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3,077

(9 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Phill


I like like it a lot , even though  " besotted"  is $50  word  that I had to look up.  I guess I would be stuck with obsessed or infatuated with if I was writing it - but now i am a bit smarter thanks to you smile   Can't wait to hear it.

The verse
"And I can say with  utmost certainty.
She will  make you want her constantly. "    reminds of the guitar you wanted for so long - and then when you got it in you hands the feeling wasn't there.   smile   

Good work my friend

Jim

3,078

(19 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

Phill


Should have bought it, you can never have enough guitars ! smile
Jim

PS
I have a shirt that says " go on....buy it..... you can always get another wife "   LOL

3,079

(36 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Russ,

That might be the cause of global warming in Wisconsin !!! THAT WAS HOT!!  I really enjoyed it, your playing is way gone - I'm soooo jealous.  Great performance

Jim

3,080

(15 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Thanks Phill,   

I agree with what Dave pointed out as well - same perspective I have with my wife.  :0 )

The Bm is really hard for me to play, but ibecause it sounded right - I couldn't avoid it.

There are so many talented musicians on Chordie - and everyone is so positive --- whoever came up with this idea should be commended !  The camaraderie among the members  is amazing !

3,081

(27 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Amy,

After listening to it - I was so impressed.  You have a GREAT VOICE  !    It took me a couple of " listens" to figure out that you put the word cruise in  ( rhymes with Blues)  -   I could picture you going through the night writing this --- it has that once in a lifetime sound - I'm sure you didn't want to let it go and try to re-create it in the morning !   It is just excellent!

It has such an "Island flow"  and the way you bring the lyrics to life - it makes me want to go to my favorite spot on Earth right now - the beach ! ( Topsail, NC is my heartland of beaches)  I think I am closer now to how you play it - but you are so much better.  You are truly blessed with vocal and instrumental talent.

Jim

3,082

(15 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Wrote this from perspective of a young man ready to get married to the love of his life.  Hope you like it.

3,083

(15 replies, posted in Songwriting)

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3,084

(4 replies, posted in Songwriting)

oooh  I like it !!

awesome rhythm...   I can picture this as a great dance song in tavern

3,085

(11 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Phill

Excuse my naiveness .....   what is a DP24 ?

JIM smile

3,086

(27 replies, posted in Songwriting)

From one New Yorker to another --- very cool   I 'm not sure I'm playing it like you - but it sounds nice and I like the words a lot. Way to go !

Jim

3,087

(11 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Phil

Really cool song - what guitar did you use ?- - love the sound.       Interesting topic as well smile

I would love to see chords and lyrics if it's not a bother.

Greta job!

Jim

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KAP   - That was a very nice song ! I enjoyed the guitar playing - the story is very Special. I have an affinity for being a cowboy - so it hit home.   I thought you sound was very heartfelt- like you were really the subject of the song. I also liked how you did the video - blending pics with you performing - that was awesome!  Thanks for the peak, keep sending them out !


Jim K

3,090

(16 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Phill

I listened to it on your myspace website - sounds very nice...  captured the emotion of the moment I think .....  quite sad

I did have that thought from the Seinfeld episode where George Costanza says - " it's not you it's me"     pop into my head though, and it made me smile in the middle of this sad song. smile

Well done though.     It is funny how things pop into your head for songs....... showers, riding in car, walking with the dog --- they just seem to come out anywhere they choose.
anyway - thanks for a nice song Phill

JK

3,091

(40 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Russell  - I loved the song - especially the passion that emerged as you sang it.  Well done !!

3,092

(1 replies, posted in Songwriting)

ALL I CAN SAY IS -  PHILL WILLIAMS IS DA' MAN !!   

He is a fantastic musician, and took the time to help a fellow " Chordie guy" get some music done, and done well !
If anybody on this site has something you need help with -Phill is definitely a tremendous resource. 

Thank You Phill !

3,093

(4 replies, posted in Songwriting)

thanks Phill     I use the low E as the base    play the first verse soft - then play full chords and harder on next two stanzas - then soft again --- finish up hard on last stanza...    I like it cuz it has a driving rhtyhm    I wish I was a singer -----   but to embarrassed to sing except to my self and my dogs

3,094

(7 replies, posted in Songwriting)

some lyric change and title change

3,095

(10 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Nice Artie - Ya can't ever go wrong with Cowboy messages ! Glad you put in about waltz time - I was having tough time with regular 4/4  Thanks for the cool song!  Jim

3,096

(4 replies, posted in Songwriting)

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3,097

(7 replies, posted in Songwriting)

I would if Phil would sing it       I am a really bad singer   sorry

3,098

(13 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Phil

That was very cool !   I wish I had a voice like yours - guitar well played as well.

Thanks for sharing! TIGLJK  JIM

3,099

(7 replies, posted in Songwriting)

I made changes to the lyrics, and subsequently changed the title to "MORE".   I couldn't figure out how to change in on the listing.,S0 it says "Love on the Line" but the song is called MORE.  Sorry.

3,100

(7 replies, posted in Songwriting)

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