3,176

(16 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hi Phill,

Thank you for your kind words about my rendition of "The Broken Doll". However I was not intending to put it in the Internet but to use it on the next CD I record or my family and friends. Anyway you already have it on your MySpace so the thought had not crossed my mind.

Mind you I do love this song. There is something magic about it, I do wish I could put my finger on exactly what it is.

Roger

The Broken Dollby Phill Williams


 


Intro:


[C][D][G][D]


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.


Verse 1:




[G]She used to [D]stand there in the [Em]corner, [D]


[C]Long blond [D]hair and eyes so [G]blue, [D]


[G]She stood there [D]looking down for [Em]years and [D]years,


[C]Each time I [D]saw her, I saw [G]you.[D]




Verse 2:




[G]Her pretty [D]dress was always [Em]perfect, [D]


[C]Her rosy [D]cheeks and lipstick [G]too, [D]


[G]Like some sweet [D]princess from a [Em]time gone [D]by,


[C]Each time I [D]saw her, I saw [G]you. [G7]


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.


Chorus:



[C]But she [D]fell so many [G]years a[Em]go, [D]


[C]Her pretty [D]leg was broke in [G]two, [D]


[C]The glue be[D]neath her dress was [G]hidden [D]from [Em]view,


[Am]Each time I saw her, I saw [Dsus]you. [D]


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.


Verse 3:




[G]The china [D]doll stood out[Em]side my [D]reach,


[C]And so I [D]climbed upon a [G]chair,[D]


[G]And as I [D]reached to take her [Em]down to [D]play,


[C]I lost my [D]grip and down she [G]fell. [G7]



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Chorus:



[C]But she [D]fell so many [G]years a[Em]go, [D]


[C]Her pretty [D]leg was broke in [G]two, [D]


[C]The glue be[D]neath her dress was [G]hidden [D]from [Em]view,


[Am]Each time I saw her, I saw [Dsus]you. [D]


.


.


Verse 4:




[G]I held the [D]broken leg in [Em]trembling [D]hands,


[C]You helped me [D]set the leg back [G]true, [D]


[G]And though she [D]could no longer [Em]stand a[D]lone,


[C]Each time I [D]saw her I saw [G]you. [G7]


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.


Bridge:



[Bm]Down my [Am]cheeks the tears were [Em]rolling,


[C]How I [D]feared my mothers [Em]wrath,


[Bm]You wiped my [Am]tears, you held me [G]close to [Em]you, [D]


[C]The break was [D]hidden by the [G]cloth. [G7]


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Verse 5:




[G]And I have [D]loved you ever [Em]since that [D]day,


[C]The bond be[D]tween us strong and [G]true, [D]


[G]The broken [D]doll our sec[Em]ret heart[D]ache,


[C]Each time I [D]see her I see [G]you, [D]


[C]Each time I [D]see her I see [G]you. [G]



3,177

(6 replies, posted in Acoustic)

Hi Rokai and welcome to Chordie from me,

Doug has given you some very good and sound advise and I have liitle to add but singing, just like learning to play an instrument, does need practice. The more you do the easier it becomes, you need to learn to breath properly and with time you will probably increase your vocal range. Recording yourself and listening to the playback is an excellent idea.

It is not strictly necessary to know how to read music to play or sing but all knowledge is valuable and it is worth the effort to learn. It does help if you come across formal sheet music to be able to look at and follow the melody of a song you are not sure of.

Roger

3,178

(10 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hi Daddycool,

Nice one, mind you I did have difficulty pronouncing the chorus (you want to hear my Portuguese, I am rubbish at that too). It plays well and I like the 'shimmy your hips' bit. Well done.

Keep them coming,

Roger

3,179

(9 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Thank you James,

Some songs suit having all the bell and whistles and others do not and I felt this was better simply done. Mind you I could not resist the autoharp in the chorus, just like Helena I love the sound of it and thank you for your tips on playing it too.

Roger

3,180

(6 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hi Phill,

I can really relate to this song. You are so right it does just taste like rancid serpent venom (although I usually say it tastes like weasel urine, but not quite so politely). On occasions I have been given a cup and, being such a shy type of guy I have not liked to say anything, so I have had to grit my teeth and take it down.

I did like the song and a you have a very interesting chord sequence. Good work my friend.

Roger

PS I hope you don't mind I did a bit of juggling with it as you put the special formatting switch (the 'song' in square bracket) as the Subject. It should be in the Message at the just before the {t:title}. By the way I think the third line of the verse should read pretty maids and not pretty mads.

3,181

(26 replies, posted in About Chordie)

Hi HollowayJ and welcome to Chordie,

Copyright, I believe, lasts for between 50 and 70 years and it is the music publishers that think that they are losing revenue with lyrics and chords being freely avaliable on the Internet. As with other contibutors to this thread I think that this is a very shortsighted attitude.

With regard to errors on songs as a Member of Chordie you can click on the 'Improve this song' tag and edit and correct it. It will then show a note at the bottom that you have done so. There are several other threads giving a detailed explanation of how to do this.

Roger

3,182

(12 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

Of course you did explain that it is the responsibility of the person that loads the washing to empty all pockets, replace missing buttons, and darn socks before putting them in, so it could not be your fault at all.

Just a suggestion, although it might be an idea to plan your getaway route before you mention it.

Roger

3,183

(9 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Ark, I can't get much past your sharp ears can I? However it is not an effect as such. I made two recordings of the guitar and whilst deciding which one to use I played them together in error and decided to use them both. The only actual effect is a small amount of reverb on the vocals. Thank you.

Thank you too Daddycool. Sorry to hear about your flashplayer but I do not see why you should not suffer like the others so I have sent you a copy by e-mail lol

Roger

3,184

(9 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Thank you  for your comments Russell. I have been trying to write this song for a while but it was not until listening to Phill's "The Broken Doll" that I relised how to do it.

Thank you Kenny. Yes, a while ago I did come across a sparrow that needed help. However the sparrow in question stands 5'2" with long blonde hair and is rather gorgeous. The song is metaphorical.

Nice to have you back with us Helena. Thank you too. I also love the sound of the autoharp and perhaps in few years I will be a good as James is with one.

Roger

3,185

(9 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Following in the footsteps of Phill Williams and Marcalan I have kept the recording of this one simple. Just finger picked guitar and added autoharp for the chorus.

It is on MySpace: www.myspace.com/rogerguppy


Roger 



Tiny Sparrowby Roger Guppy


Intro:


[G][Bm][C][D]




Verse1:




[G]I saw a tiny [Bm]sparrow [C]looking sad and for[D]lorn,


[C]And I swear there was a [F]tear in her [Bb]eye,[C]


[F]It was then that I [Am]noticed her [Bb]little wing had [C]broke,


[Gsus]She [D]could no longer [G]fly.[D]


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Verse 2:




[G]Gently I [Bm]held her and [C]took her to my [D]home,


[C]And with match and [F]tape I fixed her [Bb]wing,[C]


[F]I gave her love and [Am]encouragement to [Bb]let her know I [C]cared,


[Gsus]What [D]joy when she started to [G]sing.[G7]


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Chorus 1:


[C]Poor little [D]sparrow, [G]you were so [Em]free,


[C]And roamed through[D]out the skies of [G]blue,[D]


[C]One day [D]soon your [G]wing will [Em]mend,


But 'til [C]then I'll [D]take care of [G]you.[D]


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Verse 3:




[G]It did not seem too [Bm]long [C]before the splint came [D]off,


[C]But would her wing [F]work as it did be[Bb]fore?[C]


[F]Clumsily she [Am]fluttered [Bb]for a day or two,[C]


[Gsus]Soon [D]she could fly once [G]more.[D]


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Verse 4:




[G]Too soon the day [Bm]came [C]when she was strong e[D]nough,


[C]And with sorrow and [F]joy I set her [Bb]free,[C]


[F]Would I see her a[Am]gain? [Bb]Now who can tell?[C]


[Gsus]I'd like to [D]think she'd remember [G]me.[G7]


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Chorus 2:


[C]Happy little [D]sparrow you are [G]once again [Em]free,


[C]To roam at [D]will, the skies so [G]blue,[D]


[C]Sing your little [D]heart out, [G]do what you [Em]will,


For you [C]no longer need [D]me to take care of [G]you,[D]


[C]You no longer need [D]me to take care of [G]you.[G]



3,186

(11 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

And don't forget that at Christmas every Member has to send us a bottle of Single Malt lol.

Seriously though, we get no more than you do. We just do it as we love music and Chordie.

Roger

3,187

(1 replies, posted in Song requests)

Hi Colin and welcome to Chordie,

If you mean "Pretty Amazing Grace" the answer is yes but it is illegal for me to post them here so look out for a private e-mail from me.

Roger

3,188

(3 replies, posted in Acoustic)

Hi Aellarby and welcome to Chordie,

Personally I think that playing an acoustic guitar with a pick should be a hanging offence and the only mitigating circumstance is picking individual strings for lead work lol.

Seriously, by using nail or flesh, one finger or all five you can create so much variation of sound, also you can change from strumming to fingerpicking seamlessly. You are never going to give yourself problems by dropping one midway through a song and never going to have to fish one out from inside the guitar.

That being said there are going to be occasions when a pick is needed so I do have a carrier with picks in attached to my guitar.

Roger

You confused me there Toney as there is a very funny English radio presenter of the same name: http://www.bbc.co.uk/radio2/shows/wright/

Can the world stand two funny Steve Wrights? I guess yes, the more humour the better as there is too much doom and gloom.

Roger

3,190

(26 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

Hi Dino,

Be honest, tell them that you would give your eye teeth to own that guitar but also point out to them that it is a top make and because of its age it could be worth quite a bit of money.

If they still want you to have it you will sleep at nights (probably with it at your side lol) and if they sell it you will have the satfisaction of knowing that you you did the right thing.

Roger

3,191

(3 replies, posted in About Chordie)

Hi Again,

Ok lets not give up just yet. If the avatar is on your PC send it to me. or the link if it is on the 'net. You will not be able to send it through the Chordie e-mail so write to me direct at: rogerguppy@aol.com and I will see if I can help you.

I am not quite sure where you are but is midnight here and I need my beauty sleep so I will not be able to reply until tomorrow.

Roger

3,192

(3 replies, posted in About Chordie)

Hello Unique and welcome to Chordie,

Did you remember to click the box that says "Use Avatar" before trying to upload it? That is all I can think of that will prevent you from uploading it.

Roger

3,193

(19 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

cameronkl7 wrote:

Hey Everyone, I found a friend who's willing to help me, he's been playing for a long time and very good at it actually, comes from a musical family. The great thing is he only lives a mile and a half from me, just goes to show you most everything you need in usally right in your own back yard, I think I heard that line in a song once!

          Cam

Hi Cam,

Reading this I can see the smile on your face and feel the excitement of renewed interest. I am very pleased for you.

Roger

3,194

(6 replies, posted in About Chordie)

Hi CCR and welcome to Chordie,

Please post the link to the song you are having trouble with so we can try to help you.

Roger

3,195

(5 replies, posted in Song requests)

Hi hjth,

I had not heard this song before and it sent shivers down my spine when I listened to it so  thank you for that.

I can only find the lyrics at: http://www.sweetslyrics.com/555826.Alison%20Krauss%20-%20Jacob's%20Dream.html

But it does appear to be for sale here: http://www.musicnotes.com/sheetmusic/mt … =MN0057631

Best I can do I'm afraid.

Roger

3,196

(13 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hi Marcalan,

Strangely I have been thinking on similar lines recently, do we need to have all the instruments and backing vocals, can it be kept simple and pure? It was listening to, and then recording,  Phill William's "The Broken Doll" with just a piano backing the vocals that set the ball rolling. I found that to add any extra instruments or vocals detracted rather than added to the song. My conclusion though, is that it rests on the emotional tone and the message conveyed in the song/music as to the amount of simplicity or complexity needed.

That being said I did enjoy your piece, it was very relaxing and soothing and an inspirational idea to work on the variation of just one chord.

Thank you,

Roger

3,197

(44 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

Hi Kenny,

Sorry about your plight. It is all too easy at a party, to have sufficient alcohol to exceed the limit, although still be in full control of your faculties.

Reading through the penalties in your part of the world is like reading a horror story, they are very harsh. I can only assume that there have been a great number of tragedies through drink driving to have resulted in such draconian punishment.

I am going to a pub quiz shortly, so I think I will stick to a couple of shandies and Coca Cola tonight.

My thought are with you.

Roger

3,198

(10 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Hi James,

Luckily I did not have Ken's problen and I played it through, then I looked further down and saw that I need not have bothered as you have recorded it already, so I had a listen too.

I did like the "Who is the total stranger who is leaving me" version but it would have been difficult to have taken that theme much further and who cares if it does not make sense, I don't make sense a lot of the time so it suits me fine lol.

Roger

3,199

(4 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

upyerkilt wrote:

If tomorrow was yesterday and today was tomorrow, what day would it be the day after next friday?


lol


Ken

I will tell you tomorrow!!!

Roger

3,200

(6 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Nice song Jeff,

I particulatlry like the first two lines and the answer at the end.

Well done,

Roger