426

(8 replies, posted in Songwriting)

I hate to break anyone's historical fact, but I got it from the US show called "Bones" which I enjoyed immensely, the part was when 2 of the main characters were to get married only to find that she was already married to a guy on a Caribbean island by "jumping over the broomstick".
And I believe there's a song with the line "lets jump the broomstick"? I cant wait to hear some remarks about that!     

427

(8 replies, posted in Songwriting)

I'm quite proud of this song as it has not one but two storylines. A reluctant and estranged father meets son after many years on the road and in jail, who also turns out to be a gambler, I didn't realize this until I saw the video. Well done Pete and Brian.     

428

(41 replies, posted in Acoustic)

Good to know you practice regularly. The more you practice the harder your finger tips will become. You may find that squeezing a soft ball will strengthen your fingers, hand and wrist.
Welcome to chordie forum.     

429

(4 replies, posted in Poems)

Hi Jeff. Nice poem/song. We all have our muse I guess and his music has certainly got your juices flowing. Let us know if and when you put music to it and record it.     

430

(7 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

Congratulations Jim. I've been on the scrap heap for six years now and I can tell you unreservedly...until you make time for what you want to do, your time will be taken up doing the mundane stuff everyone expects you to do. Like baby sitting, taking the wife shopping, all the DIY stuff that's been waiting all these years and most importantly...sleeping in your favourite arm chair. Other than that your time is your own, have fun and as Graham said welcome to the club.     

431

(5 replies, posted in Songwriting)

That's a cracking hook; "It takes a lot to love a good woman, but nothing to let her go." Wise words indeed. I got the impression it was played relatively fast? with a kind of oompah beat? Looking forward to hearing it.     

432

(9 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Thanks guys, it's nice to be appreciated. We can all work together, Jeff, we used to do a lot of Chordians projects a few years ago. No reason not to do that again?     

433

(18 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Your words are very poignant and you performance is very soulful. I agree that your voice suits this song perfectly. Thanks for sharing Lord Brian (Wilson?)     

434

(8 replies, posted in Songwriting)

you sure can write the laid back songs. I can imagine you reclining in your hammock on a sunny day picking away and singing back at the yard birds     

435

(8 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Your song begs the question...this was my day, tell me about yours? Looks good, I'll give it a listen later tonight.     

436

(4 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Pete. Me too. During the 60's, my teenage years, being a hippy was a trend, we all wore kaftans and beads and patchouli! We weren't real hippies, just the weekend variety.
The girl in the song arrived late 70's and lived in a commune. It was my car she used and abused as well as my body and I hers...those were the days!
I haven't seen her since or her friend, least said about that the better, nudge nudge!

Brian. Recording is a work in progress. I know a lot of members don't like multi tracking and productions, but that is my enjoyment and pleasure. Let you know when it's done.     

437

(4 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Here's a song fresh off the press. Some of this is true and some is artistic license.

Hippy GirlUndefined


By Phill Williams     






CHORUS




[Bb] Hippy girl you drive me [F] crazy.


[Gm] Hippy girl you drive me [C] mad.


[Cm] You use my house like it was [Bb] your house.


[F] That's the best time I've ever [Bb] had.




VERSE 1




[Eb] You cant look at me that [Bb] way.


[Eb] You make things happen I cant [Bb] stop.


[Eb] You want to ride around the [Bb] block.


In a [C7] car.


Just two [Cm] seats and open [F] top.


So your friends can see you.





(CHORUS)




VERSE 2




[Eb] You broke my table and [Bb] chairs.


[Eb] You lock my door when your not [Bb] there.


[Eb] You make a noise so the [Bb] cops knock my [C7] door.


[Cm] Join the party there's room for [F] more.


Come inside now.




(SOLO OVER CHORUS > CHORUS)






[Gm] Sleepless nights because I [Dm] worry.


[Eb] What's the time when you get [C7] home? [F]


(CHORUS X 2) 





 

438

(3 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

Take the Beatles...Love me do; 2.19 mins. Hey Jude...7.00 mins + .Hey Jude no 1, Love me do barely made the top 20! Fact is if you like a record you'll buy it or listen to it. Songs with a load of fillers at the end as in Hey Jude annoy me no end. If a song gives a story to the last chord...great, even though I love the song Hotel California with it's extended solo's at the end get me yawning. When I do it I just do 2 verses of solo then end with the chorus so the audience doesn't get bored. Disco songs are rife with fillers, I've never liked disco much.     

439

(12 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

Lack of imagination too! The last post in this thread is from 2017. No reason to ban yet, but we're watching!     

440

(16 replies, posted in Acoustic)

unclejoesband wrote:
Riverdales wrote:

I would really rather not walk into a nice place that has talent night and pull out my sheet music so i can just drop it all over the floor then have to pick it up in front of an amused audience.

Yeah that's a pet peeve of mine. If I'm going to learn a song, I'm going to learn it. I don't want a music stand in front of me when I'm in front of an audience. It just feels wrong. If I miss a line or even an entire verse (which I have done on more than one occasion) I'll learn from that mistake and be much less likely to do it again.

I was at an open mic about a month ago. The girl that was on before me was using her phone in scroll mode and it froze. She was lost and couldn't finish the song. Nope. Not going there. smile

Forgetting words, lines or complete verses? I've so been there. I've repeated the same verse three times before now. Worst thing is; you make a cock up, then next night you stress about it and do it again! I saw an act recently when their iPad conked out and delayed starting for half an hour while her husband brought a spare from 20 miles away. Learn the words, saves a lot of embarrassment.     

441

(28 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

Your ok...that counts as information. We never see enough pictures of accordions and beer cans in mirror reflections!. Rock on!     

442

(17 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

Riverdales wrote:

But what will really blow your mind is, If i hadn' t told you your chord playing hand has longer fingers would they still be longer!!!!

I knew that was a wind up but I compared them anyway. Both hands matched!     

443

(12 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Gotta say Jeff...I like it. Not your usual style, more pop than country. As I said above it tells a tale of domestic normality, and the affection you, me and most of the worlds husbands have for their womenfolk.     

PS Thanks for keeping it on S.C. till I could hear it.

444

(16 replies, posted in Acoustic)

Most of the songs I know and play I learnt decades ago. New songs seem to go in one eye and out the other! It helps if you can make up words as your playing, I used to do that a lot back in the day! I can only remember snippets of my own songs. If I try out new song in the future I'll give Grahams idea a go and read from song sheets. Memory full?

445

(12 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hey Jeff. Reading through your words describes the domestic day to day routine most of us married folk live through. I often get trouble getting Ann to sit down and chill a while. Still can't get my tablet to play it, I'll have a better chance later on my pc.

446

(12 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hi Jeff. I couldn't get it to play probably something to do with my tablet, not the ones you swallow! I'll try again tomorrow so don't take it down please. I love a love song and unlike the songs from the fifties and sixties where they cut out the best bits of a song to make it under two and a half minutes so the radio DJs would play them, a song of three minutes is perfectly acceptable, in fact I aim for three minutes or more. Give the whole story.     

447

(28 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

Both photo's coming through loud and proud. I got a photo up once a few years back...I cant remember how I did it though...must be my age?   

BTW Jim, nice guitar, works better with it plugged in...lol

448

(14 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Not a problem Jim. I get great enjoyment from doing a production on other people's work. I was sorely tempted to put bass and drums on it and probably other things too! Ann doesn't sing, won't sing on tape if you get my meaning?
I've done a few things with Peatle and Easybeat, so I do get great enjoyment from working on others projects and hope I can work with them and others in the future.     

I got the impression that the boy/girl were getting back together? Even with break up songs I like a happy ending!

449

(14 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hi Jim. Tonight i had time for the first time since before Christmas so I had a go at your break up song. I've taken some liberties with your words and chords. I didn't realise till I'd worked it all out that it wasn't in "D" but "G" so I've done it in the key of "D" major. You can scrap it and consign it to the bin if you want, no problem, words below, scratch recording to come.

It's The Love That You Lose.

[D] Sitting by the [Bm] campfire. My [G] guitar weeps so [D] sad.
[G] As I dream of the [D] soft look. That her [Em] eyes once [A] had.
[D] Start singing a [Bm] love poem. That [G] I once knew by [D] heart.
[Em] But the meaning has gone [G] missing. [A] Since we've been [D] apart.

[D] I recall every [Bm] memory. And [G] still call out your [D] name.
[G] You know my lonesome [D] heart. Just wont [Em] ever be the [A] same.
[D] I should give my love to [Bm] someone. Who would [G] put down some permanent [D] roots.
[Em] Someone to hold me [G] every night. And [A] kick off his wandering [D] boots.

(CHORUS)

[G] You know some day we'll get [A] together.
[G] Talk of what we used to [D] be.
[G] And how much we loved each [A] other and [Em] why I had to [G] leave.
[D] We might talk about [Bm] decisions we made.
While [G] fate was ours to [D] choose.
And the [Em] cost of chasing [G] different dreams.
Is the [A] love that we must [D] lose.


[D] It could have been so [Bm] different. But I [G] guess we'll never [D] know.
[G] And I should've know [D] better. Than to [Em] ever let you [A] go.
[D] The love we had is the [Bm] one thing. That we [G] never could [D] regret.
[Em] Heart strings and [G] feelings. They're [A] so hard to [D] forget.

(CHORUS)

450

(17 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

Zurf, the thumb is used, by me anyway, as opposing pressure on the guitar arm when fingering. To most guitarists that would be the right hand but I play left handed so it's my right hand thumb that seems to be wider!

Pete, you certainly shot off at a tangent there brother? I've heard the guitar called an axe (UK spelling) but never a arf dozen string machine. Ann calls my collection dust collectors or skip fillers when I die, I hope to get more pleasure from my babies before that eventuality