4,501

(20 replies, posted in Songwriting)

hi guys,

must be a hicup on my site then, it has been taking a long time to process my songs lately.

i'll have to give sound click a go ark, thanks for the suggestion

phill

4,502

(20 replies, posted in Songwriting)

apparently everything is smaller over here? roll

but good things come in small packages cool

4,503

(4 replies, posted in Songwriting)

I woke up Thursday morning and this was running round my head, so as the wife was out I wrote it down quickly and recorded it roughly, thing is after recording it I've changed some of the words!

Any way it's called Old Black Car, and it's about those annoying people who insist on parking out side your house taking up 2 spaces so you've got no room to park...it's a British thing!

BACKING VOICES SINGING.."Ooh yeh ooh, ooh yeh" after each verse

Old Black CarUndefined


There's an [Am]old black car pulling [G]up out [D]side my [Am]home


There's some[Am]one inside but I [G]don't think [D]she's [D]alone


If she [C]don't go soon I'm gonna [E]ask her where she's [Am]going




REPEAT SAME CHORDS FOR EACH VERSE




Well the paint is scratched and the tyres are flat and worn


There's rust down the side and a there's hole in the door


If she don;t go soon I'm gonna ask her where she's been




Oh! driver, driver who's that in your car?


Clean the glass and move out of my yard


If you don't go soon I'm gonna ask you who you are






Chorus




I should [C]play the [B7]man don't [Am]act like Mrs Jones



[C]Move the curtains [B7]complaining all [Am]alone


[C]Grow some [B7]balls and tell them they must [Am]go


Or [G]maybe I'll just [D]wait another [Am]hour




Well the glass rolls down and I see someone inside


I can see her face and I can see she's got no pride


If she don't go soon I'm gonna ask her for a ride




"Well farmer boy" she says and calls me on


"Today's the day that you become a man"


if she don't go soon I'm gonna tell her "yes I am"




repeat chorus




There's an old black car moving down the road


There's someone inside but I don't think she's alone


And I don't know why but I'm so glad that she's gone.



4,504

(7 replies, posted in Songwriting)

hey amigo,

your getting to sound like a true cow puncher my friend, although you normally stay a bit further north?

have you thought about writing books? with your ideas and out put i'd give it some thought

phill

4,505

(17 replies, posted in Songwriting)

hi ark,

i agree with weedjie, excellent title, i'm deep into space [and sci-fi] myself, in fact anything with star in the title; star trek, stargate etc

phill...live long and make music

4,506

(20 replies, posted in Songwriting)

hi again

i've just looked at myspace and it appears that where you were once allowed 6 songs, you can have only 5 now, so i deleted one to get rock god up. more appologies this time to helena and the irish nation... sorry i guess it's not an irish thing after all roll

4,507

(20 replies, posted in Songwriting)

hi helena,

yep your right it must be an irish thing, big_smile
conversely it can take a day to up load some songs [maybe longer in ireland?:D]  i'll check if it's there later, if not i'll upload again.

hi jeff,

nice to hear from you, how are you mate?
it's funny how just hearing someone playing a riff can get the juices flowing, i just hope russ likes what i've done to it.

felicitations russel,

as i've said to jeff above, i hope you like what i've done to your tune, i have not followed the melody line that you give on the video and i have no clue where the rock god bit came from, as i say i am just the scribe, where the words come from i can't tell

4,508

(9 replies, posted in Songwriting)

we've all got our own life roads, jeff, the names are different but the story's are the same

nice one

phill

4,509

(20 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Dear Russel,

how long have you known me now? and you still don't get my sense of humour.

i wrote those words for the enjoyment i get from writing and taking part, i wasn't demanding money, specially not from you as i think of you as one of my best friends, and anything i can do for you i will...just ask. eg; if you want me to write some more words for you which will be an easy one! and an honour.

Pressing on...i've now uploaded "rock god" so anyone that wants to hear a country song done rock style have a look in myspace [web site on the left]

phill

4,510

(4 replies, posted in Songwriting)

such tender words, you've hit the spot again. the best part is making up...i agree with that one whole heartedly, i love the feel of my wife's lips when we make up after an argument,not that i cause an argument just for that...i'm digging myself a hole here....


nice song, stay cool

phill

4,511

(20 replies, posted in Songwriting)

ok, last one first;

daddycool, the world is full of wannabee's, i'm one, but i'm also realistic enough to know i'm too old now to be top of the pops. unfortunately, most x factor entrants don't realise it, all they want [even the good one's] is a fast lane to the top.

hi russ,  yeh yeh gimme the money man! if only...i'm getting to the point where some money [preferably in large amounts] would come pouring through my letter box.  i'm hoping to finish the recording tonight when the wife is out [it's easier that way]

roger, it's about you...how did you guess? i think we're all in there somewhere, without the pony tail, and i've never worn leather trousers...have you?

thanks kap, as i mention above, hope to up load it tonight

thanks again for your kind comments

phill

4,512

(11 replies, posted in Songwriting)

hi roger,

yep this is the first time i've heard this one, love the recording you get an excellent sound, it must be where you've parked your caravan?

great song roger, the rhythm is different to what russ put down, but i guess that's individuality for you.

i think you might still have won even if there had been more entries...congrats

phill

4,513

(20 replies, posted in Songwriting)

I'm in the process of recording this song and a few others, so it'll get on my space eventually smile


phill

4,514

(20 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Russ Harding issued a challenge some time ago, I've only just found it, and this is my reply. It's called "Rock God", it has nothing to do with religion so it's not blasphemous, it has to do with those self-delusiory people who go on X Factor.



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4,515

(4 replies, posted in Songwriting)

hi daddy,

nice writing and observation, you actually get squirrels up in derby? big_smile

phill

4,516

(6 replies, posted in Songwriting)

hi weedjie

a tender lament for a lost love?
lovely words expressing all you feel, I hope she knows how much you feel for her and judging by the sentiment, how much you miss her and want her back.
having read the other replies, it seems i read your song wrongly, i got the impression that jade had left you, if so i'm sorry for the error, but that line "i wish you could have stayed" might have misled me.

all the same nice one

phill

4,517

(17 replies, posted in Songwriting)

ark,

a nice bit of music, it really got me chilled out. it got me in mind of taking a long walk on a Turkish or Egyptian beach on a warm balmy night

my title suggestion would be "Arabian Midnight Beach"

phill

4,518

(3 replies, posted in Songwriting)

hi daddy,  and oo-ee oo-ee oo-ee to you you too!

i love love songs, after all...it's love that makes the world go round

rock on pardner

phill

4,519

(13 replies, posted in Songwriting)

hi badeye,

i'm guessing the song is about global warming, war, violence and the hope that one day we can bring all strife to an end?

i saw a tv programme this week that points out that global dimming is also a problem.
all the extra clouds being produced by car emissions and factory pollution, are actually moving the monsoon areas northward, so that places that rely on the monsoons are not getting them. on the other hand the extra cloud cover is reflecting the suns rays and so reducing the warming effect!!!

don't you wish you hadn't started this line?

a fine song all the same...let's all get our act together and return the world to peace and love...power to the people

phill

4,520

(7 replies, posted in Songwriting)

thanks everyone,

in order;

russ,  i was also present at 3 of my four children's arrival, i never fainted and thought the experience was brilliant, glad i wasn't the one on the table...my sympathies lie with the women on this one...on the other hand, as i recall, it was usually the wife who said "let's have another one..."

roger, thanks, glad to be back. the recording needs some fine tuning, in the next few days, with any luck. it's a toughie finding the right title isn't it? i think i may well stick to "baby song"

helena, glad you had a look at my photo's, i'll put some more up soon, and yes they do take after my wife...thankfully, i'll pass your congrats around.

kap,  thanks, ads i said earlier the recording is on the way, and i do appreciate and look forward to comments, good or bad.


may your god smile sweetly upon you all

phill

4,521

(7 replies, posted in Songwriting)

well congratulations to you!

my oldest granddaughter is 14, so there's a few years left yet [I hope!] before the great grand child.
i hope to post this song on my space soon, after the weekend most likely, as things are a bi crazy at the moment.

any way...stay cool my friend, and keep rockin'

phill

4,522

(6 replies, posted in Songwriting)

hi daddy

money, dont get me started.

as a common or garden manual worker, i'm just cannon fodder for the bankers [spelling mistake!] which means they can do just as they like with us. they go bust, we lose all our savings and pensions, but they still get their bonuses...work that one out

good song mate very thought provoking....lets have a revolution

phill

4,523

(7 replies, posted in Songwriting)

My son and his partner have delivered my 9th grandchild on Saturday, this song came soon after, I've used quite a lot of poetic license, and I also used memories of when my own daughter gave birth to her daughter 4 years ago.
I've called it Baby Song cos I can't think of a better title, suggestions gratefully considered

Baby SongUndefined


I heard a [G]bell ring and[D] it wasn't [G]Christmas


I saw an [C]angel who [D]stood before [G]me


My heart was [C]glowing with [D]pride, when the [G]baby [Em]arrived


I saw my[C] daughter and [D]she held her [G]child




                                                                                                      (VERSE 2 same chords as above)




I saw a bright light and all things were glowing


I saw a doctor and he smiled at me


My heart was glowing inside


when this new life arrived


I saw my daughter and she held her child




chorus





I saw my [C]daughter and [B7]she was [Em]smiling at me


Hello [Am]grampa [C]come look and [D]see


And there were [C]angels that [B7]sang, till the [Em]new day [D]began


And this [G]new life I [D]held in my [G]arms




                                                                                                      (VERSE 3 same chords as 1st verse)




I heard a choir in the church for the baby


I saw our friends and our family


My heart was glowing with pride, when the baby arrived


I saw my daughter and she held her child





It's in waltz time,  and I'm sorry if it's smaltzy, but I am a proud new grandparent, so please have patience with me

4,524

(15 replies, posted in Songwriting)

hi kap,

yeah man keep music live, let music live.

i agree with all the sentiments [specially the one about disco's] i like the way you've written this when will we hear it?

phill

4,525

(12 replies, posted in Songwriting)

and back at you helena.

hope your family enjoy the song

phill