OK Brian

I may be completely off my rocker but this is how I read that poem.

I pictured a guy in a  bar that is open 24 hours a day. .  He has been on a drinking binge and three 4 o' clocks have gone by - gonna be late for everything.
He has drank so much, if he was stopped by the police -he fail the sobriety test.

However - realizes he can't drive so he has to wait til he sobers up - making a good decision regarding  his fate.
(Better to be late than dead or having something terrible occur.)

and that's when you know you wrote something really good Brian, when people see the word sand have very different interpretations.  Well done.

Like Phill said in a different thread- it's a mute point by now as the ship has long sailed - but keep them coming Man !      

EB  I actually really liked this song !

Cool rhythm  - gets the foot a tapping !

Thanks for sharing

Jim     

Very inspirational and touches home for me.
believe, believe, in eternity !

Thanks Peatle !     

Beatles 
Fender  ( But if Taylor was an option I would have picked it)
blues
60s
neither       

says the video is not available to people in United States     

Phill

LOL - My grandson watched it with me as he was in my computer room- he is  age 7 - told me the same thing  !     

Brian

That was a great song and video !  Loved that it was recorded in the public garden of NYC !   Th turtles and  the veggies fit so well with his fabulous playing and singing.
I loved at the end thet the butterfly flew away - so symbolic and in line with the lyrics.

Thanks for sharing that!

Jim     

Agreed, Chordie has lost many voices on the forum.

I just read the last post - I think it is spam  - the earlier posts began with beamer, had mekidsmom and CG responding - those were from 2018.     

EB
Nice tidbit of a rhyme that is spot on about so much music lately.
There is a lot of great music, but a large percentage is exactly      how you describe it.

Good to see you posting.

Cheers
Jim     

Perspective is everything. 

Jesus was missing ( at least in the bible from 12-30 years of age) does that make him  a homeless person or a vagrant ?
Yogi's are isolated for years sometimes - same thing.

Nicely written Peatle- and again I agree with Phill - poetry need not rhyme.

You really should submit you poems to magazines of websites that that accept poetry for all to see.  No sense of keeping good stuff all to yourself!

CHEERS !
PROST ! ( I learned this one on my European trip  )
Jim     

NIce one Graham

Seems there are more and more like that - not only in bars - but in schools, hospitals,
picnic areas etc... really - everywhere !

I suppose it's their way of enhancing their self image and gaining attention.

legends in their own minds I guess

as for him being a  bedroom rockstar - I would believe it verges on vicarious experiences - more fiction than non-fiction. 

Thanks for sharing

Jim