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Probably the same reason as you posted this 3 times! I dare say one of our mods or a savvy member will come along and put you right.     

Thanks Jan, completely off the cuff. When something strikes my imagination out it comes!

Thanks Jeff, I doubt if I can replicate your sound or feel but I'll give it a go.     

I've been on here since 2007 (I think) while I was on holiday in Perth Australia. I found it through looking for a song! When I came home to Wales, I decided to look for a forum for song writers and Chordie came up and I've been here (being a pain) ever since. I've seen lots of names come and go, they all raised a smile, some as they came some as they went...lol.

They came with a flourish of a keyboard stroke
Some with strange names, some act the goat
Some thought themselves above all the rest
Some from the East, most from the West

Even though music is the focus on here
Some spoke of football or rugby of camping or who knows what
Of illness or worries or how do I play this chord?
We're all here to learn, to teach or just share
Most I'll never meet, so sad cos I care...

The door opened wide and the child burst in
A tornado in a Macintosh and short pants
Shaking off the rain and clutching his nanna
I love you nan, he said and kissed her cheek
Were off now to Disney land... goodbye, goodbye
Yahoo, he screamed and was gone in a flash
We walked to the door and waved as the car drove away
See you soon, enjoy and closed the door.
Tea? Yeah why not!     

thank you Daniel but that boat has sailed. there seems to be a demarcation line between my songs and my poems. i think songs should be reasonably serious and poems laced with humour. BTW welcome to Chordie     

Jim I noticed you'd copied the song 3 times I hope you don't mind that I've deleted 2 ?     

irony...i love it     

That is such a lovely poem/song, I wish I'd written it! Writers say that an empty page is more scary than Putin (or poo tin) you've made it sound the opposite. A glimmer of hope to those (like me at the moment) whose words have dried up. A nice title may be, the other shoe to drop, which I love or keep on keeping on. Both titles would explain your words and offer encouragement.
You've done a great job and a recording would be good.     

Brian. Aren't we all. I need to finish it first. Thanks.

Jeff. Thanks for that. It didn't come out as I heard it in my head.

Jim. Where do these words come from? One minute you're dreaming of puppies next these words pop in your head! Thanks to all for looking and nice comments.     

Brought a tear to my eye. I have a love-hate relationship with my daughter which upsets me, though she lives just 50 feet away and we speak every day but she gets annoyed at my (inane) humour and forgetfulness. I tell her I'm threatening 71 and I'm only going to get worse so have some patience with me. Sorry I digress.
This song is beautifully written and I'm sure you'll make a great recording of it.     

Peatle and I usually agree on everything, but there is one bit of this that we do differ! Wine....or as I know it: "devils urine" the only time I ever passed out after drinking!
Our queen is a great figure head for this country which unfortunately can't be said about other members of her family and elected politicians.

Well done Pedr