4,101

(9 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

hi bud_wiser,

when i write, i wont force a song just cos i haven't done one in a while...let it come naturally.

they say that minor chords make a song bluesy or ballardy, not necessarily...

so, a good story teller can look around him and make a story from what he sees, eg: my son has been having a lot of problems with his girlfriend, which he wont dump! but i've got 4 or 5 songs from it!

a friend had problems with a woman he had strong feelings for, she was unhappily married, another song.

i once saw graffiti on a wall saying "tracy loves paul" yep you guessed it, but i binned the song it was rubbish! so dont expect everything you write to be the new "bohemian rhapsody" you've got to write crap to know when you've got a good one.

as for performing, if your going to do your own songs, which are [in your words] "gloomy" do a couple of up-tempo/up-beat covers. break the night up.

hope i've helped

phill

4,102

(3 replies, posted in Poems)

oh yes! done a lot of bus ridin' in my time. but i still love the smell of leather and diesel and rubber you used to get from the old buses back in the 50's.  give me a "Guy" or an "AEC" any time.
The buses in Turkey are interesting as their called "dolmus" which apparently means stuffed, which they frequently are.

nice writing, the poems are getting more varied now which is great, not just love and death

phill

4,103

(7 replies, posted in Songwriting)

echo's of lady in red?

what were you thinking 1st or 2nd world war? weve all been a little pre-occupied with the big ones lately, but i like your images here and i could visualise the lipstick and the dress and shoes, i can remember my mother back in the early 50's wearing a crushed velvet gown she borrowed for a special night out with my dad.

one thing though...just a thought, at the end of the second verse, if you change "deserve" to "desire" it rhymes better and doesn't detract from the story!

phill

4,104

(4 replies, posted in Songwriting)

i guess the message is; every cloud has a silver lining. nice one robert

phill

4,105

(15 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

I've been gigging for nigh on 30 years, and I still perform some of the songs I did then. But I find you can be singing a song all your life then it suddenly hits you what the meaning of the song is, or what it means to you.

I was learning Elton John's "Your Song" when my father died, it took me a while to sing it live, and then I always felt weepy when I sang it. So it's not the actual content of a song, but more like what it means to you.

I've also felt emotional when I've had a big cheer for something I wasn't expecting.  Well, there you go.

All I can say is; don't turn on the waterworks just for the sake of it, as the audience isn't stupid.

Phill

4,106

(11 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

it's so sad that they've pulled the beatles songs, but i think you're right michael jackson bought the songs then sold them to sony....?
checked rockmagic and it looks good. well done for finding it

phill

4,107

(6 replies, posted in Songwriting)

this is a warning for those gullible ladies that fall for the romance that the waiter in the holiday hotel offers. they turn out to be the latest in a long long line. this is played with a latin american beat. if you know which let me know.

Dare.Undefined


[E] Dont run from me woman, got my sights on you.


[A] You've got your pick of all the men, but [E] I'm the one for sure.


[A] You've played with my heart strings, never [Dbm] knowing I'm there.


Oh [B] look at me [A] baby.....[E] dare.




[E] I see you in pictures, but they're not pictures of you.


[A] I see you in crowded rooms, on [E] buses and the tube.


[A] I cant clear my mind, your [Dbm] every thought that I have.


Oh [B] come to me [A] baby...dare.


chorus


[F] Dare to [E] love me. [B] Dare to [E] try.


[F] Your a beautiful [E] stranger, and you've [B] caught my [E] eye.


[F] Dare. [E] Dare.




[E] How I wish I could meet you, in some romantic place.


[A] We could sit and drink, talk in [E] whispers, until late.



[A] I'd take you home, and [Dbm] kiss you at your door.


Say [B] goodnight, then you'd [A] ask me in for [E] more.


rep chorus           

                             > solo  ||:A-E-B-F-E:||




[E] How can I show you, my love is so true?


[A] Cos tomorrow your leaving, but[E] another will fill your shoes.


[A] In a week i'll forget you, like all the [Dbm] others I've known.


[B] You were a [A] fool, cos you [E] dared.



rep chorus




Dare....dare. Dare





Words and music by Phill Williams. 26/07/09.

4,108

(14 replies, posted in Poems)

it's funny how men who fought in the war, like my dad my father in law, and others i worked with back in the 60's, would talk about the good fun they had, or how they had sex with lots of women. but when you asked them "how many men did you kill?" they'd only say that they shot in that direction, but they couldn't tell if they hit anyone.

my dad was a navy gunner, and from his reports [which we read after he died] he was pretty good. but he'd only talk in generalities about battles, yet full stories about the fun in-between times.

the second war was to free the world of tyrants. the first war was for tyrants, and men like my grandfather and yours, were just the pawns in their games...cannon fodder. it just goes to show what the working classes are thought of by the rich and upper classes, the lords and royalty.

and i'm a royalist!!!!

phill

4,109

(9 replies, posted in Songwriting)

ark,

after your heads up [as the yanks say] i went down to smiths and bought a copy of azincourt. but i'm not going to start reading it till i go away on holiday [again] next month. have you heard of a writer called simon scarrow? he's been doing a very similar thing to cornwell, with the roman invasion and that. now he's written a book on the Napoleonic wars!!!  bad form or what? any way he's pretty good, give him a try if you've got time.

phill

4,110

(14 replies, posted in Songwriting)

WEREWOLVES.COM  is this a new site or what?

sorry "invisible star"...old age creeping up rapidly, maybe you should change it to "dog star?"

phill

4,111

(4 replies, posted in Poems)

thanks guys,

i was feeling a little taciturn when i penned this. it's a bit of sarcasm as everything from the summer to the recession has been one big washout here in the uk at least! we still have terrorists, global warming, paedophiles etc...the world is sick and the human race is the virus.

talking of which, i've just heard that in my home town [llanelli] there are over 1000 cases of swine flu, [it's a small town] i haven't heard of any deaths yet...so lets pray there wont be any more world wide

phill

4,112

(14 replies, posted in Poems)

hi stransongs,

true poetry conjures pictures in your mind and evoke memories, which i must say this accomplished with the greatest of ease.

i remember way back in the 50's seeing old men with arms or legs missing and realising they must have lost those limbs in battle [i assume they were from the great war as they seemed a little old for the 2nd world war]

now they have all gone and we all owe them a great debt of gratitude, and this poem pays off a great deal of that debt.

well done and thanks for sharing.

phill

4,113

(9 replies, posted in Songwriting)

hi ark,

this piece is almost classical sounding! love it when the bass and drums come in, but i'm still waiting for the vocal...i would be very interested to hear you sing this, as i dont think it would be a simple task to put a melody line to match what you've already achieved on the recording.

i personally think the words [which are very beautiful in their own right] should be spoken and not sung...but that's my opinion.

you are a true artist my friend

phill

ps, what did you think of azincourt?

4,114

(8 replies, posted in Songwriting)

thanks all,

hi selso,

my piano playing [like my guitar playing] is pretty basic, but i'll make any noise i need to, to cover my voice [which i hate] yikes

hi ark,

thanks, glad i've finally managed to access soundclick so everyone can have a listen. [and laugh] no i haven't even looked for azincourt yet, i'd forgotten all about it until you mentioned it, so i'll pop into smiths this afternoon to see if i can get hold of it. wink

hi stransongs,

always happy to oblige my friend, to be honest i'd forgotten how pale horseman sounded my self, and i thought the recording was very iffy.

leaving...basically with my old stuff, i just dig them out now and again, plump them up give a 12000 mile service, then stick them back to bed till next time! hmm

hi robert,

thanks for that ,yeah, i got a bit fed-up with overdubbing and i've tried to go with just one or two dubs, giving the songs a kind of demo feel, i think? leaving plenty of room for interpretation. cool

hi russ,

on the trail off, i probably ran out of breath  roll

thanks again for your complimentary comments

phill

4,115

(14 replies, posted in Songwriting)

hi russ,

great tracks my maan! hear the harmonizer too, the dobro is excellent, and the vocals, the rhythm was smoking! loved the arrangement, so i guess you can say...i liked it, seriously though, very good, into a bit of a blues groove at the moment i think?

while i was on your web, i had a listen to the other tracks too, i still like "dark star" as it has a kind of innocence? is that the word, any way you keep going from strength to strength.. live long and prosper my colonial friend.

phill

4,116

(4 replies, posted in Poems)

Rose Coloured Glasses

By Phill Williams. 24/07/09.


It's been a long sunny summer.
It's been just great to be alive.
Global warming has been halted.
The recession has been survived.

All the terrorists threw down their guns.
And wars are in the past.
Everybody in the world.
Has a job and self-respect at last.

Swine flu never jumped the gap.
No humans got it and died.
No kids got in a stolen car.
And took it for a ride.

Paedophiles and rapists.
Wife beaters, riot gangs.
Knife killers, school bullies.
Satanic worship, all got banned.

But just like Bobby Ewing.
Came from the shower, in Pam's dream.
I'm afraid this was all my imagination.
But how I wish it had all been.

4,117

(2 replies, posted in Other string instruments)

You might like to try  Gear-4-Music, I found them very reasonable and they delivered in a matter of days.

Phill

4,118

(8 replies, posted in Songwriting)

I've up-loaded this song and a few others to Soundclick, ckick on the link below, then click on my name under the photo....it usually works for me anyway. I'd like to hear what you all think.

N JOYUM

Phill

4,119

(8 replies, posted in Songwriting)

This song was written in1975, so after digging it out i recorded it using just a piano backing.

Leaving.Undefined


[D] I was prepared for [Dmaj7] falling in love.


I had [G] thought it all out, [Gm] planned for our future.


I had [D] given it all the [Bm] planning it needed for [G] happiness.-[A]




[D] Those months ago, when [Dmaj7] we were so fresh.


[G] Getting together, but [Gm] making a mess.


Of our [D] seperate lives.


[G] Prepared for falling in [Bb] love.


But not for you.




[D] Leaving, [F#m] going away.


[G] Making a new life, [E] please wont you [A] stay.


[G] Leaving, [Bb] how can you [C] leave me this [D] way.




[D] Here I am lonely, [Dmaj7] cried all last night.



[G] Cant help these tears when I [Gm] think of you smiling.


When [D] we were together.


When [Bm] we laughed [G] together.-[Bb-C]


[F] I was prepared for [Fmaj7] falling in love.


I had [Bb] thought it all out, [Bbm] planned for the future.


[F] Prepared for [Faug] falling in [Dm] love.


But [C] not for you.


[F] Leaving, [Am] going away.


[Bb] Making a new life, [G] please wont you [C] stay.


[Ab] Leaving, wont [Cm] you change your mind.


Please [Db] turn around, and [Bb] say it's [Eb] alright.


[Abm] Leaving, [B] how can you [Db] leave me this [Eb] way?


Words and Music By Phill Williams. 23rd July 1975.





4,120

(12 replies, posted in Songwriting)

thanks russ, it sounds very interesting, have to give it a lot of thought though, eg who would buy it, apart from stransongs?  lol

phill

4,121

(22 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

i find that there is good music from every decade. the hard part is trawling through the dross to get to the nectar.

i play mainly 60's music in my live gigs, which i find well received in most venues.

i found the 70's heavy rock and progressive rock genre's most interesting. the 80's i found were a little short on imagination as was punk.
the 90's and 00's is so filled with rap that it's easier to turn the radio off. but there is still some good sounds out there, as long as they dont run out of ideas and start rapping!

i love that sound they got in the 50's recording studios, but as PA's were less powerful in those days than your  MP3 player the live sound must have been awful.

imagine the conversation;
" who did he say was playing?"
"i dunno, elvers priestly or something" lol

phill

4,122

(14 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

personally, i wouldn't have a problem with it. but as ken says, it would most likely need a category to itself, as members would keep adding to it as new sites are discovered. the only problem would be spamers and fly tippers, sorry advertisers, looking for a freebee.
in which case it would be time consuming for whoever was designated moderator, checking for any naughtiness....so i will leave it in the hands of those above.

phill

4,123

(12 replies, posted in Songwriting)

hi stransongs,

a CD? i wish...

if i can suss out soundclick i'll put pale rider back on for you.

hello mr ark, nice to hear from you again, if you recall i had a problem getting my soundclick address, that hasn't changed, any help would gratefully received, by the way, i've now completed 16 tracks, so i'm getting desperate.


phill

4,124

(5 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

banana splits?

phill

4,125

(4 replies, posted in Songwriting)

i am soooo disappointed!

i checked out your myspace  and this wasnt there.

this song is so poetic, so lyrical...it just makes me envious reading it. you are a true bard my friend. excellent work, thanks for sharing, and get the recording up soon

phill