I hear it as you intended it.


Roger

4,539

(3 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Thank you for that Steve,


I have just made you and Lynn into a trio by playing and singing along with you both on YouTube, it was fun. I must try that again more often.


Roger

4,540

(5 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hi Donna,


I have been very busy lately and only just got around to looking at "Oh Why Can't I?". I too like the lyrics and the chord sequence, it is a lovely song. I am looking forward to hearing you sing it when you have uploaded to MySpace. Be sure to let us know when you do so.


Thank you,


Roger

4,541

(3 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hi Steve,


I just gave "Gravel and Spit" a thrash and a bash and liked it. I did however add a quick C at the end of each verse and chorus to break the long G and it worked for the way I sang it but it may be completely at odds with way you perform it.


Thank you,


Roger

4,542

(17 replies, posted in Electric)

Sorry this was an error <img src="images/smiley_icons/icon_redface.gif" border=0 alt="Embarassed">

4,543

(1 replies, posted in About Chordie)

Hello kaybassette,


Welcome to Chordie. I will try to answer your query as best I can.


Private messages are just that, messages between two people that they want to keep to themselves. I use alot of private messages to send personal information to others or to pass a comment that might cause embarressment if made public. Several members have privately sent me songs and recordings of them performing their songs that are not yet ready to make public and so it is a very handy tool to have.


The open forum is for public messages that everyone can see and comment on.


I hope I have answered your query but if I missunderstood, or you need further clarification please post again.


Roger

HI BBDGus,


Were your new strings the same gauge as the old ones? If you put on lighter strings then with less tension on the neck the strings could end up too close to the frets causing your problem. If this is the case and you want to keep to the lighter strings then adjustments need to be made to your guitar.


I do not think removing all the strings can cause a problem but someone more qualified that I can answer that one.


Regards,


Roger

4,545

(8 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hello dj,


Welcome to the songwriting section as this is your first posting down here. I am sure that Ken welcomes your opinion of his work as well as everyone else's.


I am however a little surprised to note that your comments are completely different to all the others. The one thing that is a little different down here though, is that everyone else who has commented has written and performed their own songs, so their qualifications for comment are know. Yours are not, but as you appear to know so much and have studied songwriting perhaps you can show us how it should be done by posting one of yours for us to peruse. As you also come from a family of famous performers you will have no trouble in recording it so we can hear how it really should be.


To assist, I am offering to edit your song to chopro format to make it appear 'nice and purdy' when you post it (that is, if you do not know how to do so yourself). All I would ask is that you write the lyrics with the chords in the correct place and surrounded by square bracket like so: [C] [Am] [F] [G]. If you do not have anywhere your upload your song I can easily put it on Friends of Chordie for you for everyone to enjoy if you send me a recording of it.


I am sending you my personal e-mail address by private message.


Roger

4,546

(5 replies, posted in Songwriting)

I have, in fact, heard Mark sing this song and although I thought, looking at the chord changes, that the song would be rather repetative, it is not. It has very interesting chord changes and is sung very well.


Another fine offering from you, well done.


Roger

4,547

(5 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hi Jeff,


I also liked your song.


I got fed up with having to be continually security conscious and having neighbours I did not know in Nottingham (UK). Here in Porugal I have three close neighbours who are now all friends, we share troubles and joys and never lock our caravans or vehicles. It is great!!


Roger

4,548

(13 replies, posted in Songwriting)

A nice song you have there badeye and something we should all try to emulate by doing our bit to look after this planet we live on.


Well done,


Roger

4,549

(11 replies, posted in About Chordie)

As of this moment and in no particular order here are mine:-


01/ First Day Of My Life - Melanie C

02/ There Is A Ship - Peter, Paul and Mary

03/ All Out Of Love - Air Supply

04/ When You Say Nothing At All - Ronan Keating

05/ Desperado - Eagles

06/ Tears In Heaven - Eric Clapton

07/ Sometimes When We Touch - Dan Hill

08/ One Of These Days - James McCormick

09/ Bang Bang - Cher

10/ You're No Good - Swinging Blue Jeans


Roger

4,550

(19 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Brilliant, the title was staring us in the face all the time. A case of net being able to see the wood for the trees. I agree "No Title as Yet" is a great suggestion.


Roger