Topic: Please review poem "The Color"

ONE DAY I WAS WALKING ON THE STREET THAT WAS MINE

I SAW A COLOR LIKE PURPLE AND WINE

IT GREW AND TILTED AND INCIRCLED MY FACE 

I KNEW IT HAD BECOME MY TIME TO BE CHANGED   



I FELT ALL MY SENSES BEING STRECHED TO THE END

I WONDERED FOR A MOMENT THEN I FELT IN BEGIN

THE COLOR WAS TOMORROW BEFORE IT WAS LIVED

IT TOLD ME TO REMEMBER TO LOVE AND FORGIVE



AS I STOOD THERE EMPTY CONFUSED AND ALONE

I SMILED FOR THE COLOR FOUND SOME FRIENDS AND WAS GONE

THEY FILLED UP THE SKY LIKE VAN GOHH