Russell_Harding wrote:

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Nice to see you Russell, haven't seen you on Chordie in ages.  Hope all is well with you smile     

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(9 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Nice Jeff, your another one who seems to be able to keep writing new songs and seems to always have lots to write about.   Thats talent.  Nicey performed.     

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(6 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Nice lyrics to this one Jim.  I like this one very much.  I couldn't find the original that you're talking about so couldnt compare the changes.  Are you going to perform it for us to hear?     

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(5 replies, posted in Poems)

easy and Peatle that was great!  Well done you two collaborating on this one.  I liked the simplicity of it and I agree, kids would like that one.     

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(6 replies, posted in Poems)

Well done Peatle,  most of those BIG words I have never heard of big_smile   I think people make up words too, just need to look at the new words evolving these days from text messages, it can be a whole new lingo.

Big words, long words,
good words, curse words.
Shouting words, gentle words,
nice words, hurtful words.
Understandable words, indistinguishable words,
foreign words, jargon words.
Hopeful words, joyful words,
negative words, sad words.
Lost in words, forget your words,
memorable words, forgettable words.
Words unite us or words divide us,
words drive us or words stop us.
Words upset us, words encourage us,
words direct us, words connect us.

Thanks once again for helping out to set this up neo whilst I was busy and away, cheers.

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neophytte wrote:

This video is one of the gigs I did at Wanneroo Folk club, and starts with "Light my Fire" - which has the words "funeral pyre" in the second verse:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m1V5ZMa9CAQ

Cheers

Richard

Good to hear the audience joining in with you in your first song Richard.  Always satisfying when the crowd does that, makes it all worthwhile.   Nice to hear your originals too.   That last song you definitely were getting into it, well done smile     

Peatle Jville wrote:

To get the ball rolling for this month here is a song I wrote Different Layers.   
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TrqpFCzrLOw

I liked that one Peatle, very much how many of us were feeling re voting this year and who for this time around.  I could relate to your lyrics in this song.  I like how you put your thoughts to song.  Nicely done smile     

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(62 replies, posted in Featured Song of the Month)

AUGUST 2023 FSOTM: TICKET, MEMEORY, WATER, WINTER, WINE, PICTURE

Peatle Jville:  https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9FFEve-SAk4
neophytte:  https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kBY5fNjzn0w
neophytte:  https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=o-mlSNMFn50
neophytte:  https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YLBY4BgA9yg
TIGLJK:  That Girl She Makes Me Crazy by Jim Kenyon.   Lyrics & Chords found in the link.  https://www.chordie.com/forum/viewtopic.php?id=39106
easybeat:  https://soundcloud.com/rough-as-gut/heaters-on
Grah1:  https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mf1cs2Yz8YM

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(62 replies, posted in Featured Song of the Month)

JUNE 2023 FSOTM – WORLD, AGE, WAY, CHANGE, CAPRICIOUS, ZZZZZ

easybeat:  https://soundcloud.com/rough-as-gut/life-rolls-on
neophytte:  https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fDHerVEuDbA
Peatle:  https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h7YqhN5LGsQ     

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(7 replies, posted in Poems)

Peatle, I like that poem, so very true.  Well written.

easybeat, well written as well, and I still prefer pen and paper too lol     

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(8 replies, posted in Poems)

Well done easybeat and agree with Peatle, get some of these into book form with illustrations (you have done it before successfully) smile     

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(9 replies, posted in Poems)

Very clever all of you!  Hidden talents coming out to surface with these poems.  Keep them coming and thanks Brian for starting it off.     

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(7 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Awesome song and performance mojo.     

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(7 replies, posted in Songwriting)

I like this one jets.  I could visualize it set to a video.  I agree, enter this one in this months FSOTM smile     

Nice one mojo, great lyrics, touches the heart.

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(12 replies, posted in Songwriting)

jets60, agree with Peatle that is has a hoedown feel to this one smile  Agree with TIGLJK as well, maybe a litte bit too fast in places smile     

Hi Peatle, I was going to suggest maybe using a slide but then I see Phill already suggested that.   The only other thing apart from finger exercises would be trying some of the herbal products for arthritis.  Doterra is the best in my opinion, though expensive because they are 100% pure and natural.  A lot of the herbal stuff off the shelf these days, even from pharmacies, though herbal have synthetic stuff mixed in with them but doterra is completely natural and sourced from countries all over the world.  I love their products.  If you want to know more about their herbal products, flick me an email and I will dig out my book and see what they suggest for arthritis.     

neophytte, nice little switch with the lyrics in that line in this song.   It actually works better I thought swopping that line out (I went back and checked the original version).  Well done, the song as I said previously on the original version suits you and works well.  Nice one.     

neophytte, my feedback was for California Dreamin.    I didn't see Cheap wine so have just listened to that one.  A nice cover, you did it well and it suited you vocally and as always, played well.  The cat very chilled listening to you on the couch smile     

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(8 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

Thats fantastic, pleased for you  jjj     

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(4 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

easybeat, dang gone, you deleted b4 I had a chance to even listen to it
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(10 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

Well, I am a bit like TIGLJK, the list of road trip songs is long and very similar to your list too TIG and more.  I also loved American woman among many others. 

Mishalk good to see you joining in smile     

lol awesome Peatle, you take something so ordinary like glass recycling and make it interesting.  Love your insight into ordinary things and make them interesting.  Keep them coming.     

Peatle, there were so many lines in that song I liked and appreciated.   I thought as I listened and read the lyrics, WOW!  Simple words, simple meaning, from the heart to his lady.  I actually re-read the lyrics, loved it!  Also, Peatle aside to the actual song and lyrics, I want to congratulate you on how you not only write songs and perform them, but how you take the time and effort to put it all together with pictures. 

neophytte, thats actually quite a hard song to sing, I know as I have tried to sing it in the past.  It sounds a simple song but it's harder than you think because of how the song drops quite low in places.  I think you did a good job overall but in places in the song, maybe the chords a bit too low for your vocals.  I would be interested to hear you do this song in a different key for those low notes.  Otherwise, you sang it well and of course played it well on guitar.  Nice job.
neophytte, i enjoyed watching and listening to that one with Al on the autoharp.  Great to see you jamming with a fellow musician and what a smiling man Al is, obviously enjoying playing and singing this one with you.  I actually have a autoharp that my father gave me.  I have fiddled with it and can play it but I need to learn to play it without looking at the keys lol.  Thanks for sharing that one.

Grah1, good performance, vocals good on this one, it suited your style.  Lots of rain by the looks too. 

easybeat, that one was good, bounced along nicely, foot tapping, guitar awesome as always.

TIGLJK, you did it again, all the words!  Great song you have written again, you really do have a talent for writing songs.  I wish I was so good with words.