3,701

(22 replies, posted in Poems)

time indeed flies by while your having fun, welcome krapyl, and thanks for your offering. i must say it is disturbing, all the talk of death and destruction. but all works of art are meant to make the mind work, to think and to decipher. so, welcome once again and well done.

phill

3,702

(2 replies, posted in Poems)

hi tommydone,

thanks for your poem. the last line is a bit disconcerting; "..admit my crime"? there are no criminals on chordie unless your a spammer, and weve had our fair share of those lately. so welcome to poems and i look forward to seeing more of your lyrical, entertaining and discriptive poems.

phill

3,703

(148 replies, posted in Acoustic)

i only use two fingers to play "F". just play the "A" shape chord on the 8th frett, but lay the 3rd finger across the D,G AND B strings, also used for the dreaded B chord and all the others up the arm. it's simple when you've mastered it. i've been using it for over 40 years now, just avoid dubbing the bottom E (6th string).

phill

3,704

(7 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

my mother gave me some good advice i wish i'd listened to; she said "play the mouth organ, it's lighter"
honestly, i've always found drummers to be the laziest and most selfish members of the band. the drums are always the last to go into the van "cos theyre delicate!" so everyone helps carry them into the hall, then while the rest of you are struggling and sweating carrying the amps and pa in, he's setting up cos it "takes longer to set drums up" coblers!!!! then they get drunk play too loud and sometimes even fall asleep halfway through a song. how can anyone fall asleep while playing "summertime blues?" beats me. give me a drum box any time....lol

congrats on buying a kit though, nothing like bashing a drum to relieve your frustrations when the drummer dont turn up...i love drummers really

phill

3,705

(9 replies, posted in Songwriting)

hi jeff,

all corners covered here, leeds, gardening and an ode to lost love. a story well told. i went to leeds once too, they called time at 10.30 and you had to drink up and be out by 10.40, very rude i thought, so i never went there again.
but the most surprising part of the song was that it stopped raining long enough for you to plant seeds?

lol phill

3,706

(7 replies, posted in Songwriting)

hi robert,

puts me in mind of raw hide, old gil favor and rowdy yates. though i thought it was the ozzies that had tucker? nice tale, i could almost taste the dust and smell the cow pats

phill

3,707

(6 replies, posted in Songwriting)

hi jeff,

glad you like it, you must be a clever dick, cos i can never figure out peoples songs...lol

hi robert,

from the heart, this one. all true too. we met at a disco where they only played waltzes and "ling-a-long-a-max" you know? grab a granny...lol. then one night ann (the wife) came along to one of my gigs and as i was looking her in the eyes while i was singing a love song she whispered "i love you too" boy was i flying after that! 30 years and counting.

hi tony,

i made a boo boo on blue is grey! you see the riff was running around my guitar for some time, then one day i managed to write a couple of verses, did a backing track and promptly forgot about it!
then a week or two ago, i put together 3 or 4 bits i'd been working on and wrote 10%!!!! then after up-loading to my space, i came accross blue is grey and realised what i'd done. so if you thought the riff and chording were similar, you now know why

thanks to all

phill

3,708

(6 replies, posted in Songwriting)

This is a realy old song, written when my wife Ann and me got together 30 odd years ago. I have changed a few words and some chords, but that's it. You can listen to this and another new song or two on My-space, click on my web to your left. Comments welcome.

Why Cont You Stay Tonight?Undefined




(CHORUS)




[D] Why don’t you stay tonight? [F#m] Stay till the morning light.


I'll [G] fix you a coffee or a drink if you like.


[Gm] We can make love all through the night, oh!


[D] Why don’t you stay tonight, [Asus] why don’t you stay tonight? -[D]




[G] Do you remember that night?


We stood [Bm] talking outside the disco.


And I [Em] held you in my arms. As I [Cmj7] looked deep into your [A7] eyes.


And I [Am] said it with all I had. And I [Bm7] meant every word I [Cmj7] said....[Cm]


I love you.-[G-Am-Dsus-D]


[D] Do you remember that night? I was [Bm] singing and you were watching.


And you [Em] looked deep into my eyes. Then you [Cmj7] whispered I read your [A7] lips.


And the [Am] words burned into my mind.


And you [Bm7]meant every word that you said....[Cmj7- Cm]



I love [G] you.-[Am- Dsus-D7]


(REPEAT CHORUS).




[G] I can remember those nights. I meant [Bm] every word I was singing.


And I could [Em] see you were singing along. And I [Cmj7] knew we could never go [A7] wrong.


So I [Am] sang it with all I had. And I [Bm] meant every word that I [Cmj7] said....[Cm]


I love [G] you.-[Am- Dsus-D]




(REPEAT CHORUS). (SOLO). (CHORUS)






[D] Why dont you stay tonight? [F#m] Stay for the rest of your life.


I'll [G] make you a home and I'll make you my wife.


I'll [Gm] give you the things that will make feel right.


Oh, [D] why don’t you stay tonight? [Asus] Why don’t you stay [A] tonight?


[D] Why don’t you stay tonight? [Asus] Why don’t you stay [A] tonight?-[D]



3,709

(9 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

Penblwydd Hapus Canada. roughly translated means; Happy Birthdday Canada, does that make all you Canadians 144 too? A lot of you dont look it though  LOL.

I f the prince and his young wife are made citizens, does that mean you keep them? PLEASE

3,710

(6 replies, posted in Songwriting)

hi robert,

it's about an ex girlfriend, you know the type, you can trust about as far as you can throw them?

thanks for the thumbs up

hi kenny,

how you enjoying our royals out there? you can keep them if you want, (less tax for me...LOL)

hi dino,

glad you like my humble efforts. it's easy to write about what you have first hand experience of. i'm sure we have all tasted this forbidden fruit? thanks for the two thumbs

3,711

(3 replies, posted in Poems)

yep that works for me, very visual, i could picture the scene.

well done, cant wait to see more

phill

3,712

(4 replies, posted in Songwriting)

hi tony,

this is great, really excellent work. must say though i loved universe! triffik

phill

to avoid deleting all posts in a topic, i have edited several posts and replaced the post as well as the spam. the poster has also been banned.

if your sole intention for joining CHORDIE is to post spam, just remember that spammers are reported by members, then banned by the moderators.

so play nice please, no spam.

thank you

3,714

(8 replies, posted in Songwriting)

noted your comment about a love song with Leeds in it. how about something to do with gardening? e.g.

we were out in the garden, sowing some seeds.
a garden in england, a garden in leeds.

that's your starter for ten, the rest i leave to you

cracking song by the way, love a bit of blues

phill

3,715

(23 replies, posted in My local band and me)

Kenny, we worked together once (if you remember?) and I have no doubt in my mind that you can carry this off with no sweat at all. The demons are in your mind, and once you get through that most difficult part, which is walking onto that stage and playing the first verse, you'll settle back and love it. You will come off the stage (if the audience let you off!) and you'll want to get back on and do it again, even if it means playing the same three songs!

Performing to an appriciative audience is more addictive than heroin. It happens to me all the time...I wish!

Dont fret it my friend, just enjoy the experience

Phill

PS, not too many sherbets before you hit the boards!

3,716

(8 replies, posted in Songwriting)

hey kenny, what a bittersweet little song. i feel a touch of sadness in your words almost melancholy? wish i knew how your melody takes the song, a recording would help roll

phill

3,717

(6 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Always a pleasure young man. How are things in the land of canuke?

3,718

(6 replies, posted in Songwriting)

This is here cos my good friend Kenny asked for it. Hope you enjoy it and play along if you like.

No Friend.Undefined


[C] You asked me stuff and then you passed it on.


You made-up things that you knew were wrong.


Then you [G] stirred it all with a wooden spoon.


And you added things that you knew weren't true.


And you [Em] call me your best friend.


It's your [Am] broken heart that I always mend.


Oh! [C] friend. No [G] friend.




You [C] robbed my thoughts and you raped my mind.


Like a locust horde, left nothing behind.


Just [G] lies and pain and hurt and blues.


Then you stirred it up with a wooden spoon.


And you [Em] call me your best friend.


It's your [Am] broken heart that I always mend.


Oh! [C] friend. No [G] friend.






And [D7] one day when it all comes out.



Leave everyone with no doubt.


And you [Em] call me your best friend.


And you [Am] call me your best friend.


Some [C] friend. No [G] friend.






(SOLO; A-C-Em-Am-C-G-Em-G)




[C] Later than it aught to be with a sheepish smile, half apology.


You come around looking so forlorn.


But the [G] act is tired, the words are worn.


Oh! [Em] friend. No [Am] friend. Some [Em] friend. No [Am] friend.


It's to [C] me you come when you need a friend.


No [G] friend. No [Em] friend. No [Am] friend.


I [C] wont be your best friend no more.


No [G] friend.





3,719

(6 replies, posted in Songwriting)

hi robert, thanks for the review, the sound does seem a little distorted, how is the collaberation with jeff coming on?

hi tony, i was just messing at the piano when fairwinds came, it took all of 10 minutes and about half an hour to record. the guitar came later. nothing planned. it took longer to think of the title!

hello russel, the riff for 10% has been around for a couple of months, words and a melody just wern't coming. then it all came together in a flash.
it's an all live recording, guitars drums the works. thanks for the review.

talk soon ?

3,720

(6 replies, posted in Songwriting)

just to invite anyone who'd like to hear 4 new tracks that i've added to my-space (click web on the left).

sorry arkady, i've invaded your teritory by including 2 ambient type tracks

1. no friend

2. fairwinds (instrumental)

1 country/ rock , ghosts of winter

and 1 rock song, 10%.

chords and words can be put up if anyone wants them. comments welcome

phill

if i read your post right, i think you are being side-lined, they get you in, then decide they dont want you cos you dont fit? you then form another band, with a female vocalist....great, suddenly your in demand again. what's gonna happen when the singer gets her feet under the table, are you gonna be dumped again?

jump before your pushed my friend, put all your energies into your own band.

phill

3,722

(4 replies, posted in Poems)

made me wonder....what's the "green abyss?"

thought provoking. keep up the good work

phill

3,723

(4 replies, posted in Poems)

what a beautiful tale. well written and shows us our predjudices and hang-ups, with a little hint of fun and irony.

best regards to you sister

phill

3,724

(14 replies, posted in Poems)

hi blackwolf, welcome to poems.

i think i've worked out the problem, you've mixed up the bridge and 3rd verse. if you play what you've marked as "bridge" as verse 3 it works. verse 3 then becomes the bridge (hope you've got a tune for it?)

i made my own rhythm and chords to play it, which will most likely differ immensly from what you've written.

nice write, looking forwrd to hearing the finnished song. let us know when you post it

phill

3,725

(4 replies, posted in Poems)

nice work.

i've just come off internet banking with the wife giving me instructions, while kissing my neck...(but you dont want to hear about that!) and writing birthday cards. birthday cards? yes. this put me in mind of an accountant sending his other half a romantic (birthday?) card.

ticks all the boxes

phill