3,901

(12 replies, posted in Songwriting)

OK, this is a very simple song:  D-to D add a Db Bass - then D add a B bass - you get the idea?

I recorded this in Eb, as D was too low, I think Eb is also too low! it'll be on My-Space ASAP.

This began on May 1, as I was brushing my teeth ready for bed. The first line came to me, but I was too tired so I wrote the rest next morning. It wasn't meant as a sad song, or as a fisherman's shanty! Story is; early 20th century fishermen (from Bristol?) find themselves becalmed in the Irish sea, they decide to row for home. One lad has got his young lady in the family way, and they plan to marry next day. Sad ending, they meet a steamer coming from Bristol in the fog....

3,902

(12 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Bristol Bound.Undefined


[D] The skipper called “we'll [D/C#] row the boat� .


[D/B] Ten days from Bristol and [*] fish on the floor.


Not a [D] breath of wind to [Em] fill the sail.


Oh! [Gm] Davy Jones; bring us [A] home this day.


(repeat same chord sequence for all verses)




Where our wives are waiting on the dock.


Babes in arms for a sign they watch.


And the bells of the church are calling shrill.


“Ah! Davy Jones; bring them home this day� .


[soc]


(CHORUS)




So, [G] row boys, [Gm] row boys.


For this [D] sea has claimed your [Em] friends and your kin.


[G] Sing boys, [Gm] sing boys.


And [D] pray for a home blowing [G] wind.


And [Gm] pray for a Bristol bound [D] wind.


[eoc]




We've worked on these seas since time has began.


Generations of seamen, cant work on the land.


A place on the boat from father to son.


And when the sea takes my body, my son will step up.




But today I must row for there is no fair wind.


And tomorrow I wed so my child has a name.



And Lord may I hear my son's hungry wail.


Oh! Davy Jones, bring me home this day.




[soc]


(REPEAT CHORUS)


[eoc]


As night starts to fall and the light fails us too.


A breeze from the west, are we saved all this crew.


As we row up the Severn, pass the worm to the north.


See the lights of the taverns, taste the ale in the jar.




The skipper says “row lads our homes are in sight� .


“We'll unload this fish and drink beer tonight� .


  We're rowing in darkness, no light from the moon.


And the deep comes to claim us, there's a ship in the gloom.




[soc]


(CHORUS)






We [G] rowed boys, [Gm] rowed boys.


For this [D] sea has claimed all our [Em] friends and our kin.


[G] Swim boys, it's [Gm] grim boys.


[D] Oh for the home blowing [G] wind.


[Gm] Oh for a Bristol bound [D] wind.


[eoc]



Words & Music by Phill Williams.  1st May 2010.

3,903

(10 replies, posted in Songwriting)

for my part, i'd like to thank everybody. coralina was an easy song to put words to. it's funny how we were both on the same track content-wise with-out actually discussing what path we were taking.

i wrote the words, by the way, as an office dwellers day dream about his sailing yacht somewhere in the caribean...it's not about a woman or sex, though i guess a 30 foot yacht might be a bit of a babe-magnet?

phill

3,904

(8 replies, posted in Songwriting)

hi daddy,

home, home on the range. you can almost taste the grits `n`jowls, and wishbone's stew and beans.
wagon's ho

phill

3,905

(12 replies, posted in Songwriting)

thanks to all for commenting, as always it's a pleasure working with russ, hope you have a nice visit with your sister.

i got the indian vibe when russ first introduced me to the song, i admit i was a little dubious at first, but with some trans-atlantic idea bouncing i think we got a result.

well i'm so shocked, in the first posts (which i unfortunately deleted...ooops!) "magical mystery tour" was mentioned...now ELP and my great favourite, vocally, musically and song-writing-ly(?) ian anderson, along with the lennon/mccartney comparisons....have i died and gone to song writers heaven?

thanks everyone

phill

3,906

(15 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hi Kenny,

Really touching sensitive words, you can really put them together. I went through the song (something I never do without hearing it first) and once I found the rhythm I found it played nice, even the E7 to A7, it fits just fine, and gives the song another dimension.

You went quiet for a while, now your back in force. Still that one thing lacking my old mate....that gal darn recordin`. Come-on get them down, even if it's only guitar and voice, we'd all love to hear them.

Phill

3,907

(5 replies, posted in Other string instruments)

not knowing how you will use your mixer and speaker (or two?) limits the advice i can give.

it all depends really on what you intend to do with it. if your going to be playing at high volumes at say a large hall, then unless you have a really good set-up then you'll blow the speaker pretty quickly.
if your just going to use it in the front room, then i'd say you wouldn't need a bass amp.
how many other people will be playing through it at one time?

if you get a good PA set-up and you dont go blasting away too much (in your front room) then you can have one or two guitarists and your bass fairly comfortably, with a vocal mic. if you intend to use keyboards as well you may get distortion problems, or worse.

hope this helped

phill

3,908

(11 replies, posted in Songwriting)

hi kenny, or is it kap?....lol

i honestly cant remember if i replied or if it was russ, whichever way it is i think it's grrrrreat (put on a tony the tiger voice for that bit) lines i particularly like;

1. crusty moon

2.  looking glass to fly through

3. dave gilmore style solo.....

it must be really frustrating writing all these fab songs and not being able to let us all know how they should sound...come-on get the manual out and start recording

your welsh friend

phill

3,909

(0 replies, posted in Songwriting)

i just noticed that i haven't put the words up for this yet so here they are. you'll have to ask arkady for the chords....

Warpath.     

High on the distant plains, brave rider comes.
Head held high his pride is great.
His name is spoken in, lodge of the mighty ones.
His fame in battle won.

Lonely bird; eagle flying; patrols from up on high.
When the time is right, suddenly strike.
Is today a good day to die?

(GUITAR PART)

Lowland hunters, trespassing on his lands.
They must pay the price.
No quarter given, none expected.
The victor will keep his life.

Arrows fly, true warrior dies in battle.
One brave hunter falls to the ground.
Wait for the answer, caught them unawares.
More death as arrows fly.

(GUITAR PART)

Calls out, calls out.
His name drives fear to their hearts.
Some turn, some run.
Those that stay will die.

Knives are drawn, battle joined.
They fall one by one.
All alone now last man standing.
He returns to watch his lands.
Eagle flying, last man standing.
He returns to watch his lands.
Eagle flying, last man standing.
He returns to watch his lands.
Eagle flying, last man standing.
He returns to watch his lands.
Eagle flying, last man standing.
He returns to watch his lands.
Calls out, calls out.
His name drives fear to your heart.

Music by Arkady. Words by Phill. 12th March 2010.

3,910

(7 replies, posted in Poems)

hi lena, nice write me little colleen. it's sad when we have to explore the darker side of human existence, but it's always a relief when it's out. as kenny would say, "two thumbs up"

phill

3,911

(2 replies, posted in Songwriting)

I got home Saturday night at about 1.30 AM, and the first line popped into my noggin, so I finished it off Sunday morning. The theme is schizophrenia, it may not be recognisable from the lyrics. There has been a lot of scandal lately with schizophrenics being released as "safe" then they have killed.
I have posted it in the key of "D", but I wrote and am recording it in "F#". Capo on the 4th fret.

Cobwebs, Dust and Veils. Phill Williams.


They tell me that I'm sane.[D to A]


I'm sane as I need to be.


If they mess with my brain.


Will I be if I try to be?




CHORUS




And [G] funny things go [A] round my head.


[Bm] Through my mind, get [C] lost in there.


Oh, [D] cobwebs, [A] dust and [G] veils. [A]


[D] Cobwebs, [A] dust and [G] veils. [A]


[D] Cobwebs, [A] dust and [G] veils, [A] cloud my [D] mind.




The big men came one day. [D to A]


They said, “hey man your out of it� .


They took me for a ride.


We just seemed to drive around a bit.




(REPEAT CHORUS)




(BRIDGE)




And they [G] give me lots of [A] pretty pills.


I [D] watch TV and [G] paint the hills.


[Em] Mother comes round [A] now and then.



She [D] says “hello�then she's [G] gone again.


And I [Bm] wish sometimes she'd [Bm] stay a while.-(BASS RUN DOWN-B-A-Ab)


[Bm] Give some time to her [G] wayward child...


And [D] cobwebs, [A] dust and [G] veils.-[A]


[D] Cobwebs , [A] dust and [G] veils.-[A]


[D] Cobwebs [A] dust and [G] veils. [A] Cloud my [D] mind.




(SOLO)


And they [G] give food, three [A] times a day.


And [D] I could live my [G] life this way.


But they [Em] say I must get [A] out of here.


And I've [D] got to say; boy [G] am I scared?


The [Bm]big bad world sits and waits for me. (BASS RUN-DOWN=B-A-Ab)


Oh! my God, if they [G] set me free....


And, [D] cobwebs, [A] dust and [G] veils.-[A]


[D] Cobwebs, [A] dust and [G] veils.-[A]


[D] Cobwebs, [A] dust and [G] veils, [A] cloud my [D] mind.




So I'm back here on the street. [D to A]


All these people stare at me.


So I look down at my feet.


Is someone going to care for me?


(REPEAT CHORUS X 2)





Phill Williams 28th March 2010

3,912

(6 replies, posted in Songwriting)

hawaii -5-0 meets the bill? nice one daddy, social coment no less.

great going

phill

3,913

(8 replies, posted in Songwriting)

thanks everyone, if it wasn't for ark's original music and ideas i wouldn't have come up with the words. i listened my-self and noticed that there are some dubious harmonies and flat notes vocally!
the vocals are quite low in the mix, but i think it suits the song like that. the meter is out on some lines too, isn't it great when you can criticize your own work?

thanks all phill

3,914

(7 replies, posted in Songwriting)

hi jets,

very profound, here i am threatening 60 (well 59) i only feel old when my grandkids want to play chase or something active, it takes a while for my breath to catch-up these days.

great song

phill

3,915

(9 replies, posted in Songwriting)

hi stransongs,

when it comes to a bridge, if i'm stuck i usually look back at my old (failed) songs, i may find one catchy line, or a chord sequence that'll set things off.

i like what you've done so far, 2 more verses to follow, and a bridge?

phill

3,916

(14 replies, posted in Poems)

hi kenny,

kudos,  i knew you were a great musician, but i never realised how brilliantly you wrote lyrics, and you put this together in a day?....there are no words i can say to express how i feel about this piece, so i'd just like to award you the victoria cross of poetry...brill

phill

3,917

(4 replies, posted in Poems)

hi stransongs, i think kenny has said it all there, this is an extraordinary piece, beautiful and tragic.

well done sir

phill

3,918

(12 replies, posted in Songwriting)

thanks to all who commented,

mekidsmom, i think were stretching things here with the elton john refference, but thank you, your so lovelly...anal?  na

thanks kenny, are you keeping OK? talk soon buddy

geoguitar, thanks i'm trying...very trying according to my wife!

hi helena, a citog? i hope that's not swearing? thanks, i usually up-load the songs and lyrics the same time, but my-space can take up-to 24 hours before they can be listened to. hwyl

hi brokenarrow, thanks, dont forget, life is just a box of chocolates...what ever that means

phill

3,919

(7 replies, posted in Songwriting)

hi linus,

terrific imagery, audio or video would be nice

phill

3,920

(12 replies, posted in Songwriting)

hi robert,

please dont take this the wrong way, as i mean it as a compliment, but you could put this on a greetings card, the verse is super-duper...well done that man. have you thought about posting some stuff on the poetry section, you'll be very welcome.

and i notice a liberal sprinkling of minor chords too...

phill

3,921

(24 replies, posted in Recording)

I was just looking through my discs (and there are many!) and I've found some that will only record on my stand alone CD recorder and they are TDK CD-Music. I think you have to use DATA discs in your PC.

Phill

3,922

(5 replies, posted in Poems)

hi stran,

wow, very powerful piece.
i've stood out-side the hospital ward doors too many times my self, it's not a place i like being. parents, in-laws, children and worst of all my wife (4 years ago she had a very serious op) i can even empathise with the lost years, as i met my wife at 16, we didn't get on so we lost touch for 15 years, then we met again, fell in love and the rest is history...
the last part you have all to yourself, i've never smoked or drank heavily and never taken drugs or been nasty to anyone. but it is all there, marvelous, you've captured reality and made a very gritty and realistic poem.

congratulations 10 out of 10

phill

3,923

(24 replies, posted in Recording)

hi tony,

burning disks is a bit of a minefield! some disks wont play on older players, some wont play on expensive ones!!! so you ask "what's the point?" i've got no answer.

i know i'm just an old fart, but has the CDR+ or - got anything to do with it. i've got a philips CD recorder, and it will only record on one type,(cant remember which as i haven't used in a while)

surely you can down-load a free burner program? i've seen some on CNET, give them a go.

and check out if your burning to data or music....

phill

3,924

(8 replies, posted in Songwriting)

"you gave me inspiration to create my songs
now i share them with all chordians"

dubious and dare i say cheeky little rhyme there daddy?

nice one

phill

3,925

(15 replies, posted in Songwriting)

hi jody,

i read through your words first and i could hear the guy who sang "boy named sue" (i've forgotten his name, old age creeping up on me!) so then i played it on youtube and it was totally different to how i heard it. i think it needs to be more beaty with a faster rhythm. the song itself is a great narrative.

fine work

phill