2,776

(9 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Your song tells it perfectly.

2,777

(4 replies, posted in Songwriting)

I would love to hear this done with a group of voices. On the G and F chords Bass voices at the start of each line. ON the second half of the lines singing words like hero's in our mist alto or soprano voices. And maybe a couple lines of narration with a deep voice. Excellent lyrics could be presented in numerous and exciting ways. Its was a day embedded in the many Wellingtonians memories who were around at that time of this disaster. Another idea I had is dividing the song into male and female vocals.

2,778

(7 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Clever lyrics using tennis as an analogy.