Bill, your song got me going back through my old "hook book" to resurrect a song idea I had several years ago which is similar but different. One of the employees where I worked mentioned that a certain supervisor was ruthless. Being a "word guy" I wondered if someone can be ruthless can they also be "ruth"? I looked it up and sure enough its a word that means you have empathy for another or feel remorse for something you've done. So thanks to you awakening an old spark I wrote a new song last night. Think of the rhythm/chord progression used in "Mississippi Squirrel Revival"....... It's an AABCCB rhyme scheme like yours but without a chorus.
DE
Ruth
G
I was feeling kinda literary
E
So I perused the dictionary
A D G
To find new words that would impress my friends
G
But little did I know as I looked around
E
That the word that I finally found
A D G
Would bring my ten-year marriage to an end
Em
That word was "ruth" (with a little r)
G
A word I could use at the local bar
A D D7
A word they'd think an educated man had borrowed
G
A short word that just rolls off the tongue
E
That would impress bar patrons old and young
A D G
And replace "remorse", "pity","grief" or "sorrow"
A week went by and to my consternation
I couldn't slip that word into a conversation
I was growing testy and acting like a jerk
My wife asked what was wrong with me
I yelled "shut up and let me be"
Then slammed the door and hurried off to work
At the office I fretted and I stewed
And felt sorry about our little feud
And my angry reply that my wife had heard.
But I felt better as the day wore on
Because I knew when I got home
I'd have my chance to use my new-found word
......guitar riff........
I hurried home but was still a little late
Rushed up the walk and slammed the gate
And burst into the house without a warning
Grabbed my wife and said "Babe, I gotta say
That I've been feeling ruth all day
..............pause.............
G D G
She filed for divorce the next morning